Comments received on poems by shaa
Mood
Esteven said:
I love the poem,especially the first stanza,I think it\'s very creative
October 26th, 2022 08:57
Esteven said:
I love the poem,especially the first stanza,I think it\'s very creative
October 26th, 2022 08:57
Doubt
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
You pose great questions. I am sure many of us feel the same. Nice work.
October 11th, 2022 17:48
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
You pose great questions. I am sure many of us feel the same. Nice work.
October 11th, 2022 17:48
Days like these
darknessandlight said:
The struggle is very real, this I know. The fear of reaching out and having all you feel dashed into nothingness or taking the gamble and seeing if you hit the jackpot. I know how hard that back and forth can be, and I hope one day you will reach out and let them know. I thought I would be devastated when it got wiped into nothingness but honestly, it took so much off my mind, heart, and soul that the pain while it stung wasn\'t as a crushing abyss.
October 4th, 2022 07:04
darknessandlight said:
The struggle is very real, this I know. The fear of reaching out and having all you feel dashed into nothingness or taking the gamble and seeing if you hit the jackpot. I know how hard that back and forth can be, and I hope one day you will reach out and let them know. I thought I would be devastated when it got wiped into nothingness but honestly, it took so much off my mind, heart, and soul that the pain while it stung wasn\'t as a crushing abyss.
October 4th, 2022 07:04
Sugar rush
darknessandlight said:
I love this and I believe you have just given me, my new question if I ever decide that I want to be involved with someone again.
October 4th, 2022 07:00
darknessandlight said:
I love this and I believe you have just given me, my new question if I ever decide that I want to be involved with someone again.
October 4th, 2022 07:00
The Reading
darknessandlight said:
Keep writing that book, no matter the circumstances, all of relationships add to the depth and color and I am glad that I here to get to see it written
October 4th, 2022 06:57
darknessandlight said:
Keep writing that book, no matter the circumstances, all of relationships add to the depth and color and I am glad that I here to get to see it written
October 4th, 2022 06:57
Attraction
darknessandlight said:
This is beautiful and so very relatable in so many ways. Keep at unraveling, until it is set in stone that there is nothing there keep up hoping.
October 4th, 2022 06:54
darknessandlight said:
This is beautiful and so very relatable in so many ways. Keep at unraveling, until it is set in stone that there is nothing there keep up hoping.
October 4th, 2022 06:54
Sugar rush
a thousand wishes said:
A funny and very lovely poem i completely relate! lol
September 29th, 2022 12:45
a thousand wishes said:
A funny and very lovely poem i completely relate! lol
September 29th, 2022 12:45
Vigil
darknessandlight said:
Definitely reach out, I did just that today and though it is something that I\'m not sure about still, it has at least given me some clarification and some peace of mind. I feel all the hurt and all the pain coming from this acutely as until very recently this was me as well.
September 27th, 2022 22:43
darknessandlight said:
Definitely reach out, I did just that today and though it is something that I\'m not sure about still, it has at least given me some clarification and some peace of mind. I feel all the hurt and all the pain coming from this acutely as until very recently this was me as well.
September 27th, 2022 22:43
Mood
Poetic Dan said:
A beautiful hard read that I felt with every breath inside me...
Thanks for sharing
September 25th, 2022 14:57
Poetic Dan said:
A beautiful hard read that I felt with every breath inside me...
Thanks for sharing
September 25th, 2022 14:57
Vigil
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Reach out! I can feel the pain in the writing.
September 23rd, 2022 17:01
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Reach out! I can feel the pain in the writing.
September 23rd, 2022 17:01
Monday market
Neville said:
You can beat an egg & a drum of course .. but you can\'t beat a decent pineapple or code can ya .. You can of course break them both though .. an intriguing concept well poemed .............. *#++^##!x
September 22nd, 2022 02:15
Neville said:
You can beat an egg & a drum of course .. but you can\'t beat a decent pineapple or code can ya .. You can of course break them both though .. an intriguing concept well poemed .............. *#++^##!x
September 22nd, 2022 02:15
Can\'t listen
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I agree. Songs can bring back happy or not-so-happy memories. Great idea for a poem. Done very well.
September 20th, 2022 16:56
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I agree. Songs can bring back happy or not-so-happy memories. Great idea for a poem. Done very well.
September 20th, 2022 16:56
Can\'t listen
sonnie said:
The thing about music is that the lyrics always hold memories within them. I love how relatable this poem is. There are songs that I used to love, but now have to skip over because they remind me of people that I do not wish to think about.
September 20th, 2022 12:05
sonnie said:
The thing about music is that the lyrics always hold memories within them. I love how relatable this poem is. There are songs that I used to love, but now have to skip over because they remind me of people that I do not wish to think about.
September 20th, 2022 12:05
Toons
darknessandlight said:
This is so awesome!!! I love it, especially how you tied in all the cartoons.
September 13th, 2022 22:14
darknessandlight said:
This is so awesome!!! I love it, especially how you tied in all the cartoons.
September 13th, 2022 22:14
Monday market
darknessandlight said:
This is simply awesome, I love the coded meaning and how well you put this together. Keep up the awesome work
September 12th, 2022 22:06
darknessandlight said:
This is simply awesome, I love the coded meaning and how well you put this together. Keep up the awesome work
September 12th, 2022 22:06
Karani
Kimani said:
Your swahili is on another level, Mine\'s corrupted by sheng, I had to get a kamusi for this one, lol.
One word Beautiful.
September 12th, 2022 04:06
Kimani said:
Your swahili is on another level, Mine\'s corrupted by sheng, I had to get a kamusi for this one, lol.
One word Beautiful.
September 12th, 2022 04:06
Thief
Jeannie said:
I really love your work, You show your feelings so well in your writing.
September 11th, 2022 15:12
Jeannie said:
I really love your work, You show your feelings so well in your writing.
September 11th, 2022 15:12
Going back
darknessandlight said:
Completely relatable. It is so beautiful and speaks volumes about not just love and the desire of, but also the loss of said love. ❤
September 11th, 2022 08:29
darknessandlight said:
Completely relatable. It is so beautiful and speaks volumes about not just love and the desire of, but also the loss of said love. ❤
September 11th, 2022 08:29
Drop the book
itsdollyg said:
I\'m so happy to have stumbled upon your page! This is so good and I felt every line of it
September 10th, 2022 16:36
itsdollyg said:
I\'m so happy to have stumbled upon your page! This is so good and I felt every line of it
September 10th, 2022 16:36
Drop the book
jenny.g said:
I took a look at your work. Your words are addictive. I can’t stop drinking them in
September 10th, 2022 13:15
jenny.g said:
I took a look at your work. Your words are addictive. I can’t stop drinking them in
September 10th, 2022 13:15
Karani
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Your voice and poem are beautiful.
September 10th, 2022 10:09
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Your voice and poem are beautiful.
September 10th, 2022 10:09
Karani
Dr. Soma said:
It\'s touchy. Moreover, I liked you wrote it in your language Swahili. My language is Bengali. And I always love my language to speak and write.
খুব ভালো। Which means too good. Good luck.
September 10th, 2022 09:24
Dr. Soma said:
It\'s touchy. Moreover, I liked you wrote it in your language Swahili. My language is Bengali. And I always love my language to speak and write.
খুব ভালো। Which means too good. Good luck.
September 10th, 2022 09:24
Silence
a thousand wishes said:
I love this one, very emotional and relatable
September 8th, 2022 08:08
a thousand wishes said:
I love this one, very emotional and relatable
September 8th, 2022 08:08
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