Comments received on poems by Weep little lion girl
My Red Hands
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor here of the bleeding inner self and childbirth. There is much to be read into this poem that holds its own wisdom. Very nicely done.
February 14th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor here of the bleeding inner self and childbirth. There is much to be read into this poem that holds its own wisdom. Very nicely done.
February 14th, 2025 05:18
My name is....
Poetic Licence said:
Very expressive and emotionally write, but you can change your name, Enjoyed the read from a poetic point of view, not the unhappiness.
February 10th, 2025 03:38
Poetic Licence said:
Very expressive and emotionally write, but you can change your name, Enjoyed the read from a poetic point of view, not the unhappiness.
February 10th, 2025 03:38
The women with messy hair
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written piece meaning more than one thing, enjoyed the read
February 1st, 2025 01:08
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written piece meaning more than one thing, enjoyed the read
February 1st, 2025 01:08
The women with messy hair
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that goes deeper than the surface. Yes there is the literal of women gathered in a hair salon but also the metaphor of messy hair and more. Very nice
January 31st, 2025 19:16
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that goes deeper than the surface. Yes there is the literal of women gathered in a hair salon but also the metaphor of messy hair and more. Very nice
January 31st, 2025 19:16
Table (by the view)
Poetic Licence said:
I echo the sentiments of the author, well written poem
December 17th, 2024 00:31
Poetic Licence said:
I echo the sentiments of the author, well written poem
December 17th, 2024 00:31
Diaries of a youthful alcoholic
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly this effecting an ever increasing numbers of young people and something that needs addressing, Thank you for sharing
December 14th, 2024 01:12
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly this effecting an ever increasing numbers of young people and something that needs addressing, Thank you for sharing
December 14th, 2024 01:12
Fish (Out of water)
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice tree. I love the analogy of a fish drowning. This was brought together very well in the ending of the poem with lungs burning.
September 5th, 2024 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice tree. I love the analogy of a fish drowning. This was brought together very well in the ending of the poem with lungs burning.
September 5th, 2024 06:39
I won\'t let you touch me
sorenbarrett said:
A gentle work that although clear sends its message in a sensitive form. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
A gentle work that although clear sends its message in a sensitive form. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 05:07
(I can stay here) For a while.
Dan Williams said:
Just lovely. We need to have our soul at rest in whatever way that works. Good Job
August 3rd, 2024 23:41
Dan Williams said:
Just lovely. We need to have our soul at rest in whatever way that works. Good Job
August 3rd, 2024 23:41
(I can stay here) For a while.
Cassie58 said:
The bath is a fine place to drown your worries and to find some peace. Too much time in it doesn’t do your skin much good:) I very much like what you have written here. Good job.
August 3rd, 2024 08:08
Cassie58 said:
The bath is a fine place to drown your worries and to find some peace. Too much time in it doesn’t do your skin much good:) I very much like what you have written here. Good job.
August 3rd, 2024 08:08
(I can stay here) For a while.
Neville said:
I was browsing .. stopped here and fell in love with poetry all over again ..
August 3rd, 2024 05:47
Neville said:
I was browsing .. stopped here and fell in love with poetry all over again ..
August 3rd, 2024 05:47
(I can stay here) For a while.
Thoughtless said:
There is nothing more soothing than getting lost in a bath. One can get too lost, however.
August 2nd, 2024 09:59
Thoughtless said:
There is nothing more soothing than getting lost in a bath. One can get too lost, however.
August 2nd, 2024 09:59
(I can stay here) For a while.
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a beautiful expression for a need for space and some great lines starting with the first two. Very nicely done. Loved it.
August 2nd, 2024 09:10
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a beautiful expression for a need for space and some great lines starting with the first two. Very nicely done. Loved it.
August 2nd, 2024 09:10
*Friendly with the enemy*
sorenbarrett said:
This could be metaphoric and if so a deep poem indeed. If not metaphoric it still poses a philosophical and psychological question.
July 24th, 2024 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
This could be metaphoric and if so a deep poem indeed. If not metaphoric it still poses a philosophical and psychological question.
July 24th, 2024 06:42
All by my own (how i like it)
2781 said:
You need to keep some meat on the bones.
July 23rd, 2024 22:45
2781 said:
You need to keep some meat on the bones.
July 23rd, 2024 22:45
*Friendly with the enemy*
NinjaGirl said:
Some days I think the bed is like a magnet
One step at a time... consider it a win if you do get out of bed, and if you brush your hair
Keep going!!!
July 23rd, 2024 20:17
NinjaGirl said:
Some days I think the bed is like a magnet
One step at a time... consider it a win if you do get out of bed, and if you brush your hair
Keep going!!!
July 23rd, 2024 20:17
All by my own (how i like it)
NinjaGirl said:
I remember wanting to live alone so I could starve without anyone noticing..
Beautiful write.
July 23rd, 2024 20:07
NinjaGirl said:
I remember wanting to live alone so I could starve without anyone noticing..
Beautiful write.
July 23rd, 2024 20:07
All by my own (how i like it)
sorenbarrett said:
Sad, a need for reassurance and safety. When the opinion of others means more than one\'s own well being there is a need for change.
July 23rd, 2024 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Sad, a need for reassurance and safety. When the opinion of others means more than one\'s own well being there is a need for change.
July 23rd, 2024 06:09
Awkward (and queer)
sorenbarrett said:
This touches close to home because many including me remember in our teen years we felt somewhat this way. You\'ve touched a common chord and that is what poetry is all about.
July 22nd, 2024 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
This touches close to home because many including me remember in our teen years we felt somewhat this way. You\'ve touched a common chord and that is what poetry is all about.
July 22nd, 2024 05:13
Awkward (and queer)
aDarkerMind said:
touching indeed.
but, fight we must.
if we don\'t fight, what chance do we have?
July 21st, 2024 11:40
aDarkerMind said:
touching indeed.
but, fight we must.
if we don\'t fight, what chance do we have?
July 21st, 2024 11:40
Awkward (and queer)
Thad Wilk said:
A really touching and
melancholy write! ✍️
Really pulls on
the heartstrings. 😢
Thanks for sharing,
don\'t give up the fight!
Best wishes 🤗 🌹. Thad
July 20th, 2024 21:30
Thad Wilk said:
A really touching and
melancholy write! ✍️
Really pulls on
the heartstrings. 😢
Thanks for sharing,
don\'t give up the fight!
Best wishes 🤗 🌹. Thad
July 20th, 2024 21:30
Romance is made up! (I swear to god!)
Bloodbat_Workshop said:
This is well written
July 19th, 2024 10:42
Bloodbat_Workshop said:
This is well written
July 19th, 2024 10:42
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