All this time, we've been playing this game,
You act like you care, I act like I believe.
'Cause I don't like to explain and you like to blame,
I must accept all that pain that you give.
Every time I try to move on, you make me feel sorry,
Now you're in a better space, but I can't find mine.
I'm dying in the darkness, but you don't even worry,
You enjoy your life, knowing you ruined mine.
And now, this is the end of this game,
Now I accept it, finally,
You'll never risk losing them,
But you're not even afraid of losing me.
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Author:
Diana (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: All those people who lost me, lost forever ...
- Category: Sad
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a touching write,
and I fully understand every word.
Thank you ...!
Sounds like a wise move
I dont understand what you mean,can you explain,pls?
Without knowing the situation It's open to interpretation..
I am only guessing what is fact-
But getting out seemed a better bet.
Diana, your poem 'The Game' is a raw and honest portrayal of a painful relationship. Your use of simple, direct language makes the emotional impact even stronger. The way you contrast the actions and feelings of both parties really highlights the imbalance in the relationship. The progression from enduring the 'game' to finally accepting its end is powerful and relatable. Your final stanza, especially the last two lines, perfectly captures the heartbreaking realization that often comes at the end of such relationships. Thank you for sharing this deeply personal and moving piece.
Thank you so much for your opinion.It motivates me to write new poems and share my feelings.😊
beautiful !
amazing word combination
Thank you so much 😊
That last line really hits home. If somedoby were to write a book they still couldn’t give me more info or tell THAT story any better.
Many pripsv
I'm really exited to read this.thank you so much
With each loss, you're being pruned to be a stronger, more independent person. It's good to see you expressing it beautifully!
Just becouse we're writers,we dont cry,we just erite a new poem.
Our tears are but ink droplets on a page.
You haven't written anything for a while. Looking forward to more.
I have a lot of unfinished poems,I hope I'll finish and publish them soon
Please do.
Nicely crafted!
Thanks
So relatable! Thank you for sharing.
🥰
Love it
❤️
Hi Diana, I liked 'Losing Me'. Thanks for the invite to connect. It would be nice if you could take a look at the poem I published and let me know your thoughts.
Hi Diana, I liked 'Losing Me'. Thanks for the invite to connect. It would be nice if you could take a look at the poem I published and let me know your thoughts.
So far, my favorite poem youve written.
Playing a game with such an end... Tha hard part is always trying to move on.
😊
Great,
A beautiful write. There is so much pain here. Where we break, we grow stronger. Such heartfelt expression. A wonderful poem.
Thank you so much.This poem is my favourite ...
Never even give them a thought my dear, they don’t deserve you or your tears or thoughts.
Great job and very emotional
Thank you
Very disarming in its expression, winsome and poignant, saying what countless [selfishly] feel too keenly.
I'd only beg to differ a tad with your conclusion since I've found all whom interact with me and I with them add or leave a flavor which makes my world the richer.
Thank you ..!
Quite relatable!! I am at very stage of letting it all go so this poem really came to me, beautiful poem!!
Thank you so much
This is sad and raw. It is about a failed relationship. The problem is all relationships fail sooner or later. Well written. I particularly like the cadance and the rhyme.
Thank you so much ...
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