Comments received on poems by Diana .
Losing Me ...
Cheeky Missy said:
Very disarming in its expression, winsome and poignant, saying what countless [selfishly] feel too keenly.
I\'d only beg to differ a tad with your conclusion since I\'ve found all whom interact with me and I with them add or leave a flavor which makes my world the richer.
August 25th, 2024 19:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Very disarming in its expression, winsome and poignant, saying what countless [selfishly] feel too keenly.
I\'d only beg to differ a tad with your conclusion since I\'ve found all whom interact with me and I with them add or leave a flavor which makes my world the richer.
August 25th, 2024 19:31
Losing Me ...
BlessedbyGod said:
Never even give them a thought my dear, they don’t deserve you or your tears or thoughts.
Great job and very emotional
August 25th, 2024 19:27
BlessedbyGod said:
Never even give them a thought my dear, they don’t deserve you or your tears or thoughts.
Great job and very emotional
August 25th, 2024 19:27
Losing Me ...
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful write. There is so much pain here. Where we break, we grow stronger. Such heartfelt expression. A wonderful poem.
August 21st, 2024 14:44
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful write. There is so much pain here. Where we break, we grow stronger. Such heartfelt expression. A wonderful poem.
August 21st, 2024 14:44
Blame is on Me
kwrites said:
I think the idea behind the poem is extremely well written.
August 12th, 2024 09:10
kwrites said:
I think the idea behind the poem is extremely well written.
August 12th, 2024 09:10
Blame is on Me
rrodriguez said:
Don\'t blame yourself, things happen. It\'s not your fault. Be gentle to yourself and be happy.
August 11th, 2024 02:42
rrodriguez said:
Don\'t blame yourself, things happen. It\'s not your fault. Be gentle to yourself and be happy.
August 11th, 2024 02:42
Blame is on Me
Glasswing said:
Love this! It truly captures what I\'ve been experiencing recently.
August 10th, 2024 19:12
Glasswing said:
Love this! It truly captures what I\'ve been experiencing recently.
August 10th, 2024 19:12
Losing Me ...
fire_fly said:
So far, my favorite poem youve written.
Playing a game with such an end... Tha hard part is always trying to move on.
August 5th, 2024 06:56
fire_fly said:
So far, my favorite poem youve written.
Playing a game with such an end... Tha hard part is always trying to move on.
August 5th, 2024 06:56
Losing Me ...
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Diana, I liked \'Losing Me\'. Thanks for the invite to connect. It would be nice if you could take a look at the poem I published and let me know your thoughts.
August 3rd, 2024 09:52
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Diana, I liked \'Losing Me\'. Thanks for the invite to connect. It would be nice if you could take a look at the poem I published and let me know your thoughts.
August 3rd, 2024 09:52
Losing Me ...
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Diana, I liked \'Losing Me\'. Thanks for the invite to connect. It would be nice if you could take a look at the poem I published and let me know your thoughts.
August 3rd, 2024 09:52
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Diana, I liked \'Losing Me\'. Thanks for the invite to connect. It would be nice if you could take a look at the poem I published and let me know your thoughts.
August 3rd, 2024 09:52
There are many reasons ...
Annemarie said:
There are so many reasons to live! You will be amazed and have fantastic times. I totally understand feeling this way, too, at times. Feeling on the outside, not fitting in, a nonentity, too. Realize that you have so much to offer those around you. Realize your small, positive impacts on others can be the world for them. Sending love and peace.
August 2nd, 2024 14:14
Annemarie said:
There are so many reasons to live! You will be amazed and have fantastic times. I totally understand feeling this way, too, at times. Feeling on the outside, not fitting in, a nonentity, too. Realize that you have so much to offer those around you. Realize your small, positive impacts on others can be the world for them. Sending love and peace.
August 2nd, 2024 14:14
There are many reasons ...
Framed Mirror said:
Reasons differs and matters... and behind each of them many more reasons are attached. Closely knitted! Nice work!
August 2nd, 2024 05:22
Framed Mirror said:
Reasons differs and matters... and behind each of them many more reasons are attached. Closely knitted! Nice work!
