Comments received on poems by Mason Vollman
I Don\'t Get It\'
Mason Vollman said:
Thank you Thomas. You stay strong too! God Bless!🙏🙌
April 18th, 2024 16:54
Mason Vollman said:
Thank you Thomas. You stay strong too! God Bless!🙏🙌
April 18th, 2024 16:54
I Don\'t Get It\'
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s quite sad for me to read this as you are so young, I think today\'s child has a bit too much on their plate. Excellent work. 🌹
April 18th, 2024 01:05
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s quite sad for me to read this as you are so young, I think today\'s child has a bit too much on their plate. Excellent work. 🌹
April 18th, 2024 01:05
I Don\'t Get It\'
sorenbarrett said:
Very philosophical write with a good rhyme and most interesting meter. Well done
April 17th, 2024 21:45
sorenbarrett said:
Very philosophical write with a good rhyme and most interesting meter. Well done
April 17th, 2024 21:45
I Don\'t Get It\'
orchidee said:
Dunno if I can cherish ya or not, due to the fact I can\'t see ya, with paper bag over head! lol.
April 17th, 2024 02:21
orchidee said:
Dunno if I can cherish ya or not, due to the fact I can\'t see ya, with paper bag over head! lol.
April 17th, 2024 02:21
Think. Why?
Bella Shepard said:
The antithesis of this poem, along with the balanced flow make this poem quite profound, asking the questions of life. Good Write!
April 15th, 2024 14:03
Bella Shepard said:
The antithesis of this poem, along with the balanced flow make this poem quite profound, asking the questions of life. Good Write!
April 15th, 2024 14:03
Dear Little One
Lei said:
Very encouraging, thank you for the positive message!
April 7th, 2024 23:04
Lei said:
Very encouraging, thank you for the positive message!
April 7th, 2024 23:04
Mom and Dad
Lei said:
I wish my family was like that, but I\'m glad that you have a good family, I\'m also glad that my family isn\'t like that because every scar is a reminder that you have gone through harshness and that you can get through it again
April 7th, 2024 21:51
Lei said:
I wish my family was like that, but I\'m glad that you have a good family, I\'m also glad that my family isn\'t like that because every scar is a reminder that you have gone through harshness and that you can get through it again
April 7th, 2024 21:51
The Crown Of \"Faith\".
Chad Carlson said:
I\'m Catholic and I\'m not offended. Perhaps it\'s because I\'ve only been a Catholic since 2015 right before my 38th birthday. Before I never knew religion really.
It\'s a solid piece with a strong message.
April 7th, 2024 11:48
Chad Carlson said:
I\'m Catholic and I\'m not offended. Perhaps it\'s because I\'ve only been a Catholic since 2015 right before my 38th birthday. Before I never knew religion really.
It\'s a solid piece with a strong message.
April 7th, 2024 11:48
ᒪIᐯE ᗩᔕ I ᔕᕼOᑌᒪᗪ
Chad Carlson said:
Amen! That is a prayer in it\'s own right. Powerful piece.
April 7th, 2024 11:42
Chad Carlson said:
Amen! That is a prayer in it\'s own right. Powerful piece.
April 7th, 2024 11:42
Mom and Dad
Chad Carlson said:
You have a lovely family. I\'m a little jealous to be honest. I wonder if my life would have been different if I had a Mom that actually cared. I never knew my father. And by the time I figured out who he was, he had already passed on.
My Mom had 3 loves in life. My younger half sister, the bottle and drugs as in whatever she could get her hands on. I was never good enough. So I ran the streets or stayed with my grandparents to avoid the constant belittling, yelling,or hitting. I refused to hit back, but that only made her hit harder. Many days I went to school with a black eye or a broken nose or a dislocated jaw. Not once did I tell anyone how it happened. It was always a dirt bike accident or I fell off the trampoline.
We started to get along only shortly before she passed on in 2015. So I count that as a plus even if it was short lived
April 7th, 2024 11:24
Chad Carlson said:
You have a lovely family. I\'m a little jealous to be honest. I wonder if my life would have been different if I had a Mom that actually cared. I never knew my father. And by the time I figured out who he was, he had already passed on.
My Mom had 3 loves in life. My younger half sister, the bottle and drugs as in whatever she could get her hands on. I was never good enough. So I ran the streets or stayed with my grandparents to avoid the constant belittling, yelling,or hitting. I refused to hit back, but that only made her hit harder. Many days I went to school with a black eye or a broken nose or a dislocated jaw. Not once did I tell anyone how it happened. It was always a dirt bike accident or I fell off the trampoline.
We started to get along only shortly before she passed on in 2015. So I count that as a plus even if it was short lived
April 7th, 2024 11:24
I Have Such Hopes For You...
Chad Carlson said:
Nice piece. It reminds me of a graduation speech that was set to music in the 90\'s Baz Luhrmann released the song “Everybody\'s Free To Wear Sunscreen\". I\'ll look for a YouTube link.
https://youtu.be/sTJ7AzBIJoI?si=hPWwnt7sdKJzYXdH
Check it out. It\'s worth it.
April 7th, 2024 11:00
Chad Carlson said:
Nice piece. It reminds me of a graduation speech that was set to music in the 90\'s Baz Luhrmann released the song “Everybody\'s Free To Wear Sunscreen\". I\'ll look for a YouTube link.
https://youtu.be/sTJ7AzBIJoI?si=hPWwnt7sdKJzYXdH
Check it out. It\'s worth it.
