Comments received on poems by Dark
A Lonely Man
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Sometimes, he finds a moment of joy,
A glimmer of hope he cannot destroy,
And though the pain may never cease,
He clings to these moments, a source of peace.
For though his life may seem so bleak,
There\'s a strength within him he must seek,
And though the road ahead may be rough,
He\'ll find a way to endure, be tough.\'
(More power to you, dear poet
thanks for sharing, stay strong)
May 8th, 2023 06:38
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Sometimes, he finds a moment of joy,
A glimmer of hope he cannot destroy,
And though the pain may never cease,
He clings to these moments, a source of peace.
For though his life may seem so bleak,
There\'s a strength within him he must seek,
And though the road ahead may be rough,
He\'ll find a way to endure, be tough.\'
(More power to you, dear poet
thanks for sharing, stay strong)
May 8th, 2023 06:38
A Lonely Man
2781 said:
Seems like a bit of a theme
You sound close to the answer
Good luck.
May 8th, 2023 03:55
2781 said:
Seems like a bit of a theme
You sound close to the answer
Good luck.
May 8th, 2023 03:55