Comments received on poems by Brokenmasculity
I am the Lord of the Crows
vicecream said:
love how you can just feeeel the narrorator wrestling and fighting against his fate and then that moment he gives into it and lets himself be consumed by his fate.. thrilling write
September 6th, 2024 13:03
vicecream said:
love how you can just feeeel the narrorator wrestling and fighting against his fate and then that moment he gives into it and lets himself be consumed by his fate.. thrilling write
September 6th, 2024 13:03
In Loves Eyes
Nethra said:
This poem makes me feel a whirlpool of emotions. Beautifully written ✨
July 8th, 2023 23:59
Nethra said:
This poem makes me feel a whirlpool of emotions. Beautifully written ✨
July 8th, 2023 23:59
The Flag bearer and The Bagpipe
Bobby O said:
I liked it. I had to fight to stay with it. IMO most just won’t stay with the length because the length is forbidding. I mean it’s three times as long as I expected. Folks might not pay the hard work you’ve out in its proper due. Just sayin .
July 7th, 2023 18:01
Bobby O said:
I liked it. I had to fight to stay with it. IMO most just won’t stay with the length because the length is forbidding. I mean it’s three times as long as I expected. Folks might not pay the hard work you’ve out in its proper due. Just sayin .
July 7th, 2023 18:01
In Loves Eyes
shaa said:
This poem is nothing short of spectacular, while reading I was thinking how long it must have taken to write something this beautiful 😍. The lines draw me in, personally I don\'t like long poetry but this here is a game changer. I\'m encouraged if not challenged. I love how vivid it is and the commentary is just the cherry on top. I love this truly
September 15th, 2022 09:55
shaa said:
This poem is nothing short of spectacular, while reading I was thinking how long it must have taken to write something this beautiful 😍. The lines draw me in, personally I don\'t like long poetry but this here is a game changer. I\'m encouraged if not challenged. I love how vivid it is and the commentary is just the cherry on top. I love this truly
September 15th, 2022 09:55
