Comments received on poems by Bloodorange
I never new
L. B. Mek said:
impassioned and sincere, wonderful imagery
thanks for sharing
September 25th, 2023 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
impassioned and sincere, wonderful imagery
thanks for sharing
September 25th, 2023 05:12
The broken
L. B. Mek said:
try to survive, long enough
to check if that better, promise
will be realised
whilst you busily find a path
to another
bright dawn\'s, blank canvas
September 4th, 2023 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
try to survive, long enough
to check if that better, promise
will be realised
whilst you busily find a path
to another
bright dawn\'s, blank canvas
September 4th, 2023 05:32
Stuck
lisztmsv said:
thank you for your carefully constructed piece. each word & each phrase barely touches the surface. it\'s meaning is far more than what many can express & you have done lovely in your expressions. i look forward to reading more of your works. i felt this pierce me deep.
May 20th, 2023 13:40
lisztmsv said:
thank you for your carefully constructed piece. each word & each phrase barely touches the surface. it\'s meaning is far more than what many can express & you have done lovely in your expressions. i look forward to reading more of your works. i felt this pierce me deep.
May 20th, 2023 13:40
SLEEP
2781 said:
I went through that, my mind so active it wouldn\'t shut down. Tried counting sheep, nothing. If I could fantasise of something completely foreign to my F-upped situation I could find myself drifting off. That was years ago.
I now sleep like a baby.
May 13th, 2023 03:04
2781 said:
I went through that, my mind so active it wouldn\'t shut down. Tried counting sheep, nothing. If I could fantasise of something completely foreign to my F-upped situation I could find myself drifting off. That was years ago.
I now sleep like a baby.
May 13th, 2023 03:04
SLEEP
Serene said:
Wow! I am a sleep deprived person, i could totally feel every single word! Well written and hope you find solutions to your issues soon :)
May 13th, 2023 02:40
Serene said:
Wow! I am a sleep deprived person, i could totally feel every single word! Well written and hope you find solutions to your issues soon :)
May 13th, 2023 02:40
SLEEP
Bobby O said:
The dichotomy here I believe is that you know that answer to the question you so cleverly pose as the repeated statement. “I wish..,,” admitting you’re scared and listing and recognizing a few better places , lavender sky and sun yellow sunflower yellow, is an indication that your finding that strength needed to resolve and your kinda raving up to do the hardest part, which is escaping from the corral of delay, possibly self imposed. This piece took a certain bravery to write and I believe that’s indicative of the resolve you soon will let surface. My best thought. I liked the poem.
May 13th, 2023 01:51
Bobby O said:
The dichotomy here I believe is that you know that answer to the question you so cleverly pose as the repeated statement. “I wish..,,” admitting you’re scared and listing and recognizing a few better places , lavender sky and sun yellow sunflower yellow, is an indication that your finding that strength needed to resolve and your kinda raving up to do the hardest part, which is escaping from the corral of delay, possibly self imposed. This piece took a certain bravery to write and I believe that’s indicative of the resolve you soon will let surface. My best thought. I liked the poem.
May 13th, 2023 01:51
Stuck
-Hannah- said:
Your words are so easy to relate to. I hope you can feel free one day.
May 12th, 2023 11:51
-Hannah- said:
Your words are so easy to relate to. I hope you can feel free one day.
May 12th, 2023 11:51
Stuck
2781 said:
Apparently our brains don\'t differentiate between physical pain and emotional pain. Whatever you are writing about sounds painful. Not the writing! Just the symptoms.
May 12th, 2023 05:16
2781 said:
Apparently our brains don\'t differentiate between physical pain and emotional pain. Whatever you are writing about sounds painful. Not the writing! Just the symptoms.
May 12th, 2023 05:16
