Comments received on poems by Mason Vollman
A Message To You!
Your_dreams said:
It’s funny and depressing how religions can be so similar yet so different. The poem’s good.👏
April 22nd, 2024 12:27
Your_dreams said:
It’s funny and depressing how religions can be so similar yet so different. The poem’s good.👏
April 22nd, 2024 12:27
The War Going on Outside
Your_dreams said:
You’re not alone, Mason💖
A good write.👏
April 21st, 2024 11:39
Your_dreams said:
You’re not alone, Mason💖
A good write.👏
April 21st, 2024 11:39
You weren\'t the one
Bella Shepard said:
The joy of love found, the pain of love lost entwined in this wonderful poem. Good write my friend!
April 19th, 2024 06:36
Bella Shepard said:
The joy of love found, the pain of love lost entwined in this wonderful poem. Good write my friend!
April 19th, 2024 06:36
You weren\'t the one
orchidee said:
Doh! Why wasn\'t I the one?! lol.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
April 19th, 2024 04:51
orchidee said:
Doh! Why wasn\'t I the one?! lol.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
April 19th, 2024 04:51
I Don\'t Get It\'
Mason Vollman said:
Thank you Thomas. You stay strong too! God Bless!🙏🙌
April 18th, 2024 16:54
Mason Vollman said:
Thank you Thomas. You stay strong too! God Bless!🙏🙌
April 18th, 2024 16:54
I Don\'t Get It\'
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s quite sad for me to read this as you are so young, I think today\'s child has a bit too much on their plate. Excellent work. 🌹
April 18th, 2024 01:05
Teddy.15 said:
It\'s quite sad for me to read this as you are so young, I think today\'s child has a bit too much on their plate. Excellent work. 🌹
April 18th, 2024 01:05
I Don\'t Get It\'
sorenbarrett said:
Very philosophical write with a good rhyme and most interesting meter. Well done
April 17th, 2024 21:45
sorenbarrett said:
Very philosophical write with a good rhyme and most interesting meter. Well done
April 17th, 2024 21:45
I Don\'t Get It\'
orchidee said:
Dunno if I can cherish ya or not, due to the fact I can\'t see ya, with paper bag over head! lol.
April 17th, 2024 02:21
orchidee said:
Dunno if I can cherish ya or not, due to the fact I can\'t see ya, with paper bag over head! lol.
April 17th, 2024 02:21
Think. Why?
Bella Shepard said:
The antithesis of this poem, along with the balanced flow make this poem quite profound, asking the questions of life. Good Write!
April 15th, 2024 14:03
Bella Shepard said:
The antithesis of this poem, along with the balanced flow make this poem quite profound, asking the questions of life. Good Write!
April 15th, 2024 14:03
Witness
Mason Vollman said:
Thanks Orchidee, but I didn\'t write it, it\'s one of my favourite poems from a poem collection from 1932. By Kathryn Munro.😊
April 11th, 2024 11:44
Mason Vollman said:
Thanks Orchidee, but I didn\'t write it, it\'s one of my favourite poems from a poem collection from 1932. By Kathryn Munro.😊
April 11th, 2024 11:44
Dear Little One
Lei said:
Very encouraging, thank you for the positive message!
April 7th, 2024 23:04
Lei said:
Very encouraging, thank you for the positive message!
April 7th, 2024 23:04
Mom and Dad
Lei said:
I wish my family was like that, but I\'m glad that you have a good family, I\'m also glad that my family isn\'t like that because every scar is a reminder that you have gone through harshness and that you can get through it again
April 7th, 2024 21:51
Lei said:
I wish my family was like that, but I\'m glad that you have a good family, I\'m also glad that my family isn\'t like that because every scar is a reminder that you have gone through harshness and that you can get through it again
April 7th, 2024 21:51
The Crown Of \"Faith\".
ChadVader said:
I\'m Catholic and I\'m not offended. Perhaps it\'s because I\'ve only been a Catholic since 2015 right before my 38th birthday. Before I never knew religion really.
It\'s a solid piece with a strong message.
April 7th, 2024 11:48
ChadVader said:
I\'m Catholic and I\'m not offended. Perhaps it\'s because I\'ve only been a Catholic since 2015 right before my 38th birthday. Before I never knew religion really.
It\'s a solid piece with a strong message.
April 7th, 2024 11:48
ᒪIᐯE ᗩᔕ I ᔕᕼOᑌᒪᗪ
ChadVader said:
Amen! That is a prayer in it\'s own right. Powerful piece.
April 7th, 2024 11:42
ChadVader said:
Amen! That is a prayer in it\'s own right. Powerful piece.
April 7th, 2024 11:42
Mom and Dad
ChadVader said:
You have a lovely family. I\'m a little jealous to be honest. I wonder if my life would have been different if I had a Mom that actually cared. I never knew my father. And by the time I figured out who he was, he had already passed on.
