Comments received on poems by ayatocka
Soulless Soul
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a feeling the pressures of life are becoming to much to bare, a desire to move on, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 06:34
Poetic Licence said:
I sense a feeling the pressures of life are becoming to much to bare, a desire to move on, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 06:34
Soulless Soul
sorenbarrett said:
i feel a desire for death in this poem with the pressures of life pushing one toward the next world. Dark and threatening
August 12th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
i feel a desire for death in this poem with the pressures of life pushing one toward the next world. Dark and threatening
August 12th, 2025 04:34
A Bud of Rose
Rocky Lagou said:
Such a deep reflection, and your imagery truly encapsulates the poem in such an artistic and whimsical manner. Sometimes when we are in our prime, young and vigorous, is when we\'re most liable to self-destruction. Just look at Sylvia Plath, so young and so full of potential, but her depression got the best of her. Thanks for the poem.
May 5th, 2023 08:12
Rocky Lagou said:
Such a deep reflection, and your imagery truly encapsulates the poem in such an artistic and whimsical manner. Sometimes when we are in our prime, young and vigorous, is when we\'re most liable to self-destruction. Just look at Sylvia Plath, so young and so full of potential, but her depression got the best of her. Thanks for the poem.
May 5th, 2023 08:12
