Comments received on poems by abpoet18

Spring Girl/ His Own
Ivory said:

I really enjoyed this. Very good piece.

March 8th, 2018 18:43

Every Moment
Caherine N. C. said:

Oh my! I absolutely loved this! Good job.

February 22nd, 2018 12:15

less than 3 thoughts
dusk arising said:

Yep love is all there is sir! Bit worried about life being a fraud though. But it sure enough is a mixed up confusing thing when you love something you cant kiss.
Good one.

January 28th, 2018 12:54

Merged Souls
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 20th, 2018 12:38

Moth Without The Flame
yellowrose said:

i love how you speak of the angel of my soul , and the pretty moth which will never get burned ... this is quite lovely :-) and lovely beat to thie piece

January 20th, 2018 11:09

Purple Information
yellowrose said:

interesting writing . \'\' the information turns purple and loses its breath every time \'\' i love this line ! :-)

January 20th, 2018 11:03

On The Moon
yellowrose said:

such great expression ! :-) i love the reference to the fire dragon and the last line .. \'\'you had me at hello \'\' this is sweet ..

January 20th, 2018 10:58

Merged Souls
yellowrose said:

\'\' kissing is like breaking depression in half \'\' this is a very good starting line , and certainly made me want to continue on and read the rest .. very unique

January 20th, 2018 10:54

Merged Souls
yellowrose said:

brilliant! amazing piece of writing .. some very good wording here .. really enjoyed reading this and the last line .. so utterly true .. \'\' its the binding of two souls \'\' certainly it is unless ofcourse no emotion is involved and its just plain sex ..

January 20th, 2018 10:52

To The Stars
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January 18th, 2018 11:29

Jooles said:

Loved this

January 14th, 2018 15:37

Tony36 said:

Great write

January 14th, 2018 13:15

Tony36 said:

Great write

January 2nd, 2018 13:40

Beautiful Eyes IV
LeashaBear56 said:

I love this, this is an amazing contrast between telling and story and poetry. I think you did a wonderful job writing this, it really pulls heart strings for me.

December 7th, 2017 16:29

This Is So Nice
Joseph M Marion said:

Vary good live it

October 7th, 2017 14:37

This Is So Nice
DeviLove said:

Woah, this is really deep! I love it!

October 7th, 2017 11:48

No Clarity In Love
Simple-Man87 said:

This was really well written. Great job man.

September 19th, 2017 15:25

No Clarity In Love
Rose_xo said:

This is amazing, really well written.

September 19th, 2017 12:17

Beauty Described Pt.3
Seek said:

You highlight issues of social currency with a unique style. Enjoyed reading this. Was this composed as a song? Just curious. I\'m a newcomer to poetry compared to some more seasoned writers here. Thanks for sharing.

September 4th, 2017 19:48

Beauty Described Pt.3
lanaevans said:

I really like your poetic style. This is a great poem!

September 4th, 2017 14:46

On The Moon
Egyptianqt79 said:

Love this

August 30th, 2017 14:48

On The Moon
Simple-Man87 said:

Really well written. Thank you for sharing.

August 30th, 2017 14:14

On The Moon
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 30th, 2017 10:24

Tell Somebody Plz
Candlewitch said:


this would make for some excellent lyrics!!! keep up the great work!

*hugs, Cat

August 27th, 2017 12:46

Darkness Falls #3
Sara Storkson said:

I absolutely love your style!! Please keep writing.

August 20th, 2017 12:25

gina~ said:

I love the flow of your words, keep writing!

August 10th, 2017 09:55

Random Thoughts #1
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 8th, 2017 13:22

Nick_Langford said:

I really enjoyed this write. The \"situation, with another situation\" certainly speaks of how different problems can interact and intensify others. You write with a seasoned insight that is certainly worthy of defending, so the next generation can better handle all life brings. Thank you for sharing this.

August 3rd, 2017 13:05

Bye #2
NaomiRayne said:

Sounds like you have a story, this reminds me a lot of how my friend feels. I think he\'ll really like reading this, it\'s a good thing your turning to poetry

July 25th, 2017 20:13

Bye #2
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 25th, 2017 11:24

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