Comments received on poems by jessica rose
Misery
Thorn3 said:
I felt this one a lot. One of the best ones I’ve read on here
February 17th, 2023 19:22
Thorn3 said:
I felt this one a lot. One of the best ones I’ve read on here
February 17th, 2023 19:22
In my head
L. B. Mek said:
dear poet
\'it\'s ok, to not
be ok\'
simply, find your way
to that next dawn, it\'s enough
for now
when you find a reason
your anchor, to life
then begin your tepid steps
try and find your own way
ignore people\'s toxic opinions
simply, be yourself
let everything else, fall in to place
or not
free yourself
of societal expectation, keep it simple
when hungry, eat
find shelter, or company, or help
as you see fit
but do continue to write, to share
for from within your pain
may be planted seeds of help
for others to find hope, in
and in that, you affirm your own
worth!)
stay strong! thanks for sharing
February 17th, 2023 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
dear poet
\'it\'s ok, to not
be ok\'
simply, find your way
to that next dawn, it\'s enough
for now
when you find a reason
your anchor, to life
then begin your tepid steps
try and find your own way
ignore people\'s toxic opinions
simply, be yourself
let everything else, fall in to place
or not
free yourself
of societal expectation, keep it simple
when hungry, eat
find shelter, or company, or help
as you see fit
but do continue to write, to share
for from within your pain
may be planted seeds of help
for others to find hope, in
and in that, you affirm your own
worth!)
stay strong! thanks for sharing
February 17th, 2023 04:59
In my head
Doggerel Dave said:
With all due respect to charles69 above, his churchy religious way is perhaps not the only way. Your economic circumstances may be also have some bearing on your situation,.
At age 15 you are in the midst of adolescence - quite possibly the worst, most uncomfortable time in most people\'s lives. You are not autonomous, not independent. Provided you look outwards at the world, you and your group of similar age will mature.
There is a life out there, And I hope you, when you have the strength, will be part of a move to change it for the better.
But above all do not get drawn into any one view of life , keep your options open and explore many ideas and philosophies.
February 17th, 2023 01:25
Doggerel Dave said:
With all due respect to charles69 above, his churchy religious way is perhaps not the only way. Your economic circumstances may be also have some bearing on your situation,.
At age 15 you are in the midst of adolescence - quite possibly the worst, most uncomfortable time in most people\'s lives. You are not autonomous, not independent. Provided you look outwards at the world, you and your group of similar age will mature.
There is a life out there, And I hope you, when you have the strength, will be part of a move to change it for the better.
But above all do not get drawn into any one view of life , keep your options open and explore many ideas and philosophies.
February 17th, 2023 01:25
In my head
charles69 said:
Very sad but elegant poem
I would like to see you and other young people on here writing happier poems, and also religious works
I don\'t know what you like to read but I would advise you to stay away from most modern poets, famous 20th century , and also of this century
I would also advise you to get a part-time job, if only a few hours a week, and start attending church or if there aren\'t any nearby that you like and feel comfortable in, start your own group
finally I would recommend that you learn to sing and maybe learn to play the guitar
let me know if I can be of further help, if you need someone to talk to
Charles69 [email protected]
662-701-6897
Mississippi, USA
February 16th, 2023 22:48
charles69 said:
Very sad but elegant poem
I would like to see you and other young people on here writing happier poems, and also religious works
I don\'t know what you like to read but I would advise you to stay away from most modern poets, famous 20th century , and also of this century
I would also advise you to get a part-time job, if only a few hours a week, and start attending church or if there aren\'t any nearby that you like and feel comfortable in, start your own group
finally I would recommend that you learn to sing and maybe learn to play the guitar
let me know if I can be of further help, if you need someone to talk to
Charles69 [email protected]
662-701-6897
Mississippi, USA
February 16th, 2023 22:48
In my head
2781 said:
Ministering spirit\'s, are they not. O death where is your sting?
February 16th, 2023 22:09
2781 said:
Ministering spirit\'s, are they not. O death where is your sting?
February 16th, 2023 22:09
