Comments received on poems by armin



Our Eternity 
L. B. Mek said:

\'... as far as a blink
and as near, as a thought\'
life lingers, in our accumulated mementos
we merely need to utilise those memories
use them, before they poison us
grow our gardens of tolerance
and prepare
and hope
we get one more chance, to do it right..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
stay strong!

December 19th, 2022 05:00

Empty
L. B. Mek said:

writing about it, offers a path
to overcoming half the battle
see
in re-reading and rewording
we\'re excavating
digging deep, to those true feelings
to a space, place
where maybe a new blank page
offers us another avenue for hope
and on, we strive
in the hope that we\'ll eventually accumulate
a book\'s worth
of a life
that\'s al it is dear poet, this survival game
its just finding one more reason, to sip
one more breath, then blink
then step
and we reach, till we buckle
and flat on our back, remember
to once more find a reason, to breathe
and on! we define bravery
in each sunrise and sunset
we accumulate!
stay strong! thanks for sharing

December 16th, 2022 06:21