Comments received on poems by DontSleepOnTheBoy
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jjulia said:
You really pierced through my heart! This is some deep stuff. There was no cliche in your poetry. 10/10.
May 10th, 2023 21:48
jjulia said:
You really pierced through my heart! This is some deep stuff. There was no cliche in your poetry. 10/10.
May 10th, 2023 21:48
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Bobby O said:
Here is a truth that’s hard for some people to fully realize. Now , I am not referring to your nice phrase and cadence and rhyme but rather I suggest that a fiction exists and it might not be noticed yet by you, and that’s normal and expected , but most everyone that has been through the raging pain that leaps from your pen does know. It’s one of those equations that sounds like math. If A is certain then we can know B, without doubt. To be truly over and to be glad inside that it’s over , there is one universal truth. That only happens when what she does, what she says , what she did , no longer matters one iota. Nothing matters in any behavior involving what was and who she is. By the tone of your piece I’m very sure you have not yet reached that peace. So whatever is residually present , anger, love, bitterness or desire for revenge. Is the A which ipso facto renders the B , what you wrote, Fiction It might not be a good strategy to post fir people to see when all those people know what’s written is not true. We are all certain of it. This is not an easy time and I feel for you but challenge yourself to eliminate those fictions from your posts. I hope you take to heart this universal truth as I know it true cuz I found out the hardest and stretched drama out so long never knowing how my actions were up for ridicule. My best to you. It will get better. .
May 10th, 2023 19:20
Bobby O said:
Here is a truth that’s hard for some people to fully realize. Now , I am not referring to your nice phrase and cadence and rhyme but rather I suggest that a fiction exists and it might not be noticed yet by you, and that’s normal and expected , but most everyone that has been through the raging pain that leaps from your pen does know. It’s one of those equations that sounds like math. If A is certain then we can know B, without doubt. To be truly over and to be glad inside that it’s over , there is one universal truth. That only happens when what she does, what she says , what she did , no longer matters one iota. Nothing matters in any behavior involving what was and who she is. By the tone of your piece I’m very sure you have not yet reached that peace. So whatever is residually present , anger, love, bitterness or desire for revenge. Is the A which ipso facto renders the B , what you wrote, Fiction It might not be a good strategy to post fir people to see when all those people know what’s written is not true. We are all certain of it. This is not an easy time and I feel for you but challenge yourself to eliminate those fictions from your posts. I hope you take to heart this universal truth as I know it true cuz I found out the hardest and stretched drama out so long never knowing how my actions were up for ridicule. My best to you. It will get better. .
May 10th, 2023 19:20
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DontSleepOnTheBoy said:
I think you\'ll really like the rest of the chapter then. Look out to the next two pieces I post; I\'d really appreciate your feedback 🙂
May 10th, 2023 19:15
DontSleepOnTheBoy said:
I think you\'ll really like the rest of the chapter then. Look out to the next two pieces I post; I\'d really appreciate your feedback 🙂
May 10th, 2023 19:15
