Comments received on poems by Ace_
when i was younger
Accidental Poet said:
Isn\'t it interesting how the future seems to bump into the past? Great write Ace. 😉👍
February 24th, 2024 01:49
Accidental Poet said:
Isn\'t it interesting how the future seems to bump into the past? Great write Ace. 😉👍
February 24th, 2024 01:49
good things never last
2781 said:
The grass withers, and the flower falls, but the word of the Lord remains forever.\"
February 3rd, 2024 22:37
2781 said:
The grass withers, and the flower falls, but the word of the Lord remains forever.\"
February 3rd, 2024 22:37
i hate the person im becoming
Lorenz said:
What can I say ? Take a gun and put it to good use !
January 21st, 2024 08:43
Lorenz said:
What can I say ? Take a gun and put it to good use !
January 21st, 2024 08:43
i have heard it all before
jarcher54 said:
Your dialogues are wickedly honest and compelling. You are witty and have a gift for reproducing these internal conversations. This reader is grateful you shared.
January 18th, 2024 02:07
jarcher54 said:
Your dialogues are wickedly honest and compelling. You are witty and have a gift for reproducing these internal conversations. This reader is grateful you shared.
January 18th, 2024 02:07
me against my head
jarcher54 said:
Courageous and a little fierce... take care of yourself and thanks for sharing something so personal.
January 18th, 2024 02:04
jarcher54 said:
Courageous and a little fierce... take care of yourself and thanks for sharing something so personal.
January 18th, 2024 02:04
me against my head
orchidee said:
You\'re only young yet. That doesn\'t mean to say you\'re immature though.
I doubt it\'s a demon in your head - not a real one anyway.:)
January 3rd, 2024 03:12
orchidee said:
You\'re only young yet. That doesn\'t mean to say you\'re immature though.
I doubt it\'s a demon in your head - not a real one anyway.:)
January 3rd, 2024 03:12
actions speak louder than words
Cassie58 said:
So very true. Show not tell and that is also how to make good poetry. Pleased I stopped by this morning to be reminded of this message.
December 17th, 2023 00:32
Cassie58 said:
So very true. Show not tell and that is also how to make good poetry. Pleased I stopped by this morning to be reminded of this message.
December 17th, 2023 00:32
ur happier with her
Bragee said:
Poem with very strong emotion.
One of the hardest things to do is watch your person be happy with someone else.
Great written expression.
December 8th, 2023 10:26
Bragee said:
Poem with very strong emotion.
One of the hardest things to do is watch your person be happy with someone else.
Great written expression.
December 8th, 2023 10:26
do i like me
John Lee said:
Be okay with being hated. Because there\'s only one you and if you\'re not being true to yourself how can you ever find peace? How can anyone love you if you\'re not you? Very \'real\' and well written poem.
December 4th, 2023 20:34
John Lee said:
Be okay with being hated. Because there\'s only one you and if you\'re not being true to yourself how can you ever find peace? How can anyone love you if you\'re not you? Very \'real\' and well written poem.
December 4th, 2023 20:34
do i like me
2781 said:
Interesting, not a lot of good to imitate, out there.
December 4th, 2023 06:37
2781 said:
Interesting, not a lot of good to imitate, out there.
December 4th, 2023 06:37
i still need u
Lil said:
This just makes me cry, Its very very touching ur doing a great job.!!!
November 9th, 2023 15:49
Lil said:
This just makes me cry, Its very very touching ur doing a great job.!!!
November 9th, 2023 15:49
eating disoder battle
novaa said:
\'beauty standards and expectations,
feeding my insecurities.\'.......It\'s sad how people expect us to maintain certain standards with respect to beauty which makes us insecure about our own body. I hope you recover from whatever you are going through find a way to love yourself the way you are.
October 16th, 2023 13:11
novaa said:
\'beauty standards and expectations,
feeding my insecurities.\'.......It\'s sad how people expect us to maintain certain standards with respect to beauty which makes us insecure about our own body. I hope you recover from whatever you are going through find a way to love yourself the way you are.
October 16th, 2023 13:11
mental illness
Pop64 said:
Mental illness is very real and something that takes self treatment as well as can use outside treatment. But, your approach in this write, the speaking to the subject , really offered clarity for the reader.
September 28th, 2023 07:36
Pop64 said:
Mental illness is very real and something that takes self treatment as well as can use outside treatment. But, your approach in this write, the speaking to the subject , really offered clarity for the reader.
September 28th, 2023 07:36
the signs of depression
Pop64 said:
communication is so often not expressed verbally, as it is more expressed through action or no action. With depression, there are signs, not words. This carries through reminding me to watch and listen, to pay attention to the little things that we tend to overlook. Very well expressed.
September 27th, 2023 10:38
Pop64 said:
communication is so often not expressed verbally, as it is more expressed through action or no action. With depression, there are signs, not words. This carries through reminding me to watch and listen, to pay attention to the little things that we tend to overlook. Very well expressed.
