Comments received on poems by sam424
Evil woman
Bobby O said:
There is nothing you’ve gone that I can’t unknot.
Great line and descriptive in clever way. Love the phrasing throughout and theabsence of cliche’ formatting which I often rally against. Fresh voice.
May 16th, 2023 04:09
Bobby O said:
There is nothing you’ve gone that I can’t unknot.
Great line and descriptive in clever way. Love the phrasing throughout and theabsence of cliche’ formatting which I often rally against. Fresh voice.
May 16th, 2023 04:09
Breathe
Bobby O said:
I felt it and whilst my dialogue may have been different the self prodding and realizations of the fact at hand was very similar. I can relate and I enjoyed the write. Nice job.
May 16th, 2023 04:06
Bobby O said:
I felt it and whilst my dialogue may have been different the self prodding and realizations of the fact at hand was very similar. I can relate and I enjoyed the write. Nice job.
May 16th, 2023 04:06
Evil woman
charles69 said:
great poem I can relate it Took me years to get loose from and over my second wife
keep up the good work!
January 8th, 2023 01:17
charles69 said:
great poem I can relate it Took me years to get loose from and over my second wife
keep up the good work!
January 8th, 2023 01:17
