Comments received on poems by Sakwa Franc
The Lost Art
NafisaSB said:
i sincerely hope it\'s not lost in the industrial jungle around us..well descried...
January 28th, 2026 01:53
NafisaSB said:
i sincerely hope it\'s not lost in the industrial jungle around us..well descried...
January 28th, 2026 01:53
The Bridge
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the theme of connection and hope, symbolized through a bridge that unites different shores and serves as a metaphor for love, dreams, and new beginnings. It emphasizes the importance of relationships and the journeys we undertake, both physically and emotionally.
January 24th, 2026 11:36
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the theme of connection and hope, symbolized through a bridge that unites different shores and serves as a metaphor for love, dreams, and new beginnings. It emphasizes the importance of relationships and the journeys we undertake, both physically and emotionally.
January 24th, 2026 11:36
The Bridge
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s definitely something special, perhaps romantic about bridges and you have captured that.
January 24th, 2026 06:12
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s definitely something special, perhaps romantic about bridges and you have captured that.
January 24th, 2026 06:12
The Bridge
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor for more than the physical bridge but a connection between places, people, cultures and lives. Very nicely done in most poetic form
January 24th, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor for more than the physical bridge but a connection between places, people, cultures and lives. Very nicely done in most poetic form
January 24th, 2026 05:33
The Lost Art
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem explores the theme of nostalgia for a slower, more intentional way of living that has been overshadowed by the fast-paced demands of modern life. It reflects on the loss of traditional skills and the beauty found in patience and craftsmanship.
January 23rd, 2026 07:49
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem explores the theme of nostalgia for a slower, more intentional way of living that has been overshadowed by the fast-paced demands of modern life. It reflects on the loss of traditional skills and the beauty found in patience and craftsmanship.
January 23rd, 2026 07:49
The Lost Art
Mutley Ravishes said:
What goes up must come down!
Beautiful write.
January 23rd, 2026 05:02
Mutley Ravishes said:
What goes up must come down!
Beautiful write.
January 23rd, 2026 05:02
The Lost Art
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of the art of taking the available and crafting it into something new. This well can be a metaphor for life as well. Nicely written
January 23rd, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of the art of taking the available and crafting it into something new. This well can be a metaphor for life as well. Nicely written
January 23rd, 2026 04:40
Black Boss
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll try and break it to you gently - It\'s the same the whole world over.... Neat write.
January 22nd, 2026 17:34
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll try and break it to you gently - It\'s the same the whole world over.... Neat write.
January 22nd, 2026 17:34
Black Boss
sorenbarrett said:
A write about the workplace power structure as perceived from below. Nicely done
January 22nd, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A write about the workplace power structure as perceived from below. Nicely done
January 22nd, 2026 04:20
Butterfly
danieloptera said:
I am an entomologist so I love the words you span.
January 21st, 2026 09:55
danieloptera said:
I am an entomologist so I love the words you span.
January 21st, 2026 09:55
Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
On sheer beauty of images, rhyme, and flow this poem gets a fave. Very nicely done painting a beautiful picture of this delightful creature.
January 21st, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
On sheer beauty of images, rhyme, and flow this poem gets a fave. Very nicely done painting a beautiful picture of this delightful creature.
January 21st, 2026 04:41
Acidic Politics
James Michael said:
“In this swamp, truth loses its way.” So many succinct views conveyed. Very well written!
January 20th, 2026 20:51
James Michael said:
“In this swamp, truth loses its way.” So many succinct views conveyed. Very well written!
January 20th, 2026 20:51
Acidic Politics
Doggerel Dave said:
Politics - nothing much to add there. You definitely have the whole damn thing pinned and framed in smooth flowing lines.
January 20th, 2026 16:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Politics - nothing much to add there. You definitely have the whole damn thing pinned and framed in smooth flowing lines.
