Comments received on poems by Sebastian
Inside My Dreams
Poetic Licence said:
This a incredibly powerful write around the struggles and pains around the heart and wanting of love. Raw and emotional write with very powerful last two lines.
February 10th, 2025 07:00
Poetic Licence said:
This a incredibly powerful write around the struggles and pains around the heart and wanting of love. Raw and emotional write with very powerful last two lines.
February 10th, 2025 07:00
Inside My Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
Heavy words for a desire that none can fulfill. We wish the love of others but none control the hearts of others. Our own heart a prisoner of its desires stands alone unheard by any but ourselves. The last two lines have crushing weight and a a crown to this poem.
February 10th, 2025 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
Heavy words for a desire that none can fulfill. We wish the love of others but none control the hearts of others. Our own heart a prisoner of its desires stands alone unheard by any but ourselves. The last two lines have crushing weight and a a crown to this poem.
February 10th, 2025 05:53
A Rope
2781 said:
\"Then will I confess to you that your own right hand can save you.\"
February 16th, 2023 07:10
2781 said:
\"Then will I confess to you that your own right hand can save you.\"
February 16th, 2023 07:10
The Singular Tear.
arqios said:
Sometimes a single tear is all that it takes to make a tear in the fabric of the cosmos. Love does come back on occasion. Welcome to MPS!
November 16th, 2022 04:23
arqios said:
Sometimes a single tear is all that it takes to make a tear in the fabric of the cosmos. Love does come back on occasion. Welcome to MPS!
November 16th, 2022 04:23
