Comments received on poems by paperjam
Picture Perfect
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love the essence of expression here, the word play and choice is so intimate in its engagement, it becomes compelling with every line. The more you read the more you want to read. The piece in its entirety is also very relatable, thanks to its openness and simplicity, yet it burns at the touch... One my latest favorites, actually. Very well composed, gifted one.
June 22nd, 2023 04:53
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love the essence of expression here, the word play and choice is so intimate in its engagement, it becomes compelling with every line. The more you read the more you want to read. The piece in its entirety is also very relatable, thanks to its openness and simplicity, yet it burns at the touch... One my latest favorites, actually. Very well composed, gifted one.
June 22nd, 2023 04:53
The Bleeding Pen
L. B. Mek said:
I have read and thus, have become a fan!
I bow to your superior talent, dear Poet
ink brave, soar high and may
your mighty Pen
shine, ever-Bright!
Thank you for choosing to share
June 2nd, 2023 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
I have read and thus, have become a fan!
I bow to your superior talent, dear Poet
ink brave, soar high and may
your mighty Pen
shine, ever-Bright!
Thank you for choosing to share
June 2nd, 2023 03:54
Keeping it “Untitled.”
Bobby O said:
I was able to easily give w this piece. Like no smokey sings
“Cause if you want it you got it forever”
April 30th, 2023 16:20
Bobby O said:
I was able to easily give w this piece. Like no smokey sings
“Cause if you want it you got it forever”
April 30th, 2023 16:20
dancing in your pink cashmere.
Bobby O said:
You moonlit apparition
Such a nice descriptive phrase. I prefer to think of the pink cashmere as an outfit for lust?
April 23rd, 2023 04:54
Bobby O said:
You moonlit apparition
Such a nice descriptive phrase. I prefer to think of the pink cashmere as an outfit for lust?
April 23rd, 2023 04:54
