Comments received on poems by germanamericanchurch
It’s Me Jenna?
Thomas W Case said:
Yes they are. I know first-hand. Great poem.
October 24th, 2023 18:58
Thomas W Case said:
Yes they are. I know first-hand. Great poem.
October 24th, 2023 18:58
The Underwearless Day
germanamericanchurch said:
Don’t have underwear on still:) primitive style
January 21st, 2023 17:51
germanamericanchurch said:
Don’t have underwear on still:) primitive style
January 21st, 2023 17:51
Bad Weed
germanamericanchurch said:
Glad you liked it :) thank David Nichols for his research- university funded
September 21st, 2022 18:04
germanamericanchurch said:
Glad you liked it :) thank David Nichols for his research- university funded
September 21st, 2022 18:04
Bad Weed
jark said:
There is nothing in the world more helpless and irresponsible and depraved than a man in the depths of a spice binge. Love the rich horrible visuals.
September 21st, 2022 17:47
jark said:
There is nothing in the world more helpless and irresponsible and depraved than a man in the depths of a spice binge. Love the rich horrible visuals.
September 21st, 2022 17:47
Inside of each other
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Love me some sex poetry :)
February 24th, 2022 05:08
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Love me some sex poetry :)
February 24th, 2022 05:08
Inside of each other
Paul Bell said:
Just when I thought my frosties were fulfilling, and now I\'ve realised dessert was the real breakfast.
February 24th, 2022 04:32
Paul Bell said:
Just when I thought my frosties were fulfilling, and now I\'ve realised dessert was the real breakfast.
February 24th, 2022 04:32
The Mushroom Man
germanamericanchurch said:
Exactly what the meaning in the writing, are we made of the mushroom ? or did the mushroom form make us who we are?
Squirrels bring mushrooms to tall trees - the mushroom squirrel of the forest - that is my hero / spirit animal -
September 23rd, 2021 02:26
germanamericanchurch said:
Exactly what the meaning in the writing, are we made of the mushroom ? or did the mushroom form make us who we are?
Squirrels bring mushrooms to tall trees - the mushroom squirrel of the forest - that is my hero / spirit animal -
September 23rd, 2021 02:26
The Mushroom Man
Doggerel Dave said:
If the mushroom is of the right quality, there would be no need for me - you could be viewing yourself in an ever expanding universe, they tell me.
September 23rd, 2021 01:25
Doggerel Dave said:
If the mushroom is of the right quality, there would be no need for me - you could be viewing yourself in an ever expanding universe, they tell me.
September 23rd, 2021 01:25
Broken Chalice
Doggerel Dave said:
A bit too enigmatic for me -and wot about the crystal didgeridoo?
September 21st, 2021 05:47
Doggerel Dave said:
A bit too enigmatic for me -and wot about the crystal didgeridoo?
September 21st, 2021 05:47
This Giant House
germanamericanchurch said:
Bears traps take extra finesse
September 21st, 2021 01:52
germanamericanchurch said:
Bears traps take extra finesse
September 21st, 2021 01:52
This Giant House
Doggerel Dave said:
Really don\'t think I\'m likely to own or encounter a bear trap but believe I am open minded enough to take your advice without the need for any experiential learning.
Interesting little write.
September 17th, 2021 07:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Really don\'t think I\'m likely to own or encounter a bear trap but believe I am open minded enough to take your advice without the need for any experiential learning.
Interesting little write.
September 17th, 2021 07:05
The Crescent Alter
germanamericanchurch said:
The point to this poem is that shamanic ritual can be suburban as well as adopt modern elements due to the growing of your sacrament being scientific/ botanical:)
June 30th, 2021 11:31
germanamericanchurch said:
The point to this poem is that shamanic ritual can be suburban as well as adopt modern elements due to the growing of your sacrament being scientific/ botanical:)
June 30th, 2021 11:31
The Crescent Alter
Doggerel Dave said:
I somehow feel that an attempt at author commentary would have been helpful...
June 29th, 2021 18:31
Doggerel Dave said:
I somehow feel that an attempt at author commentary would have been helpful...
June 29th, 2021 18:31
Liar
L. B. Mek said:
ah, forgive my Open minded questioning, ignorance
this must be the latest reincarnation
of Blind faith\'s, Judgmental: \'Blessed Honesty\'
that had millions persecuted
for sneezing too loudly: in a church..
(how little we change!
What\'s the message being conveyed here, exactly?
Lets point fingers, ever-outwardly and anoint: Blame
than look inside
to make a difference and help, devoid of that divisive Bias...!)
Dear Poet,
Please feel free to delete my comment or enact
your own version of retributory words or actions..
I just, unwisely couldn\'t read and ignore
and reacted, as-ever: far too opinionatedly
Choosing to blemish your comments section
inexcusably,
(I\'m sorry: sincerely
however worthlessly - belated, this may read)
May 10th, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
ah, forgive my Open minded questioning, ignorance
this must be the latest reincarnation
of Blind faith\'s, Judgmental: \'Blessed Honesty\'
that had millions persecuted
for sneezing too loudly: in a church..
(how little we change!
