Comments received on poems by Theodore Zendarski
We
Bobby O said:
I think therefore ….
Kind of thing?
Why copywriter on the Throne? Seems like editor or publisher fir a book. Isn’t that a newspaper term? I guess you like to shoot for the esoteric?
June 30th, 2023 00:53
Bobby O said:
I think therefore ….
Kind of thing?
Why copywriter on the Throne? Seems like editor or publisher fir a book. Isn’t that a newspaper term? I guess you like to shoot for the esoteric?
June 30th, 2023 00:53
Lost
Bobby O said:
I kinda get where you wanted go but it misses because you didn’t bother to strengthen any attachment or need to recognize god or indicate why other people who lack faith affect you. It’s just a bunch of busy lines w no direction.
June 29th, 2023 23:37
Bobby O said:
I kinda get where you wanted go but it misses because you didn’t bother to strengthen any attachment or need to recognize god or indicate why other people who lack faith affect you. It’s just a bunch of busy lines w no direction.
June 29th, 2023 23:37
Holy Bond
James Michael said:
Well written, yet open for interpretation. I’m not a fan of religions, only what I get from them.
June 27th, 2023 17:02
James Michael said:
Well written, yet open for interpretation. I’m not a fan of religions, only what I get from them.
June 27th, 2023 17:02
Am I To Be
B.E.Poet said:
I love the part where you said \"If it\'s your will, am I to be loved\" I love that. I think that many kids are left without love from their families which is super important. And some of them have families who pretended to show love or think that they do but in reality, they are just hurting them and leaving their kid\'s souls destroyed. I just loved that line, nice poem
May 7th, 2023 20:54
B.E.Poet said:
I love the part where you said \"If it\'s your will, am I to be loved\" I love that. I think that many kids are left without love from their families which is super important. And some of them have families who pretended to show love or think that they do but in reality, they are just hurting them and leaving their kid\'s souls destroyed. I just loved that line, nice poem
May 7th, 2023 20:54
