Comments received on poems by CaitlinKCarter
Letting Go
Bobby O said:
The loop and the act and the polite charade that you describe illuminates the tender walk we must negotiate through life. Nice job. I enjoyed.
July 7th, 2023 17:55
Bobby O said:
The loop and the act and the polite charade that you describe illuminates the tender walk we must negotiate through life. Nice job. I enjoyed.
July 7th, 2023 17:55
Letting Go
peto said:
Drinking in these circumstances is like pouring petrol in an already raging fire
I couldn\'t handle it myself so had to give it up
The \"talking \" line was interesting
If that isnt working for them it still could for you
Or perhaps do your talking here
Good writing such as this isnt easy
Keep at it
July 7th, 2023 13:23
peto said:
Drinking in these circumstances is like pouring petrol in an already raging fire
I couldn\'t handle it myself so had to give it up
The \"talking \" line was interesting
If that isnt working for them it still could for you
Or perhaps do your talking here
Good writing such as this isnt easy
Keep at it
July 7th, 2023 13:23
The Neighbor
Parisab said:
I see the dark character described in a comical manner, skillfully. Fun read!
June 26th, 2023 21:17
Parisab said:
I see the dark character described in a comical manner, skillfully. Fun read!
June 26th, 2023 21:17
