Comments received on poems by Jenny Brav



Soul ’s Message
Neil Higgins said:

Love this Jenny.Full of imagery.
\"We are the pause in the noise that sounds like life\"
What an amazing line.Yes,really.

August 17th, 2022 03:58

Not a Poem
L. B. Mek said:

I liked your theme and wit
a wonderful read, thank you
(\'show, not tell\'
is that illusive, tag-line
of modern, artistry
but something, need not be
draped in abstracted imagery
for it to be poetic
rather, more importantly
all those ambitious
assembly line degree, \'poet\'s\'
would do wonders for their
poetic \'talent\'
if they could add a little sincerity
to their, tried and tasted
trending topic, victimology recipe;
rather, sincerity
that is accessibly genuine
and authentically relatable
not manufactured for effect
yeah
we can tell the difference...)


August 12th, 2022 03:09

Not a Poem
orchidee said:

A good non-poem Jenny. lol.

August 12th, 2022 01:46

The Unlearning
Paul Bell said:

I sometimes think fear is passed down to the next generation coming up. It\'s only really when you break things down, you learn the true meaning of life. Love is out there just waiting.

August 10th, 2022 09:07

Falling Under Life’s Radar
tallisman said:

We all think we want t be under the radar…but then we post on SM! Good write, thanks!

August 9th, 2022 02:58