April 7th, 2024 11:00
Listen to What Im Not Saying.
Chad Carlson said:
Everyone wears a mask. Even the most confident person has something they fear or envy or wish that they were. It\'s easy to be someone else. it\'s hard to face the world as yourself. I haven\'t met a single person that actually does. Great work.
April 7th, 2024 10:08
Chad Carlson said:
Everyone wears a mask. Even the most confident person has something they fear or envy or wish that they were. It\'s easy to be someone else. it\'s hard to face the world as yourself. I haven\'t met a single person that actually does. Great work.
April 7th, 2024 10:08
Dear Little One
Chad Carlson said:
So I read this as The Lord being the one talking to the Little One. It could be a parent too but it works well either way. I love the Tupac inspiration.
April 7th, 2024 09:20
Chad Carlson said:
So I read this as The Lord being the one talking to the Little One. It could be a parent too but it works well either way. I love the Tupac inspiration.
April 7th, 2024 09:20
Hide
Chad Carlson said:
Everyone feels this from time to time. It\'s amazing how eloquently you were able to pack so much into something that on the surface looks simple and in reality it\'s anything but. Two thumbs way up for this one.
April 7th, 2024 09:16
Chad Carlson said:
Everyone feels this from time to time. It\'s amazing how eloquently you were able to pack so much into something that on the surface looks simple and in reality it\'s anything but. Two thumbs way up for this one.
April 7th, 2024 09:16
Hide
sorenbarrett said:
I have felt that way before and they say that what makes a poem, relevant is whether the reader can identify with it. If so this one makes it. Well done
April 6th, 2024 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
I have felt that way before and they say that what makes a poem, relevant is whether the reader can identify with it. If so this one makes it. Well done
April 6th, 2024 14:13
Hide
orchidee said:
But you already are hiding, under that box on ya head! lol. Can\'t see ya there. heehee.
April 6th, 2024 12:48
orchidee said:
But you already are hiding, under that box on ya head! lol. Can\'t see ya there. heehee.
April 6th, 2024 12:48
Hide
Lil said:
Ooooooooooooooo I love this. It really shows how us people think these days.
April 6th, 2024 12:41
Lil said:
Ooooooooooooooo I love this. It really shows how us people think these days.
April 6th, 2024 12:41
Dear Little One
sorenbarrett said:
A great message of reassurance and guidance. Well said.
April 5th, 2024 19:53
sorenbarrett said:
A great message of reassurance and guidance. Well said.
April 5th, 2024 19:53
Listen to What Im Not Saying.
orchidee said:
Good write M. Can\'t see ya with that bag over ya head! lol.
March 9th, 2024 02:52
orchidee said:
Good write M. Can\'t see ya with that bag over ya head! lol.
March 9th, 2024 02:52
Mom and Dad
Mason Vollman said:
In a world where rules are set in stone,
Where justice and fairness are too often overthrown,
A system that\'s supposed to protect and guide,
Often leaves the vulnerable feeling cast aside.
The scales of justice, they teeter and sway,
As power and privilege often have their way,
The wealthy and connected, they wield their might,
While the marginalized struggle in the darkest night.
Inequality abounds, a cruel and bitter truth,
Leaving many to fight for their dreams from their youth,
A cycle of oppression, so hard to break,
Leaving too many lives at stake.
But in the shadows, a glimmer of hope,
A call for change, a way to cope,
Together we can strive for a world that\'s just,
Where the system\'s flaws are left in the dust.
Let\'s tear down the walls that divide us apart,
And mend the broken pieces of every heart,
For in unity and love, we\'ll find our way,
To reshape the system, to a brighter day.
In this messed up world, there\'s strength in our fight,
To make the system better, more just, more right,
With courage and determination, we can rise above,
And create a system founded on fairness and love.
October 31st, 2023 19:48
Mason Vollman said:
In a world where rules are set in stone,
Where justice and fairness are too often overthrown,
A system that\'s supposed to protect and guide,
Often leaves the vulnerable feeling cast aside.
The scales of justice, they teeter and sway,
As power and privilege often have their way,
The wealthy and connected, they wield their might,
While the marginalized struggle in the darkest night.
Inequality abounds, a cruel and bitter truth,
Leaving many to fight for their dreams from their youth,
A cycle of oppression, so hard to break,
Leaving too many lives at stake.
But in the shadows, a glimmer of hope,
A call for change, a way to cope,
Together we can strive for a world that\'s just,
Where the system\'s flaws are left in the dust.
Let\'s tear down the walls that divide us apart,
And mend the broken pieces of every heart,
For in unity and love, we\'ll find our way,
To reshape the system, to a brighter day.
In this messed up world, there\'s strength in our fight,
To make the system better, more just, more right,
With courage and determination, we can rise above,
And create a system founded on fairness and love.
October 31st, 2023 19:48
ᒪIᐯE ᗩᔕ I ᔕᕼOᑌᒪᗪ
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer of hope and safty and security in an unpredictable world. I too wish for this
July 5th, 2023 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer of hope and safty and security in an unpredictable world. I too wish for this
July 5th, 2023 08:51
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