Comments received on poems by Esteven
Crowned Jewel
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem putting the crown in the right perspective. Here in Brazil there is an interesting history. When ruled by Portugal Dom Pedro the king he saw that he would loose power and therefore told his son to head the rebellion so that the power would stay in the family. When the time came he abdicated giving power to his son head of the rebellion. His son now king, his brother head of Brazilian colony declared independence and both brothers kept the crown in the family. They say the best form of government is a munificent monarch.
July 4th, 2026 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem putting the crown in the right perspective. Here in Brazil there is an interesting history. When ruled by Portugal Dom Pedro the king he saw that he would loose power and therefore told his son to head the rebellion so that the power would stay in the family. When the time came he abdicated giving power to his son head of the rebellion. His son now king, his brother head of Brazilian colony declared independence and both brothers kept the crown in the family. They say the best form of government is a munificent monarch.
July 4th, 2026 12:42
A Teacher
jarcher54 said:
Sweet little tribute to teachers... very clever and succinct. I appreciate how you let the simple words speak for themselves... no commentary necessary.
February 7th, 2023 23:05
jarcher54 said:
Sweet little tribute to teachers... very clever and succinct. I appreciate how you let the simple words speak for themselves... no commentary necessary.
February 7th, 2023 23:05
Golden Raindrops
arqios said:
There is this thing about rain and the cycling of moisture on the earth that brings hope and a constancy that can bring a reliability if only the seasons and the rains along with it are more constant and mild. Thanks for sharing.
September 23rd, 2022 00:58
arqios said:
There is this thing about rain and the cycling of moisture on the earth that brings hope and a constancy that can bring a reliability if only the seasons and the rains along with it are more constant and mild. Thanks for sharing.
September 23rd, 2022 00:58
Tonight the Sky has Eyes
shaa said:
Thought the first one was beautiful but this one is just amazing 🤩. I think you have more in store for us cant wait to read more of your work
September 20th, 2022 14:06
shaa said:
Thought the first one was beautiful but this one is just amazing 🤩. I think you have more in store for us cant wait to read more of your work
September 20th, 2022 14:06
Tonight the Sky has Eyes
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Love that, especially the last verse.
September 19th, 2022 17:09
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Love that, especially the last verse.
September 19th, 2022 17:09
In Love with the Moon
shaa said:
I agree with you Katherine on the allegory. its a lovely write indeed, what a way to start your ink. I like it
September 19th, 2022 14:01
shaa said:
I agree with you Katherine on the allegory. its a lovely write indeed, what a way to start your ink. I like it
September 19th, 2022 14:01
In Love with the Moon
skpearl said:
That\'s lovely, I love how the moon can be an allegory for someone unreachable, someone so great that our love feels small in comparisation. Great work!
September 19th, 2022 13:16
skpearl said:
That\'s lovely, I love how the moon can be an allegory for someone unreachable, someone so great that our love feels small in comparisation. Great work!
September 19th, 2022 13:16
