Comments received on poems by Mara \"Marzipan\"
Flame and Memory
Bobby O said:
I felt that. It’s cathartic to say out loud what drives thru your mind w a daily buzz that numbs because too much time there can cause voids in managing moments and keeping the secret. Out loud like this is a SHOUT that excises the puddles if pain that gave gathered in any soft spot.
July 28th, 2023 22:43
Bobby O said:
I felt that. It’s cathartic to say out loud what drives thru your mind w a daily buzz that numbs because too much time there can cause voids in managing moments and keeping the secret. Out loud like this is a SHOUT that excises the puddles if pain that gave gathered in any soft spot.
July 28th, 2023 22:43
Similar Reflections
Parisab said:
Good job describing the word figuratively and in literal imagery-
June 18th, 2023 07:44
Parisab said:
Good job describing the word figuratively and in literal imagery-
June 18th, 2023 07:44
Lost Among the Crowd
Bobby O said:
That’s a real nice piece. You took special care w the phrasing avoiding boring formats and crafted instead a sophisticate without any pretension. Sounded natural. You have talent and I am a fan.
May 16th, 2023 14:08
Bobby O said:
That’s a real nice piece. You took special care w the phrasing avoiding boring formats and crafted instead a sophisticate without any pretension. Sounded natural. You have talent and I am a fan.
May 16th, 2023 14:08
Lost Among the Crowd
MendedFences27 said:
This is beautiful as it is. I saw these flowers floating away. But it is true that they may end up \"amongst what litters the ground,\" but it is all a part of Nature\'s purpose. Beautiful, I loved it. - Phil A,
May 16th, 2023 10:44
MendedFences27 said:
This is beautiful as it is. I saw these flowers floating away. But it is true that they may end up \"amongst what litters the ground,\" but it is all a part of Nature\'s purpose. Beautiful, I loved it. - Phil A,
May 16th, 2023 10:44
I Matter, To Me
Doggerel Dave said:
You learnt from your experience, learnt to make better initial choices - Good for you.
February 22nd, 2023 06:16
Doggerel Dave said:
You learnt from your experience, learnt to make better initial choices - Good for you.
February 22nd, 2023 06:16
I Matter, To Me
Myth said:
Though it is a short piece of poem, yet , has successfully mirrored a vived experience. maybe your poem was just a fictional image , but it remains a true daily reality for many lovers .. (I hope I understood what you had meant in your poem and my conclusions are correct. )
February 22nd, 2023 03:50
Myth said:
Though it is a short piece of poem, yet , has successfully mirrored a vived experience. maybe your poem was just a fictional image , but it remains a true daily reality for many lovers .. (I hope I understood what you had meant in your poem and my conclusions are correct. )
February 22nd, 2023 03:50
Except
David Wakeling said:
This is quite self indulgent. more like a dating profile than a poem. But hey what would I know
February 16th, 2023 16:49
David Wakeling said:
This is quite self indulgent. more like a dating profile than a poem. But hey what would I know
February 16th, 2023 16:49
An Emerald Sea
Caring dove said:
Great poem .. you make me feel sorry for the tree .. tho that’s sad . Trees are nice , and are important too you have given that tree feelings
January 19th, 2023 16:44
Caring dove said:
Great poem .. you make me feel sorry for the tree .. tho that’s sad . Trees are nice , and are important too you have given that tree feelings
January 19th, 2023 16:44
An Emerald Sea
L. B. Mek said:
erm so... this poem is just awesome!
thank you, what a treat
December 9th, 2022 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
erm so... this poem is just awesome!
thank you, what a treat
December 9th, 2022 05:37
