Comments received on poems by JoyJoy



When it rains
MendedFences27 said:

What is rain but the moisture of yesteryears? Perhaps that why, one recalls love from the past. Your poem is wonderful, especially the images you created of the past and your reflection on why its constantly recalled when it rains. A beautiful poem. - Phil A.

October 4th, 2023 21:25

When it rains
orchidee said:

A fine write Joy.
And now my poem of the same title, starting: When it rains - Why is it always somewhat wet? Why is rain never dry?! 😁😁

October 4th, 2023 09:15

When it rains
Pop64 said:

The reminders of a relationship of a past come through so vividly in this read. So beautifully written

October 4th, 2023 07:30

forgiveness
Lola Portillo-Wright said:

Beautiful poem x

December 3rd, 2022 09:35

private universe
JoyJoy said:

Thank you! I\'m glad you all enjoyed it

December 2nd, 2022 17:33

private universe
Ash :) said:

I love the smell of all the coffee and pastries everywhere < 3
I really like this poem :>

December 2nd, 2022 13:00

private universe
Eugene S. said:

Beautiful. So much comfort in the words. Well expressed!

December 2nd, 2022 12:24

private universe
Andi said:

Love the atmosphere! Makes me think of many days spent coffee shops.

December 2nd, 2022 11:18

dear me
L. B. Mek said:

this is Powerful!
more Power to your self-excavated
Emancipation
may your efforts yield you that gift of impregnable self-worth

December 2nd, 2022 05:19

with the lights on
Fay Slimm. said:

A beautifully written and very relatable love poem. Thank you for sharing it.

November 30th, 2022 05:42

for me
Neville said:



delightful .. ink well spent in my humble opinion ..

November 30th, 2022 05:31

with the lights on
Neville said:


Bravo .. this is really a little bit special

November 30th, 2022 05:30

sunflowers
L. B. Mek said:

indeed, loyalty is key
thanks for sharing, a wonderful read

November 28th, 2022 05:47