Comments received on poems by jewelwrites55
Rain Smell
L. B. Mek said:
tears cleanse, as much as they scar
let your rivers of hurt n regret
simply flow, kind poet
let it all wash away
rather than trying to repress it
stagnant water, poisons us
unshed tear\'s, weaken us
poetry is such a great vehicle
we can ink out our worries n fears
rage at that blank canvas
or caress it, like we wish
someone would comfort us
we must all, learn
to utilise our Art!
stay strong
April 7th, 2023 01:33
L. B. Mek said:
tears cleanse, as much as they scar
let your rivers of hurt n regret
simply flow, kind poet
let it all wash away
rather than trying to repress it
stagnant water, poisons us
unshed tear\'s, weaken us
poetry is such a great vehicle
we can ink out our worries n fears
rage at that blank canvas
or caress it, like we wish
someone would comfort us
we must all, learn
to utilise our Art!
stay strong
April 7th, 2023 01:33
Sappy
L. B. Mek said:
a powerful mentality to try and cultivate
a gift, that cqn become
an unflinching foundation
for the rest of your life
(\'universe may have designed
planets to circle the Sun
but we
can try n sure our world
revolves around, us!\')
more power to you, stay strong
March 31st, 2023 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
a powerful mentality to try and cultivate
a gift, that cqn become
an unflinching foundation
for the rest of your life
(\'universe may have designed
planets to circle the Sun
but we
can try n sure our world
revolves around, us!\')
more power to you, stay strong
March 31st, 2023 04:16
Cold Turkey
L. B. Mek said:
wow! really impressive
your imagery is really refined
so many great lines
sorry for your pain, stay strong!
thanks for sharing your great talent
dear Poet
March 13th, 2023 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
wow! really impressive
your imagery is really refined
so many great lines
sorry for your pain, stay strong!
thanks for sharing your great talent
dear Poet
March 13th, 2023 04:12
