Comments received on poems by Weep little lion girl



Fish (Out of water)
sorenbarrett said:

Very nice tree. I love the analogy of a fish drowning. This was brought together very well in the ending of the poem with lungs burning.

September 5th, 2024 06:39

I won\'t let you touch me
sorenbarrett said:

A gentle work that although clear sends its message in a sensitive form. Nicely done

August 13th, 2024 05:07

I won\'t let you touch me
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

August 13th, 2024 00:35

(I can stay here) For a while.
Dan Williams said:

Just lovely. We need to have our soul at rest in whatever way that works. Good Job

August 3rd, 2024 23:41

(I can stay here) For a while.
Cassie58 said:

The bath is a fine place to drown your worries and to find some peace. Too much time in it doesn’t do your skin much good:) I very much like what you have written here. Good job.

August 3rd, 2024 08:08

(I can stay here) For a while.
Neville said:



I was browsing .. stopped here and fell in love with poetry all over again ..

August 3rd, 2024 05:47

(I can stay here) For a while.
Thoughtless said:

There is nothing more soothing than getting lost in a bath. One can get too lost, however.

August 2nd, 2024 09:59

(I can stay here) For a while.
sorenbarrett said:

Here is a beautiful expression for a need for space and some great lines starting with the first two. Very nicely done. Loved it.

August 2nd, 2024 09:10

*Friendly with the enemy*
sorenbarrett said:

This could be metaphoric and if so a deep poem indeed. If not metaphoric it still poses a philosophical and psychological question.

July 24th, 2024 06:42

All by my own (how i like it)
2781 said:

You need to keep some meat on the bones.

July 23rd, 2024 22:45

*Friendly with the enemy*
NinjaGirl said:

Some days I think the bed is like a magnet
One step at a time... consider it a win if you do get out of bed, and if you brush your hair
Keep going!!!

July 23rd, 2024 20:17

All by my own (how i like it)
NinjaGirl said:

I remember wanting to live alone so I could starve without anyone noticing..
Beautiful write.

July 23rd, 2024 20:07

All by my own (how i like it)
mya said:

oh

July 23rd, 2024 12:22

All by my own (how i like it)
sorenbarrett said:

Sad, a need for reassurance and safety. When the opinion of others means more than one\'s own well being there is a need for change.

July 23rd, 2024 06:09

Awkward (and queer)
sorenbarrett said:

This touches close to home because many including me remember in our teen years we felt somewhat this way. You\'ve touched a common chord and that is what poetry is all about.

July 22nd, 2024 05:13

Awkward (and queer)
aDarkerMind said:

touching indeed.
but, fight we must.
if we don\'t fight, what chance do we have?

July 21st, 2024 11:40

Awkward (and queer)
Thad Wilk said:

A really touching and
melancholy write! ✍️
Really pulls on
the heartstrings. 😢
Thanks for sharing,
don\'t give up the fight!
Best wishes 🤗 🌹. Thad

July 20th, 2024 21:30

Romance is made up! (I swear to god!)
Bloodbat_Workshop said:

This is well written

July 19th, 2024 10:42

Romance is made up! (I swear to god!)
2781 said:

Sounds like a song I heard.

July 19th, 2024 08:34

Romance is made up! (I swear to god!)
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

July 19th, 2024 00:52

What\'s your story, Morning glory?
Doggerel Dave said:

Not too crazy, not too whiny - By the time you hit mid twenties it will all be a distant memory. Hang in there - it may seem a long time, but it will go too fast. Good luck.

July 15th, 2024 17:26

Regular sad
SteveOgun said:

Poignant in so few words.

April 25th, 2024 21:23

Rock bottom
Nat A. Spade said:

I\'ve totally been there!

February 28th, 2024 21:17

Old Life
John Lee said:

I just want to float to the moon

February 8th, 2024 21:07

Regular sad
John Lee said:

There\'s a comfortable feeling in sadness. Perhaps we comfort ourselves there.. great write!

February 8th, 2024 21:04

Understanding
John Lee said:

Beautifully expressed. It reminds me of my \"Happy Place\"

February 8th, 2024 21:01

I float (prose poetry)
dtrusss said:

Umm. yes. totally. Only feels possible in love to me. Your imagery is exciting and inviting into your world. Thanks for the whirl, as I feel this way often.

November 6th, 2023 17:58

Old Life
NinjaGirl said:

All too real for many. The unfortunate pains of life. Great poem!

October 30th, 2023 20:33

Dwindling Numbers To Win The Contest
David Wakeling said:

I read this twice but I guess I\'m too dumb to understand what is going on.But hey what would I know

October 7th, 2023 23:06

I float (prose poetry)
peto said:

Stunning write
Keep sharing like this and be known completely
Or at least as much as you want to show
Super talent

October 2nd, 2023 10:33

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