Comments received on poems by Weep little lion girl
Regular sad
John Lee said:
There\'s a comfortable feeling in sadness. Perhaps we comfort ourselves there.. great write!
February 8th, 2024 21:04
John Lee said:
There\'s a comfortable feeling in sadness. Perhaps we comfort ourselves there.. great write!
February 8th, 2024 21:04
Understanding
John Lee said:
Beautifully expressed. It reminds me of my \"Happy Place\"
February 8th, 2024 21:01
John Lee said:
Beautifully expressed. It reminds me of my \"Happy Place\"
February 8th, 2024 21:01
I float (prose poetry)
dtrusss said:
Umm. yes. totally. Only feels possible in love to me. Your imagery is exciting and inviting into your world. Thanks for the whirl, as I feel this way often.
November 6th, 2023 17:58
dtrusss said:
Umm. yes. totally. Only feels possible in love to me. Your imagery is exciting and inviting into your world. Thanks for the whirl, as I feel this way often.
November 6th, 2023 17:58
Old Life
NinjaGirl said:
All too real for many. The unfortunate pains of life. Great poem!
October 30th, 2023 20:33
NinjaGirl said:
All too real for many. The unfortunate pains of life. Great poem!
October 30th, 2023 20:33
Dwindling Numbers To Win The Contest
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but I guess I\'m too dumb to understand what is going on.But hey what would I know
October 7th, 2023 23:06
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but I guess I\'m too dumb to understand what is going on.But hey what would I know
October 7th, 2023 23:06
I float (prose poetry)
peto said:
Stunning write
Keep sharing like this and be known completely
Or at least as much as you want to show
Super talent
October 2nd, 2023 10:33
peto said:
Stunning write
Keep sharing like this and be known completely
Or at least as much as you want to show
Super talent
October 2nd, 2023 10:33
I float (prose poetry)
2781 said:
cleanse first that which is within the cup and platter, that the outside of them may be clean also.
October 2nd, 2023 07:12
2781 said:
cleanse first that which is within the cup and platter, that the outside of them may be clean also.
October 2nd, 2023 07:12
I float (prose poetry)
L. B. Mek said:
!Brilliant!
(one of the most accomplished poems
I\'ve read, All year!
I hope you are proud of yourself
for inking this gem
of unflinchingly brave
self-transparency and acute insight
distilling those scars
That insure, just like you
your Poetry glows effervescent..!
\'Stay\' strong, dear Talented poet
believe ENOUGH
to manifest those better days
into your life
till then, ROAR you defiance
Sing your truth!
Thank you! for choosing to share
your Inspirational poetic talent!)
\'I have not sat in a room with you in years,\'
\'fighting a war in my head against the helium thoughts\'
\' I am not my body, I am something much smaller,\'
\'I think she ignores the stench of us both.
And I think she ignores that it doesn’t work.\'
\'We have suffered but so has she,
so we cling
to our scraps of dirty fabric.\'
\'since my grandmother passed, I think
he’s been forgetting to wash it with soap.\'
\'I know I am not broken because I was never whole.\'
\'I realized I was being betrayed by my genetics.
I was 11.
I know my mother knew about the bats in my brain
before I did\'
\'I am a polluted ocean
sung to sleep
by a dying mother nature.
I am the sinner
drowning
in the biblical flood,\'
I am the unbreakable Titanic,
and I am the nonviolent iceberg.
I am not my body, but something much bigger,
I am the roar of thunder and a burning star.\'
\'I wish to hug my mother without needing a shower.
I wish to sit in a room without being distant.\'
October 2nd, 2023 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
!Brilliant!
(one of the most accomplished poems
I\'ve read, All year!
I hope you are proud of yourself
for inking this gem
of unflinchingly brave
self-transparency and acute insight
distilling those scars
That insure, just like you
your Poetry glows effervescent..!
\'Stay\' strong, dear Talented poet
believe ENOUGH
to manifest those better days
into your life
till then, ROAR you defiance
Sing your truth!
Thank you! for choosing to share
your Inspirational poetic talent!)
\'I have not sat in a room with you in years,\'
\'fighting a war in my head against the helium thoughts\'
\' I am not my body, I am something much smaller,\'
\'I think she ignores the stench of us both.
And I think she ignores that it doesn’t work.\'
\'We have suffered but so has she,
so we cling
to our scraps of dirty fabric.\'
\'since my grandmother passed, I think
he’s been forgetting to wash it with soap.\'
\'I know I am not broken because I was never whole.\'
\'I realized I was being betrayed by my genetics.
I was 11.
I know my mother knew about the bats in my brain
before I did\'
\'I am a polluted ocean
sung to sleep
by a dying mother nature.
I am the sinner
drowning
in the biblical flood,\'
I am the unbreakable Titanic,
and I am the nonviolent iceberg.
I am not my body, but something much bigger,
I am the roar of thunder and a burning star.\'
\'I wish to hug my mother without needing a shower.
I wish to sit in a room without being distant.\'
October 2nd, 2023 05:40
Rock bottom
nephilim56 said:
I know this feeling too well, to the point and very well expressed
September 30th, 2023 04:59
nephilim56 said:
I know this feeling too well, to the point and very well expressed
September 30th, 2023 04:59
Rock bottom
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry for your struggles dear poet
but if you can feel the rocks
then you still have a chance
to try and crawl back up
\'stay\' strong! one day at a time
thanks for choosing to share
and letting others know they\'re not alone
September 29th, 2023 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry for your struggles dear poet
but if you can feel the rocks
then you still have a chance
to try and crawl back up
\'stay\' strong! one day at a time
thanks for choosing to share
and letting others know they\'re not alone
September 29th, 2023 06:44
Regular sad
LIZ said:
I see it as a release of emotions! But, yes, just regular sad.....after all the anger!! Stay strong! Thank you for sharing!!
September 26th, 2023 04:34
LIZ said:
I see it as a release of emotions! But, yes, just regular sad.....after all the anger!! Stay strong! Thank you for sharing!!
September 26th, 2023 04:34
Decisions
Bobby O said:
Nice piece with thought conveyed nicely to the paper. With that strength perhaps he’ll follow you in a positive direction and the blanket may disappear
August 21st, 2023 04:31
Bobby O said:
Nice piece with thought conveyed nicely to the paper. With that strength perhaps he’ll follow you in a positive direction and the blanket may disappear
August 21st, 2023 04:31
