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How many times said:

Thanks for your wonderful comment, I know that lying and pretending is not necessary but the truth is I sometimes do that :) lying and pretending who I am not supposed to be:(, thank you for your comments I do also like your poems their very inspiring I wish that I can write something like that.

January 7th, 2011 10:46

How many times
Cheeky Missy said:

Wow. You actually could create tunes for your songs?! I love to take existing songs and change the words and sing my poems that way, but I've never figured out how anyone can develop an original tune. The poem IS very sad. And so typical and the never-ending question of the hurt, when the nothing that is "you" begins to become something special because of somebody special, and then is so worthless when they leave. Excellent! Only one thing, though, it surely is not necessary to lie and pretend.

January 1st, 2011 21:41

My Fallen Lie
Cheeky Missy said:

Very interesting.....I like it.
I enjoy your use of end-rhyming very much.
If I may dare suggest, maybe a consistency in the number of syllables? Hope that is not offensive to offer a suggestion.
Keep on writing!
I enjoyed considering the topic, and know the lingering memory even when the person doesn't deserve the longing,...but when I say that, I think, well who does? me? Nah, I'm no improvement on anyone else!
I look forward to more submissions from you!
Have a great day!

November 15th, 2010 22:40