Comments received on poems by jewelwrites55



Square One, Again
sorenbarrett said:

Short but with a plot and nicely said. Don\'t fight the current go with the flow.

August 10th, 2024 06:29

Ms.M
sorenbarrett said:

This poem had a nice flow and rhyme. Fun to read.

August 8th, 2024 20:17

Rain Smell
L. B. Mek said:

tears cleanse, as much as they scar
let your rivers of hurt n regret
simply flow, kind poet
let it all wash away
rather than trying to repress it
stagnant water, poisons us
unshed tear\'s, weaken us
poetry is such a great vehicle
we can ink out our worries n fears
rage at that blank canvas
or caress it, like we wish
someone would comfort us
we must all, learn
to utilise our Art!
stay strong

April 7th, 2023 01:33

Cold Turkey
L. B. Mek said:

wow! really impressive
your imagery is really refined
so many great lines
sorry for your pain, stay strong!
thanks for sharing your great talent
dear Poet

March 13th, 2023 04:12

Cold Turkey
Doggerel Dave said:

https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895

March 12th, 2023 17:39