What\'s the message being conveyed here, exactly?
Lets point fingers, ever-outwardly and anoint: Blame
than look inside
to make a difference and help, devoid of that divisive Bias...!)
Dear Poet,
Please feel free to delete my comment or enact
your own version of retributory words or actions..
I just, unwisely couldn\'t read and ignore
and reacted, as-ever: far too opinionatedly
Choosing to blemish your comments section
inexcusably,
(I\'m sorry: sincerely
however worthlessly - belated, this may read)
May 10th, 2021 05:37
Liar
germanamericanchurch said:
Yeah just moved on to a new street always wonder who your neighborhoods are:) the psychedelic sacrament aspect just adds another layer to living around other life ways - jail the shaman -order in the court - sweet Mary
May 10th, 2021 02:34
germanamericanchurch said:
Yeah just moved on to a new street always wonder who your neighborhoods are:) the psychedelic sacrament aspect just adds another layer to living around other life ways - jail the shaman -order in the court - sweet Mary
May 10th, 2021 02:34
Liar
rosiedm said:
True .. too many need to put on a show maybe we all do it a little but some do.it extremely. Just a need to be seen as having more and bigger and better than the neighbour whos still the 10 year old car 😁
May 9th, 2021 14:08
rosiedm said:
True .. too many need to put on a show maybe we all do it a little but some do.it extremely. Just a need to be seen as having more and bigger and better than the neighbour whos still the 10 year old car 😁
May 9th, 2021 14:08
miniature house
germanamericanchurch said:
It’s not about having too many babies, but being still a baby having child that terrifies - lord of the flies style - with a untrained pitbull
March 30th, 2021 10:58
germanamericanchurch said:
It’s not about having too many babies, but being still a baby having child that terrifies - lord of the flies style - with a untrained pitbull
March 30th, 2021 10:58
miniature house
L. B. Mek said:
Don’t run into parenthood, use a condom: \'sweet Jesus!\' lol
and here we are in a world where widely differing countries like Denmark and Japan, are facing population decimation because they\'re not making enough babies...
and they claim \'twilight zone\' is mere fantasy..
a great read!
\'So what’s worse then all that is videos games of denial when u raced into being papa to the world.\'
March 30th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
Don’t run into parenthood, use a condom: \'sweet Jesus!\' lol
and here we are in a world where widely differing countries like Denmark and Japan, are facing population decimation because they\'re not making enough babies...
and they claim \'twilight zone\' is mere fantasy..
a great read!
\'So what’s worse then all that is videos games of denial when u raced into being papa to the world.\'
March 30th, 2021 05:57
miniature house
Doggerel Dave said:
Spot on Blue. You know that , depending on your audience, you will meet some resistance....but not here.
In a western \'first\' world, overpopulated, with many caught in the vice like grip you describe, a big reckoning is coming - if climate change doesn\'t get them first...
March 30th, 2021 00:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Spot on Blue. You know that , depending on your audience, you will meet some resistance....but not here.
In a western \'first\' world, overpopulated, with many caught in the vice like grip you describe, a big reckoning is coming - if climate change doesn\'t get them first...
March 30th, 2021 00:30
The Cigarette
germanamericanchurch said:
Lost a friend over his denial of cigarettes but the irony is that shamanic var. tobacco seems very different somehow to me - more traditional and spiritual
March 9th, 2021 17:25
germanamericanchurch said:
Lost a friend over his denial of cigarettes but the irony is that shamanic var. tobacco seems very different somehow to me - more traditional and spiritual
March 9th, 2021 17:25
The Cigarette
L. B. Mek said:
crude, but with purpose, a message that is always pertinent and necessary,
so long as our walk to a cash register
insures, we are forcibly greeted
by temptation\'s mirror..
a really well executed write dear poet
March 4th, 2021 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
crude, but with purpose, a message that is always pertinent and necessary,
so long as our walk to a cash register
insures, we are forcibly greeted
by temptation\'s mirror..
a really well executed write dear poet
March 4th, 2021 05:14
Count down until E day
jarcher54 said:
Methinks Midas touched his own face... thanks for the playful images...
October 22nd, 2020 23:45
jarcher54 said:
Methinks Midas touched his own face... thanks for the playful images...
October 22nd, 2020 23:45
The Corona
germanamericanchurch said:
Thanks been working a federal building at night and the thought of pandemic keeps popping into poetry:)
February 13th, 2020 11:13
germanamericanchurch said:
Thanks been working a federal building at night and the thought of pandemic keeps popping into poetry:)
February 13th, 2020 11:13
Kowee Creek
germanamericanchurch said:
Yeah nature is part of us - and our story
December 14th, 2019 15:52
germanamericanchurch said:
Yeah nature is part of us - and our story
December 14th, 2019 15:52
Kowee Creek
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
He would have gone to war probably but loo where that got him
We need new way and a new vision it\'s started with the children let\'s pray we don\'t destroy them too...
December 14th, 2019 06:41
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
He would have gone to war probably but loo where that got him
We need new way and a new vision it\'s started with the children let\'s pray we don\'t destroy them too...
December 14th, 2019 06:41
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