Comments received on poems by JoyJoy
When it rains
John Lee said:
Some days I just close my eyes and let rain run down my face. Then, they are no longer just my tears. Thank you for sharing this, it carries.
September 4th, 2024 18:49
John Lee said:
Some days I just close my eyes and let rain run down my face. Then, they are no longer just my tears. Thank you for sharing this, it carries.
September 4th, 2024 18:49
Floating
Dan Williams said:
What, no bright lights and angels? I like your vision better. Nice work.
August 15th, 2024 23:20
Dan Williams said:
What, no bright lights and angels? I like your vision better. Nice work.
August 15th, 2024 23:20
Floating
Cassie58 said:
Lovely poetic expression here. You make death sound welcoming. Pleased I stopped by.
August 14th, 2024 14:55
Cassie58 said:
Lovely poetic expression here. You make death sound welcoming. Pleased I stopped by.
August 14th, 2024 14:55
Floating
MendedFences27 said:
Why write about death? If the mood is desperate enough that you write about it, then do something about it. Don\'t let the sadness overwhelm you. You are stronger than it. There are too many opportunities for happiness in this world to let sadness overcome you.
Your poem was so powerful that I had write this. I hope it was just an exercise in creative writing. Either way Congrats on a well written poem. It got to me. - Phil A.
August 14th, 2024 13:42
MendedFences27 said:
Why write about death? If the mood is desperate enough that you write about it, then do something about it. Don\'t let the sadness overwhelm you. You are stronger than it. There are too many opportunities for happiness in this world to let sadness overcome you.
Your poem was so powerful that I had write this. I hope it was just an exercise in creative writing. Either way Congrats on a well written poem. It got to me. - Phil A.
August 14th, 2024 13:42
When it rains
MendedFences27 said:
What is rain but the moisture of yesteryears? Perhaps that why, one recalls love from the past. Your poem is wonderful, especially the images you created of the past and your reflection on why its constantly recalled when it rains. A beautiful poem. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2023 21:25
MendedFences27 said:
What is rain but the moisture of yesteryears? Perhaps that why, one recalls love from the past. Your poem is wonderful, especially the images you created of the past and your reflection on why its constantly recalled when it rains. A beautiful poem. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2023 21:25
When it rains
orchidee said:
A fine write Joy.
And now my poem of the same title, starting: When it rains - Why is it always somewhat wet? Why is rain never dry?! 😁😁
October 4th, 2023 09:15
orchidee said:
A fine write Joy.
And now my poem of the same title, starting: When it rains - Why is it always somewhat wet? Why is rain never dry?! 😁😁
October 4th, 2023 09:15
When it rains
Pop64 said:
The reminders of a relationship of a past come through so vividly in this read. So beautifully written
October 4th, 2023 07:30
Pop64 said:
The reminders of a relationship of a past come through so vividly in this read. So beautifully written
October 4th, 2023 07:30
private universe
Ash :) said:
I love the smell of all the coffee and pastries everywhere < 3
I really like this poem :>
December 2nd, 2022 13:00
Ash :) said:
I love the smell of all the coffee and pastries everywhere < 3
I really like this poem :>
December 2nd, 2022 13:00
private universe
Eugene S. said:
Beautiful. So much comfort in the words. Well expressed!
December 2nd, 2022 12:24
Eugene S. said:
Beautiful. So much comfort in the words. Well expressed!
December 2nd, 2022 12:24
private universe
Andi said:
Love the atmosphere! Makes me think of many days spent coffee shops.
December 2nd, 2022 11:18
Andi said:
Love the atmosphere! Makes me think of many days spent coffee shops.
December 2nd, 2022 11:18
dear me
L. B. Mek said:
this is Powerful!
more Power to your self-excavated
Emancipation
may your efforts yield you that gift of impregnable self-worth
December 2nd, 2022 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
this is Powerful!
more Power to your self-excavated
Emancipation
may your efforts yield you that gift of impregnable self-worth
December 2nd, 2022 05:19
with the lights on
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautifully written and very relatable love poem. Thank you for sharing it.
November 30th, 2022 05:42
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautifully written and very relatable love poem. Thank you for sharing it.
November 30th, 2022 05:42
with the lights on
Neville said:
Bravo .. this is really a little bit special
November 30th, 2022 05:30
Neville said:
Bravo .. this is really a little bit special
November 30th, 2022 05:30
sunflowers
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, loyalty is key
thanks for sharing, a wonderful read
November 28th, 2022 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, loyalty is key
thanks for sharing, a wonderful read
November 28th, 2022 05:47
