Comments received on poems by Eileen Clark
No Trespassing
Dan Williams said:
Havn\'t we all been caught swimming sometime? Nice work.
July 11th, 2024 00:35
Dan Williams said:
Havn\'t we all been caught swimming sometime? Nice work.
July 11th, 2024 00:35
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Cassie58 said:
A lovely childhood memory which ended with a smile. Nicely conveyed.
July 9th, 2024 14:34
Cassie58 said:
A lovely childhood memory which ended with a smile. Nicely conveyed.
July 9th, 2024 14:34
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PreciousGurl said:
I really enjoyed this . It was like reliving
my childhood back when being a kid was fun . Times were much simpler then . Thank you for this .
July 9th, 2024 11:46
PreciousGurl said:
I really enjoyed this . It was like reliving
my childhood back when being a kid was fun . Times were much simpler then . Thank you for this .
July 9th, 2024 11:46
No Trespassing
Teddy.15 said:
lol most endearing, and such a wake up call for today\'s world, in which it\'s so very different. š¹ Nostalgia I have so many childhood stories floating around me now, you\'ve awoken my warmer memory side. š¹
July 9th, 2024 10:47
Teddy.15 said:
lol most endearing, and such a wake up call for today\'s world, in which it\'s so very different. š¹ Nostalgia I have so many childhood stories floating around me now, you\'ve awoken my warmer memory side. š¹
July 9th, 2024 10:47
Walking In The Rain
Teddy.15 said:
This is such fun your rhyme and most endearing photo makes me smile so much. š¹
April 8th, 2024 16:42
Teddy.15 said:
This is such fun your rhyme and most endearing photo makes me smile so much. š¹
April 8th, 2024 16:42
We Became Friends, My Snowman And Me
rhmn_7 said:
Now that\'s a heavy loss for a child, nice poem!
February 25th, 2024 09:14
rhmn_7 said:
Now that\'s a heavy loss for a child, nice poem!
February 25th, 2024 09:14
We Became Friends, My Snowman And Me
orchidee said:
Good write E.
Hope we don\'t see him in our area. Brrrr!
December 31st, 2023 03:24
orchidee said:
Good write E.
Hope we don\'t see him in our area. Brrrr!
December 31st, 2023 03:24
We Became Friends, My Snowman And Me
Cassie58 said:
Something magical about building a snowman and such a disappointment when the temperature changes and the melting process starts. You took me back to my childhood. What fun we had in the snow. A lovely poem and your posted image a perfect match for your words Eileen.
December 30th, 2023 19:48
Cassie58 said:
Something magical about building a snowman and such a disappointment when the temperature changes and the melting process starts. You took me back to my childhood. What fun we had in the snow. A lovely poem and your posted image a perfect match for your words Eileen.
December 30th, 2023 19:48
Iām Still Standing
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful emotion in here, and yes you most definitely are standing and very tall too. ā¤ļø
November 3rd, 2023 21:23
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful emotion in here, and yes you most definitely are standing and very tall too. ā¤ļø
November 3rd, 2023 21:23
Iām Still Standing
Thomas W Case said:
So much strength and confidence in this one. I love it.
November 3rd, 2023 16:51
Thomas W Case said:
So much strength and confidence in this one. I love it.
November 3rd, 2023 16:51
My Fall Loving Cat
jarcher54 said:
I knew you were just a big pussycat at heart!
October 26th, 2023 02:36
jarcher54 said:
I knew you were just a big pussycat at heart!
October 26th, 2023 02:36
Put My Ashes In A Coffee Can
jarcher54 said:
I laughed so hard it hurt... thank you!
October 26th, 2023 02:35
jarcher54 said:
I laughed so hard it hurt... thank you!
October 26th, 2023 02:35
My Fall Loving Cat
Parisab said:
Full of playfulness and energy! You and your cats display an amusing picture for the readerā¦
October 26th, 2023 01:10
Parisab said:
Full of playfulness and energy! You and your cats display an amusing picture for the readerā¦
October 26th, 2023 01:10
Fear In The Moonlight
Teddy.15 said:
Such emotion here, your last lines for me were of my brother who is now a ghost. Such beauty and my goodness I was nearly out of breath. ā¤ļø
October 25th, 2023 14:35
Teddy.15 said:
Such emotion here, your last lines for me were of my brother who is now a ghost. Such beauty and my goodness I was nearly out of breath. ā¤ļø
October 25th, 2023 14:35
Put My Ashes In A Coffee Can
rhmn_7 said:
Not every ending has to be only sad, some can be funny and humorous like this :)
October 22nd, 2023 08:40
rhmn_7 said:
Not every ending has to be only sad, some can be funny and humorous like this :)
October 22nd, 2023 08:40
Put My Ashes In A Coffee Can
orchidee said:
Me too - I hardly ever drink coffee, so I won\'t get it mixed up with a tea caddy! lol. Or I might have an old tea chest instead. Doh!
October 22nd, 2023 01:56
orchidee said:
Me too - I hardly ever drink coffee, so I won\'t get it mixed up with a tea caddy! lol. Or I might have an old tea chest instead. Doh!
