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Mom and Dad
Mason Vollman said:

In a world where rules are set in stone,
Where justice and fairness are too often overthrown,
A system that\'s supposed to protect and guide,
Often leaves the vulnerable feeling cast aside.

The scales of justice, they teeter and sway,
As power and privilege often have their way,
The wealthy and connected, they wield their might,
While the marginalized struggle in the darkest night.

Inequality abounds, a cruel and bitter truth,
Leaving many to fight for their dreams from their youth,
A cycle of oppression, so hard to break,
Leaving too many lives at stake.

But in the shadows, a glimmer of hope,
A call for change, a way to cope,
Together we can strive for a world that\'s just,
Where the system\'s flaws are left in the dust.

Let\'s tear down the walls that divide us apart,
And mend the broken pieces of every heart,
For in unity and love, we\'ll find our way,
To reshape the system, to a brighter day.

In this messed up world, there\'s strength in our fight,
To make the system better, more just, more right,
With courage and determination, we can rise above,
And create a system founded on fairness and love.







October 31st, 2023 19:48

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sorenbarrett said:

A prayer of hope and safty and security in an unpredictable world. I too wish for this

July 5th, 2023 08:51

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orchidee said:

Good write M.

July 5th, 2023 01:56

The Crown Of \"Faith\".
orchidee said:

Roman Catholics won\'t like it, but some say they are the \'Beast\' here.

March 8th, 2023 02:58

The Talent Of Thought.
orchidee said:

Good write RR.

January 27th, 2023 03:08

Two-Toned Brick Road.
L. B. Mek said:

stylistically intriguing, a memorable read
thanks for sharing

January 16th, 2023 03:51

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