Comments received on poems by m.xsm
Loneliness
Crumb :] said:
I am in awe at how you describe loneliness. It\'s so true and can not be described better. You\'ll go far, mate. This is a masterpiece
August 9th, 2022 07:57
Crumb :] said:
I am in awe at how you describe loneliness. It\'s so true and can not be described better. You\'ll go far, mate. This is a masterpiece
August 9th, 2022 07:57
Unrequited love
Crumb :] said:
Oh my god, this is such a lovely poem! And the fact that it\'s your second one makes it more impressive. This is what I mean when I say I would like to write. You\'ve described it so beautifully. I can never get tired of reading it again and again. Well done! Can\'t wait to read more work of yours
August 9th, 2022 07:55
Crumb :] said:
Oh my god, this is such a lovely poem! And the fact that it\'s your second one makes it more impressive. This is what I mean when I say I would like to write. You\'ve described it so beautifully. I can never get tired of reading it again and again. Well done! Can\'t wait to read more work of yours
August 9th, 2022 07:55
Loneliness
Shruti64 said:
loneliness, an indescribable pain
all your struggles in this go vain
no one can feel how hurt you are
You are a part of this war
but never have to feel alone
cuz everyone is going through the same.
Wish I had a clown
I could have slept forever from the reality
escaping from this tragedy
August 9th, 2022 02:56
Shruti64 said:
loneliness, an indescribable pain
all your struggles in this go vain
no one can feel how hurt you are
You are a part of this war
but never have to feel alone
cuz everyone is going through the same.
Wish I had a clown
I could have slept forever from the reality
escaping from this tragedy
August 9th, 2022 02:56
Loneliness
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned m.xsm. Practice makes perfect, and you\'re well on your way. Keep that pen wet. 😁
August 8th, 2022 06:06
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned m.xsm. Practice makes perfect, and you\'re well on your way. Keep that pen wet. 😁
August 8th, 2022 06:06
Loneliness
jazzwa30 said:
I love it maybe having some sentences should be standalone.
If that was your first time that was amazing!! I love the similies and metaphors because loneliness is a parasite thanks for the read!!
August 7th, 2022 10:56
jazzwa30 said:
I love it maybe having some sentences should be standalone.
If that was your first time that was amazing!! I love the similies and metaphors because loneliness is a parasite thanks for the read!!
August 7th, 2022 10:56
