Comments received on poems by Diana .
Losing Me ...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Diana, your poem \'The Game\' is a raw and honest portrayal of a painful relationship. Your use of simple, direct language makes the emotional impact even stronger. The way you contrast the actions and feelings of both parties really highlights the imbalance in the relationship. The progression from enduring the \'game\' to finally accepting its end is powerful and relatable. Your final stanza, especially the last two lines, perfectly captures the heartbreaking realization that often comes at the end of such relationships. Thank you for sharing this deeply personal and moving piece.
July 31st, 2024 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Diana, your poem \'The Game\' is a raw and honest portrayal of a painful relationship. Your use of simple, direct language makes the emotional impact even stronger. The way you contrast the actions and feelings of both parties really highlights the imbalance in the relationship. The progression from enduring the \'game\' to finally accepting its end is powerful and relatable. Your final stanza, especially the last two lines, perfectly captures the heartbreaking realization that often comes at the end of such relationships. Thank you for sharing this deeply personal and moving piece.
July 31st, 2024 09:32
Losing Me ...
2781 said:
Without knowing the situation It\'s open to interpretation..
I am only guessing what is fact-
But getting out seemed a better bet.
July 30th, 2024 19:49
2781 said:
Without knowing the situation It\'s open to interpretation..
I am only guessing what is fact-
But getting out seemed a better bet.
July 30th, 2024 19:49
It was my fault. Wasn\'t it?
2781 said:
For if we would judge ourselves, we should not be judged.
July 30th, 2024 16:44
2781 said:
For if we would judge ourselves, we should not be judged.
July 30th, 2024 16:44
INFINITE?
2781 said:
I found nothing was wasted...
For his anger endures for a moment; in his favour is life: weeping may endure for a night, but joy cometh in the morning.
July 30th, 2024 16:35
2781 said:
I found nothing was wasted...
For his anger endures for a moment; in his favour is life: weeping may endure for a night, but joy cometh in the morning.
July 30th, 2024 16:35
There are many reasons ...
2781 said:
Death and life are in the power of the tongue:
July 30th, 2024 16:26
2781 said:
Death and life are in the power of the tongue:
July 30th, 2024 16:26
INFINITE?
poetryismusic said:
This truly captures the experience of depression. Well done.
July 30th, 2024 15:26
poetryismusic said:
This truly captures the experience of depression. Well done.
July 30th, 2024 15:26
Losing Me ...
aDarkerMind said:
a touching write,
and I fully understand every word.
June 2nd, 2024 12:42
aDarkerMind said:
a touching write,
and I fully understand every word.
June 2nd, 2024 12:42
It was my fault. Wasn\'t it?
Neville said:
You really should learn to love and like yourself a little bit more .. I am glad I dared to venture this way and feel sure I shall return to your ink .. perhaps .. All Good Things, Neville
May 7th, 2024 01:23
Neville said:
You really should learn to love and like yourself a little bit more .. I am glad I dared to venture this way and feel sure I shall return to your ink .. perhaps .. All Good Things, Neville
May 7th, 2024 01:23
There are many reasons ...
L. B. Mek said:
what a potent talent you possesses
young poet
a genuine delight to read your raw honesty,
thank you for choosing to share
soar high, butterfly
pain is inevitable, but those scars
add, to our beautiful...
August 28th, 2023 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
what a potent talent you possesses
young poet
a genuine delight to read your raw honesty,
thank you for choosing to share
soar high, butterfly
pain is inevitable, but those scars
add, to our beautiful...
August 28th, 2023 04:15
It was my fault. Wasn\'t it?
Jane Frye said:
When I was a child, I had a really bad day at school. When I got home, my Nonna was sitting outside watching honeybees buzzing around a plant in our backyard. I went and sat next to her with a heavy heart. We both sat in silence for what seemed like a long time watching the bees. Finally, my Nonna broke the silence and said in broken English, \"The honeybee can make honey from even the bitterest of flowers. You be like the honeybee.\"
January 8th, 2023 23:21
Jane Frye said:
When I was a child, I had a really bad day at school. When I got home, my Nonna was sitting outside watching honeybees buzzing around a plant in our backyard. I went and sat next to her with a heavy heart. We both sat in silence for what seemed like a long time watching the bees. Finally, my Nonna broke the silence and said in broken English, \"The honeybee can make honey from even the bitterest of flowers. You be like the honeybee.\"
January 8th, 2023 23:21
It was my fault. Wasn\'t it?
Jeannie said:
I can relate to your poem. I feel that way often.
January 8th, 2023 15:03
Jeannie said:
I can relate to your poem. I feel that way often.
January 8th, 2023 15:03
Blame is on Me
Goddess of the Mist said:
I can relate to this poem very much! Nice expression.
January 7th, 2023 22:31
Goddess of the Mist said:
I can relate to this poem very much! Nice expression.
January 7th, 2023 22:31
It was my fault. Wasn\'t it?
Bella Shepard said:
The irony of fault is that it can lie on both sides, even if we choose not to see it. So much easier to beat yourself up than to accept a fault in another. Been there and done that. You have the wonderful gift of words to express yourself, explore all that you are. Keep writing!
January 6th, 2023 10:55
Bella Shepard said:
The irony of fault is that it can lie on both sides, even if we choose not to see it. So much easier to beat yourself up than to accept a fault in another. Been there and done that. You have the wonderful gift of words to express yourself, explore all that you are. Keep writing!
January 6th, 2023 10:55
INFINITE?
Bella Shepard said:
\"The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune \"are all too painful and indiscriminate in life, and there are those who suffer more than their share. Your poem takes a solid punch at those slings and arrows, lays them out and hopefully gives some relief in the telling. A good write dear poet, keep writing it out until it is spent.
January 6th, 2023 10:44
Bella Shepard said:
\"The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune \"are all too painful and indiscriminate in life, and there are those who suffer more than their share. Your poem takes a solid punch at those slings and arrows, lays them out and hopefully gives some relief in the telling. A good write dear poet, keep writing it out until it is spent.
January 6th, 2023 10:44
INFINITE?
mary.soft said:
Wow, that is written so sharp felt like a cut was made on my heart by your words. It`s really resonates with my mind right now, felt seen and for that thank you.
Wish you to find your peace, hope it`s close to you
October 4th, 2022 05:16
mary.soft said:
Wow, that is written so sharp felt like a cut was made on my heart by your words. It`s really resonates with my mind right now, felt seen and for that thank you.
Wish you to find your peace, hope it`s close to you
October 4th, 2022 05:16
Blame is on Me
L. B. Mek said:
what if the word
Blame
was made extinct
and the world empathetically
accepted
that people were just living
their life
doing the best they can!
... guess, we can but dream
if only!
thanks for sharing, stay Strong
August 22nd, 2022 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
what if the word
Blame
was made extinct
and the world empathetically
accepted
that people were just living
their life
doing the best they can!
... guess, we can but dream
if only!
thanks for sharing, stay Strong
August 22nd, 2022 03:48
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