Comments received on poems by ekh



A twisted game we play
Pop64 said:

I can really empathize with this piece, as it returns me to my younger (teen) days. It is a very good write, well conveyed meaning. My only suggestion would be to change, \"I know she has a boyfriend, but\" to \"I know you have a boyfriend, but\", but otherwise a terrific write.

October 2nd, 2023 10:09

Alive
Lorenz said:

Only the leaving express their pains .
The dead too..But we only hear their sepulchral silence .

September 15th, 2023 10:25

Alive
BlessedbyGod said:

It is great to be a good person,
God light is shining into you and reflecting His love on everything and everyone you come across, you are truly blessed dear

September 15th, 2023 09:40

Lillies
Pop64 said:

Very clear and pretty imagery in this flowing read.

July 13th, 2023 09:39

That girl
Bobby O said:

That hits me hard and brings a tear to my eye. I will not offer words that could only be trite in face of that powerful reality but please know that I feel deep from afar and wish I could slide at least a tiny bit of that pain away

June 30th, 2023 10:34

I hate
Garth Rakumakoe said:

This piece says it all breaks it all down into edible pieces, the reality of true love. Well written. Kudo to you, gifted one! 🙏🏼

June 29th, 2023 15:14

I hate
peto said:

You have a style of writing that allows a nice flow for the reader
Another good read

June 28th, 2023 12:21

Is it wrong?
peto said:

Doesn\'t sound wrong to me
Welcome
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
As I did \"us\"
Look forward to reading more from you

June 26th, 2023 12:03