October 22nd, 2023 01:56
Put My Ashes In A Coffee Can
Soman Ragavan said:
My further comments on the poem \"Put my ashes in a coffee canā by Eileen Clark
Thomas W Case says on this poem : āVery funny. Less expensive than an urn. Lolā
After your death, expenses from your wealth will not matter. Any money or wealth left will go to others, anyway. After your death, it should not be a question of money. Indeed, you should arrange for all your money to be spent rather than be given to those who pestered you during your life. A flower vase is definitely better than an urn. The urn just sits there. It is sealed. It contains memories. In contrast, the flowering in the vase will be a beautiful scene, although you yourself wonāt be here to see it. Like I say, donāt leave anything to them fiendsā¦ Soman Ragavan. 22 October, 2023. //
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October 21st, 2023 19:56
Soman Ragavan said:
My further comments on the poem \"Put my ashes in a coffee canā by Eileen Clark
Thomas W Case says on this poem : āVery funny. Less expensive than an urn. Lolā
After your death, expenses from your wealth will not matter. Any money or wealth left will go to others, anyway. After your death, it should not be a question of money. Indeed, you should arrange for all your money to be spent rather than be given to those who pestered you during your life. A flower vase is definitely better than an urn. The urn just sits there. It is sealed. It contains memories. In contrast, the flowering in the vase will be a beautiful scene, although you yourself wonāt be here to see it. Like I say, donāt leave anything to them fiendsā¦ Soman Ragavan. 22 October, 2023. //
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October 21st, 2023 19:56
Put My Ashes In A Coffee Can
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Put my ashes in a coffee canā by Eileen Clark
āJust don\'t bury me next to my ex spouseā
This shows that humans can difficultly forgive or forget permanently bad experiences. We have suffered so much from that relationship in our lifetime that we donāt even want to be buried in the SAME grave. Or, even then there will be battles. Here, even ānextā to that guyās grave is refusedā¦ A coffee can will do perfectly for the ashesā¦
Flowers called āforget-me-notsā are a sweet, fantastic way to point to remembranceā¦
You will flower and bloom even after your death. You will bloom even from your ASHES, for even death will not be the end of you. Your legacies will live on. They will do, since you are a poet. Poets are immortal.
\"(.....) Poets are immortal, says at the very beginning James Burty David. For him, we must not think that the imaginary is disorderly, for even in this apparent disorder, there is a structured language.\" \"De la difficultĆ© Ć faire rimer poĆ©sie et identitĆ©.\" \"WEEK-END\" newspaper, Mauritius 6 July, 1997, (page 33).
ā(On GAUTHIER). In a world in which everything is impermanent, the poet, by rearranging reality into art, can create something that will have more permanent value. ...... Art can thus provide the poet with a solace for his mortality while he is alive and the hope of immortality in death. (ā¦)ā \"TWELVE FRENCH POETS. 1820-1900. AN ANTHOLOGY OF 19TH CENTURY FRENCH POETRY.\" London : Longmans, Green and Co., 1957. (Third impression, 1959). (With an Introduction and Notes by Douglas ParmĆ©e). (Pages xiii to lvi). Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
From my poem āA disappearing actā :
āThe interval might last any length of time :
Some might wish it long, some might not ;
With the departād life, untied be the knot :
The reunion shalt birth some terrific rhymeā¦ā¦ā
Reunion, here, is about burying both in the same grave or side by sideā¦
Soman Ragavan. 22 October, 2023. //
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October 21st, 2023 19:40
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Put my ashes in a coffee canā by Eileen Clark
āJust don\'t bury me next to my ex spouseā
This shows that humans can difficultly forgive or forget permanently bad experiences. We have suffered so much from that relationship in our lifetime that we donāt even want to be buried in the SAME grave. Or, even then there will be battles. Here, even ānextā to that guyās grave is refusedā¦ A coffee can will do perfectly for the ashesā¦
Flowers called āforget-me-notsā are a sweet, fantastic way to point to remembranceā¦
You will flower and bloom even after your death. You will bloom even from your ASHES, for even death will not be the end of you. Your legacies will live on. They will do, since you are a poet. Poets are immortal.
\"(.....) Poets are immortal, says at the very beginning James Burty David. For him, we must not think that the imaginary is disorderly, for even in this apparent disorder, there is a structured language.\" \"De la difficultĆ© Ć faire rimer poĆ©sie et identitĆ©.\" \"WEEK-END\" newspaper, Mauritius 6 July, 1997, (page 33).
ā(On GAUTHIER). In a world in which everything is impermanent, the poet, by rearranging reality into art, can create something that will have more permanent value. ...... Art can thus provide the poet with a solace for his mortality while he is alive and the hope of immortality in death. (ā¦)ā \"TWELVE FRENCH POETS. 1820-1900. AN ANTHOLOGY OF 19TH CENTURY FRENCH POETRY.\" London : Longmans, Green and Co., 1957. (Third impression, 1959). (With an Introduction and Notes by Douglas ParmĆ©e). (Pages xiii to lvi). Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
From my poem āA disappearing actā :
āThe interval might last any length of time :
Some might wish it long, some might not ;
With the departād life, untied be the knot :
The reunion shalt birth some terrific rhymeā¦ā¦ā
Reunion, here, is about burying both in the same grave or side by sideā¦
Soman Ragavan. 22 October, 2023. //
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October 21st, 2023 19:40
Put My Ashes In A Coffee Can
Teddy.15 said:
LOL the perfect way to go. And to think those forget me nots will forever grow. š wonderful.
October 21st, 2023 15:54
Teddy.15 said:
LOL the perfect way to go. And to think those forget me nots will forever grow. š wonderful.
October 21st, 2023 15:54
Put My Ashes In A Coffee Can
Thomas W Case said:
Very funny. Less expensive than an urn. lol
October 21st, 2023 14:35
Thomas W Case said:
Very funny. Less expensive than an urn. lol
October 21st, 2023 14:35
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