Comments received on poems by Peter Gates



Fly My Love
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure that love will fly back into your open heart.

Andy

April 17th, 2023 00:30

Was 7 Below Today
Parisab said:

Well written- I like the message of doom wether we leave or stay, and worse when someone confirms that-“Stayed I, again cursed he who let me know”

April 15th, 2023 21:37

A Lament on Living
Eugene S. said:

I understand the sentiment.

April 15th, 2023 13:30

And the Fishes Flew
Bobby O said:

I’m a fan.
“Clearest glasslike crystal hue “
It’s an art to pack description back to back to back and still have it ring natural. I admire and have yet not found the comfort you do have. Props.

April 14th, 2023 19:31

anxiety
Bobby O said:

The words move and the dual purpose of the curves of a woman is a nice touch and I applaud how you conquered that restriction.

April 14th, 2023 18:57

And the Fishes Flew
Lorna said:

Gorgeouus.... wish I was there.........

April 12th, 2023 05:09

Our Love
L. B. Mek said:

an ode to love, inked by love
or so it reads, to me
well what to say, it\'s lovely
thanks for sharing

April 10th, 2023 05:59

Our Love
Bobby O said:

The prose snd rhyme was pleasant but I’m nowhere near confident enough to experience a reality reflected , hence it lands in the fantasy category for my cynical norm.

April 10th, 2023 05:48

Our Love
Christina8 said:

I really enjoyed reading this poem, great rhyme. And once you\'ve been in love you understand...

April 10th, 2023 05:02

Our Love
orchidee said:

Good write P.

April 10th, 2023 02:26

The Seasons
orchidee said:

Good write Peter.

April 9th, 2023 10:07

reverie
David Wakeling said:

Is this a spelling list.I have dyslexia so I hate spelling tests.There are no punctuation marks so there is no meaning

April 8th, 2023 06:32

Can You?
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes, true love will always be there Peter.

Andy

April 8th, 2023 01:52

Are You Missing Me
Accidental Poet said:

I understand your pain. I\'ve not seen my loved one for 52 years. She moved away with family @ 14 years old. But to know love within your heart is the greatest gift in life. 🌹

April 5th, 2023 07:20

Are You Missing Me
arqios said:

T\'would be desirous if the intensity were both ways.

April 5th, 2023 06:38

Are You Missing Me
Peter Gates said:

You assume the bonds between two people are of strong and closely equal strength...seldom the case.

April 5th, 2023 03:26

Are You Missing Me
Mello said:

Distance can be tough, especially when you\'re away from your loved one. But remember that love knows no bounds and the bond between two souls can never truly be broken. Although you miss them every day, take comfort in the fact that they\'re out there pursuing their dreams and providing for you. Cherish the little moments of connection, like a sweet text or phone call, and keep your spirits up. Soon enough, the distance will be nothing but a memory.

April 5th, 2023 03:12

on writing a love letter
Accidental Poet said:

When the love is genuine within your heart, the words just come out from your inner muse. 😉

April 4th, 2023 07:28

on writing a love letter
David Wakeling said:

I tried to read this but words are missing so I gave up.

April 4th, 2023 06:17

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