January 20th, 2026 16:48
Acidic Politics
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of politics bad and good. Looking for the good. Nicely written
January 20th, 2026 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of politics bad and good. Looking for the good. Nicely written
January 20th, 2026 13:57
Nature
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful full of nature images. It leaves a peaceful and serene feeling
January 12th, 2026 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful full of nature images. It leaves a peaceful and serene feeling
January 12th, 2026 08:26
Smile
NafisaSB said:
today, on your birthday, may you have reasons to smile always -have a beautiful day, and a great year ahead
August 25th, 2025 01:25
NafisaSB said:
today, on your birthday, may you have reasons to smile always -have a beautiful day, and a great year ahead
August 25th, 2025 01:25
A Flower ...
Cassie58 said:
We all need a rock to lean on. I found both strength and love in this poem. Good job Francis. Have a great Wednesday.
March 13th, 2024 02:53
Cassie58 said:
We all need a rock to lean on. I found both strength and love in this poem. Good job Francis. Have a great Wednesday.
March 13th, 2024 02:53
It hurts ...
2781 said:
For I reckon that the sufferings of this present time are not worthy to compare with the glory that will be revealed in us.
February 29th, 2024 01:58
2781 said:
For I reckon that the sufferings of this present time are not worthy to compare with the glory that will be revealed in us.
February 29th, 2024 01:58
A wasted Degree
Parisab said:
Your poetry is very mature and rejects all non sense! I hope that all parts of this world uses knowledge to give back to earth and each other…
February 4th, 2024 01:51
Parisab said:
Your poetry is very mature and rejects all non sense! I hope that all parts of this world uses knowledge to give back to earth and each other…
February 4th, 2024 01:51
Life Rehearsals.
cerry said:
This is an excellent reflectional poetic piece!!!!!!!
October 16th, 2023 00:34
cerry said:
This is an excellent reflectional poetic piece!!!!!!!
October 16th, 2023 00:34
The Dark Hour
Pop64 said:
Love the way you incorporated (briefly) the flow and rhyme of a Poe work, perhaps in homage to the poet. But, the imagery and write itself served to keep the reader reading and discerning, identifying the true meaning. Nicely done!
September 22nd, 2023 07:51
Pop64 said:
Love the way you incorporated (briefly) the flow and rhyme of a Poe work, perhaps in homage to the poet. But, the imagery and write itself served to keep the reader reading and discerning, identifying the true meaning. Nicely done!
September 22nd, 2023 07:51
The Dark Hour
L. B. Mek said:
\'for they are rare diadems
in the world
full of conformists and insolent men\".
It\'s time for Me.
Bundi, to showcase his brilliance.\'
Soar High oh brilliant Poet
show them hope
draped in a heart of defiance
(such an energising poem
thank you! dear Poet)
September 22nd, 2023 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'for they are rare diadems
in the world
full of conformists and insolent men\".
It\'s time for Me.
Bundi, to showcase his brilliance.\'
Soar High oh brilliant Poet
show them hope
draped in a heart of defiance
(such an energising poem
thank you! dear Poet)
September 22nd, 2023 05:05
At Helm Of Power
L. B. Mek said:
\'In the dirt mire of tribal fragments
My tribe is in power so I\'m
But we all beg for bread with tears\'
Motherland
Water to our veins, Crimson
in our tears
Teach us, heal us, guide us
surely there must be an end
how many generations
grounded in your red sands
We seek, Wisdom, Mercy and Peace
Motherland
Help us! Heed our heart\'s volition
Enough wahala
Enough loss
Enough cyclical travesties
we\'re tired
so, so tired
....
let us dream, Please!
September 15th, 2023 07:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'In the dirt mire of tribal fragments
My tribe is in power so I\'m
But we all beg for bread with tears\'
Motherland
Water to our veins, Crimson
in our tears
Teach us, heal us, guide us
surely there must be an end
how many generations
grounded in your red sands
We seek, Wisdom, Mercy and Peace
Motherland
Help us! Heed our heart\'s volition
Enough wahala
Enough loss
Enough cyclical travesties
we\'re tired
so, so tired
....
let us dream, Please!
September 15th, 2023 07:15
At Helm Of Power
Aktarul Islam said:
I love the way you penned it down so perfectly. Your political consciousness makes the poem mesmerizing.
September 15th, 2023 06:10
Aktarul Islam said:
I love the way you penned it down so perfectly. Your political consciousness makes the poem mesmerizing.
September 15th, 2023 06:10
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