Comments received on poems by -Iris-
Monster on my heels
L. B. Mek said:
\'The monster doesn\'t play fair\'
no, it definitely does not
using our own weakness\' and fears
to bully us into mindsets
and choices, we will soon regret
(such a relatable write, thanks for sharing)
July 17th, 2023 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'The monster doesn\'t play fair\'
no, it definitely does not
using our own weakness\' and fears
to bully us into mindsets
and choices, we will soon regret
(such a relatable write, thanks for sharing)
July 17th, 2023 05:06
Moonlit Duality
peto said:
Welcome
Fantastic debut
Rhyme flow and content all spot on
Look forward to reading more
July 8th, 2023 14:46
peto said:
Welcome
Fantastic debut
Rhyme flow and content all spot on
Look forward to reading more
July 8th, 2023 14:46
Moonlit Duality
Caring dove said:
I really like your poem 🙂
It’s interesting and very nice way with words I also like the questions throughout this and the mention of the sun and moon
A great writing )
July 8th, 2023 13:46
Caring dove said:
I really like your poem 🙂
It’s interesting and very nice way with words I also like the questions throughout this and the mention of the sun and moon
A great writing )
July 8th, 2023 13:46