My Mom had 3 loves in life. My younger half sister, the bottle and drugs as in whatever she could get her hands on. I was never good enough. So I ran the streets or stayed with my grandparents to avoid the constant belittling, yelling,or hitting. I refused to hit back, but that only made her hit harder. Many days I went to school with a black eye or a broken nose or a dislocated jaw. Not once did I tell anyone how it happened. It was always a dirt bike accident or I fell off the trampoline.
We started to get along only shortly before she passed on in 2015. So I count that as a plus even if it was short lived
April 7th, 2024 11:24
ChadVader said:
You have a lovely family. I\'m a little jealous to be honest. I wonder if my life would have been different if I had a Mom that actually cared. I never knew my father. And by the time I figured out who he was, he had already passed on.
My Mom had 3 loves in life. My younger half sister, the bottle and drugs as in whatever she could get her hands on. I was never good enough. So I ran the streets or stayed with my grandparents to avoid the constant belittling, yelling,or hitting. I refused to hit back, but that only made her hit harder. Many days I went to school with a black eye or a broken nose or a dislocated jaw. Not once did I tell anyone how it happened. It was always a dirt bike accident or I fell off the trampoline.
We started to get along only shortly before she passed on in 2015. So I count that as a plus even if it was short lived
April 7th, 2024 11:24
Love
ChadVader said:
I give you credit, your pen game is way better than mine. You write from a wonderful place in the light. I write from the darkness of pain and heartache. Wonderfully written I can\'t help but smile when I read it.
April 7th, 2024 11:04
ChadVader said:
I give you credit, your pen game is way better than mine. You write from a wonderful place in the light. I write from the darkness of pain and heartache. Wonderfully written I can\'t help but smile when I read it.
April 7th, 2024 11:04
I Have Such Hopes For You...
ChadVader said:
Nice piece. It reminds me of a graduation speech that was set to music in the 90\'s Baz Luhrmann released the song “Everybody\'s Free To Wear Sunscreen\". I\'ll look for a YouTube link.
https://youtu.be/sTJ7AzBIJoI?si=hPWwnt7sdKJzYXdH
Check it out. It\'s worth it.
April 7th, 2024 11:00
ChadVader said:
Nice piece. It reminds me of a graduation speech that was set to music in the 90\'s Baz Luhrmann released the song “Everybody\'s Free To Wear Sunscreen\". I\'ll look for a YouTube link.
https://youtu.be/sTJ7AzBIJoI?si=hPWwnt7sdKJzYXdH
Check it out. It\'s worth it.
April 7th, 2024 11:00
Love\'s One Of A Kind.
ChadVader said:
I like your description of love. It has to be the most powerful thing in life really. When all is said and done. It\'s the mark you leave in the hearts of those you left behind.
I can only hope that I\'ve left warm feelings and great memories in everyone that has cared about me in life.
April 7th, 2024 10:51
ChadVader said:
I like your description of love. It has to be the most powerful thing in life really. When all is said and done. It\'s the mark you leave in the hearts of those you left behind.
I can only hope that I\'ve left warm feelings and great memories in everyone that has cared about me in life.
April 7th, 2024 10:51
Listen to What Im Not Saying.
ChadVader said:
Everyone wears a mask. Even the most confident person has something they fear or envy or wish that they were. It\'s easy to be someone else. it\'s hard to face the world as yourself. I haven\'t met a single person that actually does. Great work.
April 7th, 2024 10:08
ChadVader said:
Everyone wears a mask. Even the most confident person has something they fear or envy or wish that they were. It\'s easy to be someone else. it\'s hard to face the world as yourself. I haven\'t met a single person that actually does. Great work.
April 7th, 2024 10:08
If Only I Knew
ChadVader said:
I appreciate how your writing style can change and conform to so many different styles. I\'m picking up Edgar Allen Poe... Not for the content, but in the flow. Your message is a strong one. And it truly is beautiful. Great job... And yes I\'m probably going to read and comment on all. You\'ve gained a fan.
April 7th, 2024 10:02
ChadVader said:
I appreciate how your writing style can change and conform to so many different styles. I\'m picking up Edgar Allen Poe... Not for the content, but in the flow. Your message is a strong one. And it truly is beautiful. Great job... And yes I\'m probably going to read and comment on all. You\'ve gained a fan.
April 7th, 2024 10:02
Dear Little One
ChadVader said:
So I read this as The Lord being the one talking to the Little One. It could be a parent too but it works well either way. I love the Tupac inspiration.
April 7th, 2024 09:20
ChadVader said:
So I read this as The Lord being the one talking to the Little One. It could be a parent too but it works well either way. I love the Tupac inspiration.
April 7th, 2024 09:20
Hide
ChadVader said:
Everyone feels this from time to time. It\'s amazing how eloquently you were able to pack so much into something that on the surface looks simple and in reality it\'s anything but. Two thumbs way up for this one.
April 7th, 2024 09:16
ChadVader said:
Everyone feels this from time to time. It\'s amazing how eloquently you were able to pack so much into something that on the surface looks simple and in reality it\'s anything but. Two thumbs way up for this one.
April 7th, 2024 09:16
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