Comments received on poems by Weep little lion girl
Table (by the view)
TobaniNataiella said:
I echo the sentiments of the author, well written poem
December 17th, 2024 00:31
TobaniNataiella said:
I echo the sentiments of the author, well written poem
December 17th, 2024 00:31
Diaries of a youthful alcoholic
TobaniNataiella said:
Sadly this effecting an ever increasing numbers of young people and something that needs addressing, Thank you for sharing
December 14th, 2024 01:12
TobaniNataiella said:
Sadly this effecting an ever increasing numbers of young people and something that needs addressing, Thank you for sharing
December 14th, 2024 01:12
Fish (Out of water)
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice tree. I love the analogy of a fish drowning. This was brought together very well in the ending of the poem with lungs burning.
September 5th, 2024 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice tree. I love the analogy of a fish drowning. This was brought together very well in the ending of the poem with lungs burning.
September 5th, 2024 06:39
I won\'t let you touch me
sorenbarrett said:
A gentle work that although clear sends its message in a sensitive form. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
A gentle work that although clear sends its message in a sensitive form. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 05:07
(I can stay here) For a while.
Dan Williams said:
Just lovely. We need to have our soul at rest in whatever way that works. Good Job
August 3rd, 2024 23:41
Dan Williams said:
Just lovely. We need to have our soul at rest in whatever way that works. Good Job
August 3rd, 2024 23:41
(I can stay here) For a while.
Cassie58 said:
The bath is a fine place to drown your worries and to find some peace. Too much time in it doesn’t do your skin much good:) I very much like what you have written here. Good job.
August 3rd, 2024 08:08
Cassie58 said:
The bath is a fine place to drown your worries and to find some peace. Too much time in it doesn’t do your skin much good:) I very much like what you have written here. Good job.
August 3rd, 2024 08:08
(I can stay here) For a while.
Neville said:
I was browsing .. stopped here and fell in love with poetry all over again ..
August 3rd, 2024 05:47
Neville said:
I was browsing .. stopped here and fell in love with poetry all over again ..
August 3rd, 2024 05:47
(I can stay here) For a while.
Thoughtless said:
There is nothing more soothing than getting lost in a bath. One can get too lost, however.
August 2nd, 2024 09:59
Thoughtless said:
There is nothing more soothing than getting lost in a bath. One can get too lost, however.
August 2nd, 2024 09:59
(I can stay here) For a while.
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a beautiful expression for a need for space and some great lines starting with the first two. Very nicely done. Loved it.
August 2nd, 2024 09:10
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a beautiful expression for a need for space and some great lines starting with the first two. Very nicely done. Loved it.
August 2nd, 2024 09:10
*Friendly with the enemy*
sorenbarrett said:
This could be metaphoric and if so a deep poem indeed. If not metaphoric it still poses a philosophical and psychological question.
July 24th, 2024 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
This could be metaphoric and if so a deep poem indeed. If not metaphoric it still poses a philosophical and psychological question.
July 24th, 2024 06:42
All by my own (how i like it)
2781 said:
You need to keep some meat on the bones.
July 23rd, 2024 22:45
2781 said:
You need to keep some meat on the bones.
July 23rd, 2024 22:45
*Friendly with the enemy*
NinjaGirl said:
Some days I think the bed is like a magnet
One step at a time... consider it a win if you do get out of bed, and if you brush your hair
Keep going!!!
July 23rd, 2024 20:17
NinjaGirl said:
Some days I think the bed is like a magnet
One step at a time... consider it a win if you do get out of bed, and if you brush your hair
Keep going!!!
July 23rd, 2024 20:17
All by my own (how i like it)
NinjaGirl said:
I remember wanting to live alone so I could starve without anyone noticing..
Beautiful write.
July 23rd, 2024 20:07
NinjaGirl said:
I remember wanting to live alone so I could starve without anyone noticing..
Beautiful write.
July 23rd, 2024 20:07
All by my own (how i like it)
sorenbarrett said:
Sad, a need for reassurance and safety. When the opinion of others means more than one\'s own well being there is a need for change.
July 23rd, 2024 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Sad, a need for reassurance and safety. When the opinion of others means more than one\'s own well being there is a need for change.
July 23rd, 2024 06:09
Awkward (and queer)
sorenbarrett said:
This touches close to home because many including me remember in our teen years we felt somewhat this way. You\'ve touched a common chord and that is what poetry is all about.
July 22nd, 2024 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
This touches close to home because many including me remember in our teen years we felt somewhat this way. You\'ve touched a common chord and that is what poetry is all about.
July 22nd, 2024 05:13
Awkward (and queer)
aDarkerMind said:
touching indeed.
but, fight we must.
if we don\'t fight, what chance do we have?
July 21st, 2024 11:40
aDarkerMind said:
touching indeed.
but, fight we must.
if we don\'t fight, what chance do we have?
July 21st, 2024 11:40
Awkward (and queer)
Thad Wilk said:
A really touching and
melancholy write! ✍️
Really pulls on
the heartstrings. 😢
Thanks for sharing,
don\'t give up the fight!
Best wishes 🤗 🌹. Thad
July 20th, 2024 21:30
Thad Wilk said:
A really touching and
melancholy write! ✍️
Really pulls on
the heartstrings. 😢
Thanks for sharing,
don\'t give up the fight!
Best wishes 🤗 🌹. Thad
July 20th, 2024 21:30
Romance is made up! (I swear to god!)
Bloodbat_Workshop said:
This is well written
July 19th, 2024 10:42
Bloodbat_Workshop said:
This is well written
July 19th, 2024 10:42
What\'s your story, Morning glory?
Doggerel Dave said:
Not too crazy, not too whiny - By the time you hit mid twenties it will all be a distant memory. Hang in there - it may seem a long time, but it will go too fast. Good luck.
July 15th, 2024 17:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Not too crazy, not too whiny - By the time you hit mid twenties it will all be a distant memory. Hang in there - it may seem a long time, but it will go too fast. Good luck.
July 15th, 2024 17:26
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