September 27th, 2023 10:38
sh
Pop64 said:
Upon reading this, I am reminded of the fact that we oftentimes wish people understood us, but we do not want to take the time to have to explain. Life is hard, simply put, everybody should understand that. I do not want to come off as preachy or anything like that, but since your words are written I am compelled say that this is an honest, but harsh piece, yet a write that inspires thought and consideration of others and what they may be going through and for that, I say good writing.
September 13th, 2023 07:45
Pop64 said:
Upon reading this, I am reminded of the fact that we oftentimes wish people understood us, but we do not want to take the time to have to explain. Life is hard, simply put, everybody should understand that. I do not want to come off as preachy or anything like that, but since your words are written I am compelled say that this is an honest, but harsh piece, yet a write that inspires thought and consideration of others and what they may be going through and for that, I say good writing.
September 13th, 2023 07:45
outsider (TW sh)
L. B. Mek said:
or maybe tomorrow
try something new
a hard thing, but one
that will repay you
all your life
maybe tomorrow, try
to please the person
in that mirror reflection
or if that\'s impossible, right now
just try, to have a conversation
find out, what you
like
what makes you
feel good
how you see yourself
if you were the heroin
in your life..
try something like that
and soon
day after day, what others say
or do
will matter a little less
because, you\'ll be too busy
finding out about
and falling in love with
..yourself
\'the only\' best friend
your are guaranteed in life
(i know not much
but this
I know to be true)
September 8th, 2023 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
or maybe tomorrow
try something new
a hard thing, but one
that will repay you
all your life
maybe tomorrow, try
to please the person
in that mirror reflection
or if that\'s impossible, right now
just try, to have a conversation
find out, what you
like
what makes you
feel good
how you see yourself
if you were the heroin
in your life..
try something like that
and soon
day after day, what others say
or do
will matter a little less
because, you\'ll be too busy
finding out about
and falling in love with
..yourself
\'the only\' best friend
your are guaranteed in life
(i know not much
but this
I know to be true)
September 8th, 2023 06:09
falling for the wrong person
Beth K said:
Don’t give up, Ace! I pray you will meet the right person when the time is right!
July 29th, 2023 19:46
Beth K said:
Don’t give up, Ace! I pray you will meet the right person when the time is right!
July 29th, 2023 19:46
is it love or just a stupid crush
L. B. Mek said:
difference between a crush
and a relationship
is a step, be brave
take that extra step, get close
if they move in close or wait
to hear you out
play all your cards, no hedging
that way
you\'ll either find yourself on a path
to love
with them, or
you\'ll be getting over them and
getting closer to that special someone
awaiting your arrival..
(lol
or something like that
but what do i know
do you, stay brave
try to live a life devoid of regrets)
rejection hurts
but it\'s more a stubbed toe kinda pain
sharp and acute, but quick to pass
regret\'s
are more like a cancerous plague
they have a tendency to taint your future choices
and warp you mindset, towards a more negative state
avoid them at all cost!
lol
(scary much)
July 28th, 2023 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
difference between a crush
and a relationship
is a step, be brave
take that extra step, get close
if they move in close or wait
to hear you out
play all your cards, no hedging
that way
you\'ll either find yourself on a path
to love
with them, or
you\'ll be getting over them and
getting closer to that special someone
awaiting your arrival..
(lol
or something like that
but what do i know
do you, stay brave
try to live a life devoid of regrets)
rejection hurts
but it\'s more a stubbed toe kinda pain
sharp and acute, but quick to pass
regret\'s
are more like a cancerous plague
they have a tendency to taint your future choices
and warp you mindset, towards a more negative state
avoid them at all cost!
lol
(scary much)
July 28th, 2023 06:05
the fantasy that ended as a tradey
Bobby O said:
I’m guessing you euphemistically use the word FUNNY. I feel ya, what I thought before I married was way way different than what I thought later on. I blame that I let Confirmation Bias go unchecked. Brainwashing ourselves sometimes is part of it.
July 14th, 2023 21:02
Bobby O said:
I’m guessing you euphemistically use the word FUNNY. I feel ya, what I thought before I married was way way different than what I thought later on. I blame that I let Confirmation Bias go unchecked. Brainwashing ourselves sometimes is part of it.
July 14th, 2023 21:02
my fake smile
L. B. Mek said:
(fained smiles, make for weak
armour
in our cutthroat jungles of life)
thanks for sharing, stay strong!
May 22nd, 2023 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
(fained smiles, make for weak
armour
in our cutthroat jungles of life)
thanks for sharing, stay strong!
May 22nd, 2023 04:31
I wish
Norman Flagtea said:
Hang in there, Ace. This is a very good poem!!
Gregory Corso says that if you believe that you are a poet you are saved.
April 27th, 2023 16:37
Norman Flagtea said:
Hang in there, Ace. This is a very good poem!!
Gregory Corso says that if you believe that you are a poet you are saved.
April 27th, 2023 16:37
Demons
2781 said:
Then I will confess to you that your own right hand can save you.
April 26th, 2023 18:22
2781 said:
Then I will confess to you that your own right hand can save you.
April 26th, 2023 18:22
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