mick

the love of a rose

both gentle and dangerous

she is the most beautiful thing, 

her appearance so alluring it makes you sing

the love of a rose is the strangest thing!

 

her sent so delightful to make you addicted

her bebbles so soft, she makes you fly

the love of a rose so enchanting,

so sad; for when she is gone

the light fades away

it will take some time to be joyfull again.

Comments2

  • Cheeky Missy

    Wow. I like how you drew it. It is bittersweet....and poetically symbolic of something deeper that pricks you forever, though time dulls the pain/memory?

  • Rajat

    it was nice to read that!please ensure that every word of every line starts with a capital letter...and the spelling of joyfull should be joyful!



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