Comments received on poems by jewelwrites55
Square One, Again
sorenbarrett said:
Short but with a plot and nicely said. Don\'t fight the current go with the flow.
August 10th, 2024 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
Short but with a plot and nicely said. Don\'t fight the current go with the flow.
August 10th, 2024 06:29
Rain Smell
L. B. Mek said:
tears cleanse, as much as they scar
let your rivers of hurt n regret
simply flow, kind poet
let it all wash away
rather than trying to repress it
stagnant water, poisons us
unshed tear\'s, weaken us
poetry is such a great vehicle
we can ink out our worries n fears
rage at that blank canvas
or caress it, like we wish
someone would comfort us
we must all, learn
to utilise our Art!
stay strong
April 7th, 2023 01:33
L. B. Mek said:
tears cleanse, as much as they scar
let your rivers of hurt n regret
simply flow, kind poet
let it all wash away
rather than trying to repress it
stagnant water, poisons us
unshed tear\'s, weaken us
poetry is such a great vehicle
we can ink out our worries n fears
rage at that blank canvas
or caress it, like we wish
someone would comfort us
we must all, learn
to utilise our Art!
stay strong
April 7th, 2023 01:33
Cold Turkey
L. B. Mek said:
wow! really impressive
your imagery is really refined
so many great lines
sorry for your pain, stay strong!
thanks for sharing your great talent
dear Poet
March 13th, 2023 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
wow! really impressive
your imagery is really refined
so many great lines
sorry for your pain, stay strong!
thanks for sharing your great talent
dear Poet
March 13th, 2023 04:12