Over- seas
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully intricate in your choice
of wording and imagery
thanks for sharing and remember
peoples opinion on your work
aren\'t necessarily, the correct opinion
being new to something, isn\'t a crime
everyone, started out the same
it\'s just some
self-righteously forget, they did
so write
how and what you want
let refinement find you, when
and as, you progress
in your \'chosen\'
journey of Poesy and artistry
too many people, rush
to try and perfect their art
based on the whims and critiques
of hacks, who lack talent
themselves
instead, better I think
to have confidence in yourself
curate your own path
at your own speed
read other works, find what you like
and what you don\'t for yourself
take people\'s comments, as just
that mere bystander \'commentary
you choose! how your art blossoms
(really liked these lines:
\'The rocking of the boat
*Brings* fear to our throats
We look to the sky
Stars shinning so bright)

May 8th, 2023 05:38