Comments received on poems by Paullyna
Free me
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and curious. Sweet and disturbing. Truth is not relative and yet this calls true only a dream and false step.....as if lies are more welcome, yet they will destroy, ultimately. Again, fascinating contemplation.
March 9th, 2011 22:17
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and curious. Sweet and disturbing. Truth is not relative and yet this calls true only a dream and false step.....as if lies are more welcome, yet they will destroy, ultimately. Again, fascinating contemplation.
March 9th, 2011 22:17
Help me
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet. A cry for the deliverance of love....finding all in love. I like it.
March 9th, 2011 00:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet. A cry for the deliverance of love....finding all in love. I like it.
March 9th, 2011 00:33
Destroying
Cheeky Missy said:
This is eerie and chilling....how awful! What is it referring to?
March 8th, 2011 00:07
Cheeky Missy said:
This is eerie and chilling....how awful! What is it referring to?
March 8th, 2011 00:07
Something up there
Dolphine29 said:
I do wonder if we are still living inside the nightmare?
I like the way you used the silence, like everything we not do it's because we stay silent.
Like it!
Best
Dolphine
March 7th, 2011 20:52
Dolphine29 said:
I do wonder if we are still living inside the nightmare?
I like the way you used the silence, like everything we not do it's because we stay silent.
Like it!
Best
Dolphine
March 7th, 2011 20:52
My only desire
Dolphine29 said:
I like the way it seems like to be in the place where we can do both; watch over and dream.
Very nice :)
Best
Dolphine
March 7th, 2011 20:47
Dolphine29 said:
I like the way it seems like to be in the place where we can do both; watch over and dream.
Very nice :)
Best
Dolphine
March 7th, 2011 20:47
Help me
Dolphine29 said:
This poem made me think about a phrase: "Donnée en retour une sense á l'amour pour très long temps"
Meaning that ... "Give in return some sense in love for a long time".
Best
Dolphine.
March 7th, 2011 17:22
Dolphine29 said:
This poem made me think about a phrase: "Donnée en retour une sense á l'amour pour très long temps"
Meaning that ... "Give in return some sense in love for a long time".
Best
Dolphine.
March 7th, 2011 17:22
Something up there
Paullyna said:
something up there...like vision of better world but we are all stucked here in this bad version of it...lol,something like that heh..
March 6th, 2011 10:01
Paullyna said:
something up there...like vision of better world but we are all stucked here in this bad version of it...lol,something like that heh..
March 6th, 2011 10:01
Something up there
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Interesting and intriguing reflection. What is the title referring to? It is a fascinating depiction of....the folly and misery in this life.
March 5th, 2011 21:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Interesting and intriguing reflection. What is the title referring to? It is a fascinating depiction of....the folly and misery in this life.
March 5th, 2011 21:51
You and me
Cheeky Missy said:
Your last line seems to hang, breathlessly awaiting its conclusion, since it says "...while the persecution of salvation so strongly" It is a fascinating piece, full of intriguing metaphors. La, wish I understood it. But some folks claim the best poetry is incomprehensible or somesuch. Anyway, great job with the metaphors.
March 5th, 2011 21:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Your last line seems to hang, breathlessly awaiting its conclusion, since it says "...while the persecution of salvation so strongly" It is a fascinating piece, full of intriguing metaphors. La, wish I understood it. But some folks claim the best poetry is incomprehensible or somesuch. Anyway, great job with the metaphors.
March 5th, 2011 21:05
Waiting
Paullyna said:
this poem is talks about my grandmother who died several years ago :(
March 2nd, 2011 02:26
Paullyna said:
this poem is talks about my grandmother who died several years ago :(
March 2nd, 2011 02:26
Lost
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. What a fascinating, and somewhat intriguing piece....so beautifully expressed metaphorically....what a marvelous picture. I quite enjoyed it, even though it is so miserable. Very nicely drawn!
March 1st, 2011 23:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. What a fascinating, and somewhat intriguing piece....so beautifully expressed metaphorically....what a marvelous picture. I quite enjoyed it, even though it is so miserable. Very nicely drawn!
March 1st, 2011 23:29
Waiting
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, for your allusion to heaven in concluding, in the context of waiting is reminiscent of exactly what the Lord says to do, ie. "wait for the Lord" and "wait for His Son from heaven, even Jesus Christ...." I suppose you were thinking of lesser, of love? It seems an excellent expression of hoping beyond this world and our environs, which is a perfect assessment of the people God saves, seems to me.
March 1st, 2011 22:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, for your allusion to heaven in concluding, in the context of waiting is reminiscent of exactly what the Lord says to do, ie. "wait for the Lord" and "wait for His Son from heaven, even Jesus Christ...." I suppose you were thinking of lesser, of love? It seems an excellent expression of hoping beyond this world and our environs, which is a perfect assessment of the people God saves, seems to me.
March 1st, 2011 22:40
My only desire
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating depiction....I like how you've expressed it. The concluding sentence seems particularly good.
March 1st, 2011 00:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating depiction....I like how you've expressed it. The concluding sentence seems particularly good.
March 1st, 2011 00:06
Broken memory
Paullyna said:
I like writing sad poems, it makes me easier to be expressed..
February 27th, 2011 04:32
Paullyna said:
I like writing sad poems, it makes me easier to be expressed..
February 27th, 2011 04:32
Coming back
Paullyna said:
empty arms...like there is nothing to hold on to..just emptyness..
there...means like THERE in some better world :)
February 27th, 2011 04:25
Paullyna said:
empty arms...like there is nothing to hold on to..just emptyness..
there...means like THERE in some better world :)
February 27th, 2011 04:25
Coming back
Cheeky Missy said:
Interestingly intriguing.....what is the speaker coming back to since the speaker is dying in the "empty arms"? Why ask to be taken "there"? Fascinating....I don't quite understand it.
February 26th, 2011 23:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Interestingly intriguing.....what is the speaker coming back to since the speaker is dying in the "empty arms"? Why ask to be taken "there"? Fascinating....I don't quite understand it.
February 26th, 2011 23:15
Broken memory
Cheeky Missy said:
A despairing plea, yet a hopeless one, for it is a memory, apparently of what is now lost? What a bitter memory....and intriguing too.....lies in the eyes, yet truth and a desire to never part....very interesting...and so sad.
February 26th, 2011 22:43
Cheeky Missy said:
A despairing plea, yet a hopeless one, for it is a memory, apparently of what is now lost? What a bitter memory....and intriguing too.....lies in the eyes, yet truth and a desire to never part....very interesting...and so sad.
February 26th, 2011 22:43
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