Comments received on poems by Kimani



The Old Shepherd
shaa said:

😢 sad

September 29th, 2022 10:21

Tired
shaa said:

Aaaah🤦 talk of the swings😣😭 very relatable

September 28th, 2022 15:07

Tired
Muguna said:

Nice and minimalistic. Full of the feeling. Lacks emotion.

September 28th, 2022 05:41

The Calamity.
Hakikur Rahman said:

Looks like a satire, but in reality it happens to some families. Good imagination.

September 22nd, 2022 01:43

I saw a rabbit up a tree
shaa said:

Was waiting to hear what the rabbit said, perhaps invite you for tea😅

September 17th, 2022 12:46

The Calamity.
shaa said:

Reading this took me back to a scenario, very vivid. I like it

September 16th, 2022 10:25

The Strange Woman
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

No, I think you can always ask a question. Doesn\'t matter what one might think about your asking it. They just may welcome the conversation, but nice job on the poem. :)

September 14th, 2022 17:34

The Strange Woman
Raven333 said:

What a great little write, it made me smile as I read and your rhyme was very tight.. enjoyed

September 14th, 2022 14:57

The Strange Woman
Doggerel Dave said:

Approached with some trepidation, given the title - I did find this fun. I hope you continue to contribute here....Let\'s hear more about you.

September 14th, 2022 05:00

Ever loved someone\\\\\\\'s Daughter?
shaa said:

Might I be that someone\'s daughter 😅, beautiful to say the least. I enjoyed this piece

September 10th, 2022 11:10

IF PEACE WERE
Raven333 said:

Absolutely write, I do believe you said it at the end.. clever write my fellow poet.

September 9th, 2022 21:04

IF PEACE WERE
shaa said:

Beautiful piece, nicely penned

September 9th, 2022 15:48