Comments received on poems by horrorautumnpoet
Doppelgänger
Bobby O said:
Now, I see the connection. Seems you developed the strains of strength as necessary tool to deal with issue and style to combat and you have it metaphorical presence as it developed. Admittedly my attempt though visiting some common aspects in that world bemoaned the fact a weakness shadows on the journey and yet unable to extract. An ever present threat to dilute or or dissuade the optimal focused act. Simple weakness his constant bane.
Simpatico my brother. Enjoying this !!!
May 27th, 2023 04:08
Bobby O said:
Now, I see the connection. Seems you developed the strains of strength as necessary tool to deal with issue and style to combat and you have it metaphorical presence as it developed. Admittedly my attempt though visiting some common aspects in that world bemoaned the fact a weakness shadows on the journey and yet unable to extract. An ever present threat to dilute or or dissuade the optimal focused act. Simple weakness his constant bane.
Simpatico my brother. Enjoying this !!!
May 27th, 2023 04:08
Roses Don\'t Hurt
Bobby O said:
The thorn eternal , is that maybe representative of the ubiquitous force that we may expect ot to forever be our foe and suggests no rest for those enjoined to clear a righteous path?
May 27th, 2023 03:48
Bobby O said:
The thorn eternal , is that maybe representative of the ubiquitous force that we may expect ot to forever be our foe and suggests no rest for those enjoined to clear a righteous path?
May 27th, 2023 03:48
Roses Don\'t Hurt
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Roses don’t hurt” by horrorautumnpoet
The wind blows and blows away some petals. Just as with our lives. But, we have no choice but to struggle on. The rose has a short lifespan. Ours is longer, but might be extinguished at any moment. Both the rose and our life are fragile. So, we must make the most of it. Poetry lasts forever, so we must compose poetry. The thorn seems twisting and always looking to prick us. It does a good job protecting the rose, however. Perhaps that is why it is there, as a guardian. Soman Ragavan. 27 May, 2023. //
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May 27th, 2023 03:44
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Roses don’t hurt” by horrorautumnpoet
The wind blows and blows away some petals. Just as with our lives. But, we have no choice but to struggle on. The rose has a short lifespan. Ours is longer, but might be extinguished at any moment. Both the rose and our life are fragile. So, we must make the most of it. Poetry lasts forever, so we must compose poetry. The thorn seems twisting and always looking to prick us. It does a good job protecting the rose, however. Perhaps that is why it is there, as a guardian. Soman Ragavan. 27 May, 2023. //
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May 27th, 2023 03:44
Doppelgänger
Bobby O said:
The replica and effigy.
Too many cool lines here to list all but that one hit the spot w zest.
Nice write, great read in fact I read it twice. Check my latest CLICHE’ NO LONGER , maybe if you have a chance.
Thanks fir the piece.
May 13th, 2023 12:02
Bobby O said:
The replica and effigy.
Too many cool lines here to list all but that one hit the spot w zest.
Nice write, great read in fact I read it twice. Check my latest CLICHE’ NO LONGER , maybe if you have a chance.
Thanks fir the piece.
May 13th, 2023 12:02
