Comments received on poems by shaa



Let it be
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

Beautifully done!

September 6th, 2022 06:26

Let it be
Paul Bell said:

Sometimes the love you can\'t have is better than the love you already have.
Plus, it makes life exciting.

September 6th, 2022 05:02

Let it be
Thekkinkkattil said:

A structured poem of love and poem

September 5th, 2022 21:14

Let it be
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful expression of young love and passion.

September 5th, 2022 18:44

I want You!
Neville said:



what a great introduction to your ink ..

Neville :)


September 4th, 2022 03:52

Today
Dr. Soma said:

Nice.What a feeling!
You steal my mind and hold it hostage. Too good.

September 3rd, 2022 07:03

Dancing with a stranger
MendedFences27 said:

Oh Oh, sounds like primal attraction. You\'ve expressed this attraction in a beautiful way. Your closing line is introspective, and this, for the reader, raises the plane of thought, and adds to the power of your poem. A couple of lines that I enjoyed: \"your eyes speak to me\" and \"They invite me to a dangerous game.\" I thought them inventive and power points in your poem. I Enjoyed the read.- Phil A.

September 2nd, 2022 19:01

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