Comments received on poems by sweetwords



guilt
SIMEON A. OYEKANMI said:

Guilt must not win. Amazing piece.

March 13th, 2023 20:19

overcome
L. B. Mek said:

more power to you!
thanks for sharing

March 13th, 2023 04:02

grief
Myth said:

When we embrace oblivion and spread the margin of forgiveness, that may heal many wounds..
there is a Chinese parable says :
(猪乒乓球受到来自四面八方的打击,但它在桌子上快乐地弹跳......)

(Pig-pong ball receives blows from every side, but it bounces happily on the table...)

March 12th, 2023 03:49

memories on my skin
Myth said:

After survival, the mirror and memories usually meet. The eye sees nothing but sadness and something bitter that extends from the past until reaches the wall of the heart.
There, the poem is born as an illegitimate child who struggles rejecting the beautiful tomorrow and insists on living yesterday again and again.

March 6th, 2023 13:31

memories on my skin
L. B. Mek said:

(\'woe
in our strife tattooed, skin
and
a shattered heart\'s incessant
ache\'
breath, as respite and Nature
as our cadence of soothing
somehow, someway
we find a way, to take one more
step
to hope, to wish, to dream
and eventually, realise
that better, we know we deserve!)
stay strong!

March 6th, 2023 05:29

1 in 6
Myth said:

Black is the master of colors..
Uglyness & beauty have no objective criterion.
And a cautious Eve, like you , reflects more elegance .
So , come out of your cocoon .
Sip your dawn nectar ..



March 3rd, 2023 15:38

wake up
2781 said:

Yes, but that was then.

February 28th, 2023 07:04

in my head
Addy said:

So tru...sometimes our head is our solace

February 26th, 2023 08:45

in my head
Myth said:

No wonder when I talk to some people they just stare at me and seem absent ..

Nice depicting. .

February 26th, 2023 07:53