Comments received on poems by Becca



Sometimes
Cheeky Missy said:

Ya, excellent depiction of being "head-over-heels in love"....sounds like you are too. Be careful....after your bitter valentine, you'll only fall deeper....take it slowly even though your heart is running fast into forever.

February 26th, 2011 22:53

Valentine\'s Day
Cheeky Missy said:

Wow. What a bittersweet tribute to this sweetheart holiday of Valentine's Day! Frankly, while you dearly love none other than him, he does not sound good enough for you....maybe you use this time to cool off a little and maybe see whether he is worth all your tender affection and present grief. And if you can talk it out with him, be honest with yourselves...if you can. The mystery of love almost seems to be....why do we love when we've no good reason to love?

February 14th, 2011 23:12

Valentine\'s Day
nair36 said:

I like your poem. It could be alot worse though. My girlfriend broke up with me before Valentines day. I'm not one to pass around advice but if you like writing poems then maybe you could write him one and initiate some sort of conversation. Your poem says he's special to you and I think he'd love any poem you wrote for him. I agree that love's a mystery. But your're a poet so you can solve it.

February 14th, 2011 21:25

You Can Tell Me...
erin wynette said:

as long as you believe in him,believe in love, believe in forever, no one could tear you apart..stay in love!!!may God bless you and your relationship!!!

February 8th, 2011 15:55

QuEsTiOnS
Cheeky Missy said:

Very fascinating...thank you very much for that note. I enjoyed it. Seems like an excellent meditation on that all too common frustration of "love."

December 1st, 2010 14:49