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Bobby O said:

Dedication and commitment of pure mission. Nice write. Good read

July 7th, 2023 17:56

The poisonous time
Soman Ragavan said:

My comments on the poem \"The poisonous time” by Hopeless lover

This seven-line poem is full of doom, of gloom, of despair. From despondency, the poet wishes that night never ends. Dawn and light bring hope, but this poet wished darkness to remain. This can only come from someone who is in despair. He says that, with daylight, life’s cruelty against him starts anew. His life is like a poison with unknown effects. It encompasses both love and hate, what is good and what is bad.

It is fate that has decided what the poet should go through : his life is one of plight. His journeying is without rest and it is beset with fear. What is the use for the sun to rise if it brings no good for this man ? Let the sun never rise again. Thus, the march of time will be stopped, for with the time’s march the man’s agony is perpetuated.

In this life, both joy and sorrow exist side by side. They are joined forever. Thus, one does not exist without the other. Perhaps one brings up the other. In despair, with no remedy in sight, the poet wishes to drink some poison that would relieve him of this torture, this misery. What a sad poem…
Soman Ragavan. 27 June, 2023. //
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June 27th, 2023 07:32

A dream from above
peto said:

Welcome hopeless
Enjoyed this clever debut
Never give up on the dream
Look forward to reading more

June 24th, 2023 13:04