Was She Breathing?
rengoku said:

It is a true feeling poem

October 29th, 2024 19:16

Pathetic
sorenbarrett said:

I liked the theme and the manner of presentation. A type of soliloquy it has the form of a song with a refrain. Very nicely done.

October 24th, 2024 05:17

Today\'s world 🖕🏼
sorenbarrett said:

Very original in its form and yet with rhyme it rings with defiance and anger. Powerful and rebellious it voices the feelings of this reader and probably many more. Nicely done I have faved it for its originality in form

October 22nd, 2024 04:57