Comments received on poems by mick



the love of a rose
Rajat said:

it was nice to read that!please ensure that every word of every line starts with a capital letter...and the spelling of joyfull should be joyful!

February 7th, 2011 09:18

the raven (unfinished)
mick said:

don't really have an ending to this one at the moment and no clues on how to finish it.
Lol hopefully somethings gonna cross my mind soon!

December 5th, 2010 13:44

the raven (unfinished)
Cheeky Missy said:

I too look forward the more of this poem! I like the picture you've painted in it, but it is chilling....for what is it alluding to? I like your use of end=rhyming.

December 5th, 2010 11:57

the love of a rose
Cheeky Missy said:

Wow. I like how you drew it. It is bittersweet....and poetically symbolic of something deeper that pricks you forever, though time dulls the pain/memory?

December 5th, 2010 11:46

the raven (unfinished)
Fran said:

Nice start, waiting for the finished version ;)

December 5th, 2010 06:45