Comments received on poems by Joakim Bergen



Wasted
jarcher54 said:

An intriguing take on our relationship to the little things going on around us--whether it is a flower, or maybe even another person! We ignore so much...

January 28th, 2023 20:02

Love is Sad
Christina8 said:

There is so much feeling and imagery in this poem, I really like it! Christina

January 27th, 2023 10:07

The Lighthouse
mvvenkataraman said:

Superb poetry my dear,
All beings have feelings,
You have highlighted it,
All the best to write more!

January 21st, 2023 09:53

Present
L. B. Mek said:

so relatable, thanks for sharing

January 20th, 2023 07:09

Picked A Flower
rhmn_7 said:

I can only imagine how beautiful the flower garden was

December 23rd, 2022 08:51

Picked A Flower
L. B. Mek said:

intriguing, wonderfully worded
thanks for sharing

December 23rd, 2022 07:42

War And Love
L. B. Mek said:

so well written, thanks for sharing

December 19th, 2022 06:10

Broken
Remzybest poetry said:

Comfort is a cream to smooth away your pains and set in your walk way a light of songs that will show forth all your efforts in the garden of Joy.

December 11th, 2022 00:38

Roses
L. B. Mek said:

beware those thorns...

November 28th, 2022 06:00

Dove
Eugene S. said:

Love the imagery and the allusion. The sprinkling of Olde English makes it so much more endearing.

November 26th, 2022 09:27

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