August 2nd, 2024 05:22
Blame is on Me
NinjaGirl said:
Often we prefer to believe the blame is on ourselves. This way, we feel as if we were in control of the situation, even if we weren\'t. I have felt this way as well. \"It\'s my fault\" is another way of saying \"I knew what was happening and I could have done something different but I chose not to,\" even if that\'s not the case. The hardest part is accepting that it wasn\'t your fault, and there is nothing you could have done.
August 1st, 2024 18:22
NinjaGirl said:
Often we prefer to believe the blame is on ourselves. This way, we feel as if we were in control of the situation, even if we weren\'t. I have felt this way as well. \"It\'s my fault\" is another way of saying \"I knew what was happening and I could have done something different but I chose not to,\" even if that\'s not the case. The hardest part is accepting that it wasn\'t your fault, and there is nothing you could have done.
August 1st, 2024 18:22
Losing Me ...
Thoughtless said:
You haven\'t written anything for a while. Looking forward to more.
August 1st, 2024 17:21
Thoughtless said:
You haven\'t written anything for a while. Looking forward to more.
August 1st, 2024 17:21
Losing Me ...
John Lee said:
With each loss, you\'re being pruned to be a stronger, more independent person. It\'s good to see you expressing it beautifully!
August 1st, 2024 15:35
John Lee said:
With each loss, you\'re being pruned to be a stronger, more independent person. It\'s good to see you expressing it beautifully!
August 1st, 2024 15:35
Losing Me ...
Bobby O said:
That last line really hits home. If somedoby were to write a book they still couldn’t give me more info or tell THAT story any better.
Many pripsv
August 1st, 2024 07:41
Bobby O said:
That last line really hits home. If somedoby were to write a book they still couldn’t give me more info or tell THAT story any better.
Many pripsv
August 1st, 2024 07:41
Blame is on Me
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
It reminded me of an old memory. Really loved the poem.
August 1st, 2024 05:22
EmotionsOnwhitepaper said:
It reminded me of an old memory. Really loved the poem.
August 1st, 2024 05:22
Losing Me ...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Diana, your poem \'The Game\' is a raw and honest portrayal of a painful relationship. Your use of simple, direct language makes the emotional impact even stronger. The way you contrast the actions and feelings of both parties really highlights the imbalance in the relationship. The progression from enduring the \'game\' to finally accepting its end is powerful and relatable. Your final stanza, especially the last two lines, perfectly captures the heartbreaking realization that often comes at the end of such relationships. Thank you for sharing this deeply personal and moving piece.
July 31st, 2024 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Diana, your poem \'The Game\' is a raw and honest portrayal of a painful relationship. Your use of simple, direct language makes the emotional impact even stronger. The way you contrast the actions and feelings of both parties really highlights the imbalance in the relationship. The progression from enduring the \'game\' to finally accepting its end is powerful and relatable. Your final stanza, especially the last two lines, perfectly captures the heartbreaking realization that often comes at the end of such relationships. Thank you for sharing this deeply personal and moving piece.
July 31st, 2024 09:32
Losing Me ...
2781 said:
Without knowing the situation It\'s open to interpretation..
I am only guessing what is fact-
But getting out seemed a better bet.
July 30th, 2024 19:49
2781 said:
Without knowing the situation It\'s open to interpretation..
I am only guessing what is fact-
But getting out seemed a better bet.
July 30th, 2024 19:49
It was my fault. Wasn\'t it?
2781 said:
For if we would judge ourselves, we should not be judged.
July 30th, 2024 16:44
2781 said:
For if we would judge ourselves, we should not be judged.
July 30th, 2024 16:44
INFINITE?
2781 said:
I found nothing was wasted...
For his anger endures for a moment; in his favour is life: weeping may endure for a night, but joy cometh in the morning.
July 30th, 2024 16:35
2781 said:
I found nothing was wasted...
For his anger endures for a moment; in his favour is life: weeping may endure for a night, but joy cometh in the morning.
July 30th, 2024 16:35
There are many reasons ...
2781 said:
Death and life are in the power of the tongue:
July 30th, 2024 16:26
2781 said:
Death and life are in the power of the tongue:
July 30th, 2024 16:26
INFINITE?
poetryismusic said:
This truly captures the experience of depression. Well done.
July 30th, 2024 15:26
poetryismusic said:
This truly captures the experience of depression. Well done.
July 30th, 2024 15:26
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