Comments received on poems by mick
the love of a rose
Rajat said:
it was nice to read that!please ensure that every word of every line starts with a capital letter...and the spelling of joyfull should be joyful!
February 7th, 2011 09:18
Rajat said:
it was nice to read that!please ensure that every word of every line starts with a capital letter...and the spelling of joyfull should be joyful!
February 7th, 2011 09:18
the raven (unfinished)
mick said:
don't really have an ending to this one at the moment and no clues on how to finish it.
Lol hopefully somethings gonna cross my mind soon!
December 5th, 2010 13:44
mick said:
don't really have an ending to this one at the moment and no clues on how to finish it.
Lol hopefully somethings gonna cross my mind soon!
December 5th, 2010 13:44
the raven (unfinished)
Cheeky Missy said:
I too look forward the more of this poem! I like the picture you've painted in it, but it is chilling....for what is it alluding to? I like your use of end=rhyming.
December 5th, 2010 11:57
Cheeky Missy said:
I too look forward the more of this poem! I like the picture you've painted in it, but it is chilling....for what is it alluding to? I like your use of end=rhyming.
December 5th, 2010 11:57
the love of a rose
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I like how you drew it. It is bittersweet....and poetically symbolic of something deeper that pricks you forever, though time dulls the pain/memory?
December 5th, 2010 11:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I like how you drew it. It is bittersweet....and poetically symbolic of something deeper that pricks you forever, though time dulls the pain/memory?
December 5th, 2010 11:46
the raven (unfinished)
Fran said:
Nice start, waiting for the finished version ;)
December 5th, 2010 06:45
Fran said:
Nice start, waiting for the finished version ;)
December 5th, 2010 06:45