Comments received on poems by ft.mysafeplace
What Was Mine.
L. B. Mek said:
we can but hope, time rewards your resolve
and a new root of self-belief
will be planted from your cruel experience
and thus, phoenix
new buds of reinforced volition
to insure, when Next
the world hears your words
Loud n Proud
forget ears, the mountains themselves
will heed your Voice!
(forgive me, dear poet
if my attempt at encouraging positivity
comes across as toxic or hollow,
sadly
these words were all I hide to offer
so that I don\'t just simply read and flick past
the Bravery I laud in your work)
October 31st, 2022 06:48
L. B. Mek said:
we can but hope, time rewards your resolve
and a new root of self-belief
will be planted from your cruel experience
and thus, phoenix
new buds of reinforced volition
to insure, when Next
the world hears your words
Loud n Proud
forget ears, the mountains themselves
will heed your Voice!
(forgive me, dear poet
if my attempt at encouraging positivity
comes across as toxic or hollow,
sadly
these words were all I hide to offer
so that I don\'t just simply read and flick past
the Bravery I laud in your work)
October 31st, 2022 06:48
My Depression
Rocky Lagou said:
\"It is more of a person,
Almost a friend...\"
Jeez, that hit deep.
As a person who suffers with depression myself I can say that you truly delineated such an intense sensation. I hope you can learn to appreciate life more, it took me a while, but I accomplished. So I believe you can too
October 26th, 2022 13:11
Rocky Lagou said:
\"It is more of a person,
Almost a friend...\"
Jeez, that hit deep.
As a person who suffers with depression myself I can say that you truly delineated such an intense sensation. I hope you can learn to appreciate life more, it took me a while, but I accomplished. So I believe you can too
October 26th, 2022 13:11
Are You Okay?
Rainbow said:
I do not like being asked how are you or are you ok either for many reasons . Good expression of feelings
October 24th, 2022 16:34
Rainbow said:
I do not like being asked how are you or are you ok either for many reasons . Good expression of feelings
October 24th, 2022 16:34