Comments received on poems by peal
So now you care
Jeffrey Weese said:
Your poem \"So now you care\" struck a chord deep within me, leaving me with a lump in my throat by the end of the first verse. Its raw power and heartbreaking sincerity resonated with my own experiences of holding my chin high, only to lower it in fear and shame.
The imagery of the \"unwanted puzzle piece\" and the poignant repetition of \"So now you care\" encapsulated feelings that I\'ve felt myself. I want to tell you to hold your chin high and be proud of who you are. Be strong, be courageous, even though I know it\'s a struggle I\'ve faced myself.
Your words are a testament to your talent and your ability to tap into universal emotions. Please continue to share your voice with the world. Your words have touched me, and I\'m sure they will touch many others.
August 1st, 2023 10:06
Jeffrey Weese said:
Your poem \"So now you care\" struck a chord deep within me, leaving me with a lump in my throat by the end of the first verse. Its raw power and heartbreaking sincerity resonated with my own experiences of holding my chin high, only to lower it in fear and shame.
The imagery of the \"unwanted puzzle piece\" and the poignant repetition of \"So now you care\" encapsulated feelings that I\'ve felt myself. I want to tell you to hold your chin high and be proud of who you are. Be strong, be courageous, even though I know it\'s a struggle I\'ve faced myself.
Your words are a testament to your talent and your ability to tap into universal emotions. Please continue to share your voice with the world. Your words have touched me, and I\'m sure they will touch many others.
August 1st, 2023 10:06
I tried, but I give up
L. B. Mek said:
really well written
I like the duality in your poetic voice
and a subject, most can relate to
thanks for sharing
July 17th, 2023 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
really well written
I like the duality in your poetic voice
and a subject, most can relate to
thanks for sharing
July 17th, 2023 04:47
I don\'t know what to say, I\'m sorry...
peal said:
Just to be clear it\'s just a poem, it has no real meaning
July 16th, 2023 15:46
peal said:
Just to be clear it\'s just a poem, it has no real meaning
July 16th, 2023 15:46
I don\'t know what to say, I\'m sorry...
peto said:
There is a line in a fav song of mine
\" stop apologising for the things you never done\"
Cant help feel your blaming yourself
Apology now made
Keep that pen handy
Welcome
June 29th, 2023 08:44
peto said:
There is a line in a fav song of mine
\" stop apologising for the things you never done\"
Cant help feel your blaming yourself
Apology now made
Keep that pen handy
Welcome
June 29th, 2023 08:44