Comments received on poems by abpoet18
Every Moment
Caherine N. C. said:
Oh my! I absolutely loved this! Good job.
February 22nd, 2018 12:15
Caherine N. C. said:
Oh my! I absolutely loved this! Good job.
February 22nd, 2018 12:15
less than 3 thoughts
dusk arising said:
Yep love is all there is sir! Bit worried about life being a fraud though. But it sure enough is a mixed up confusing thing when you love something you cant kiss.
Good one.
January 28th, 2018 12:54
dusk arising said:
Yep love is all there is sir! Bit worried about life being a fraud though. But it sure enough is a mixed up confusing thing when you love something you cant kiss.
Good one.
January 28th, 2018 12:54
Moth Without The Flame
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i love how you speak of the angel of my soul , and the pretty moth which will never get burned ... this is quite lovely :-) and lovely beat to thie piece
January 20th, 2018 11:09
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i love how you speak of the angel of my soul , and the pretty moth which will never get burned ... this is quite lovely :-) and lovely beat to thie piece
January 20th, 2018 11:09
Purple Information
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting writing . \'\' the information turns purple and loses its breath every time \'\' i love this line ! :-)
January 20th, 2018 11:03
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting writing . \'\' the information turns purple and loses its breath every time \'\' i love this line ! :-)
January 20th, 2018 11:03
On The Moon
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
such great expression ! :-) i love the reference to the fire dragon and the last line .. \'\'you had me at hello \'\' this is sweet ..
January 20th, 2018 10:58
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
such great expression ! :-) i love the reference to the fire dragon and the last line .. \'\'you had me at hello \'\' this is sweet ..
January 20th, 2018 10:58
Merged Souls
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
\'\' kissing is like breaking depression in half \'\' this is a very good starting line , and certainly made me want to continue on and read the rest .. very unique
January 20th, 2018 10:54
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
\'\' kissing is like breaking depression in half \'\' this is a very good starting line , and certainly made me want to continue on and read the rest .. very unique
January 20th, 2018 10:54
Merged Souls
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
brilliant! amazing piece of writing .. some very good wording here .. really enjoyed reading this and the last line .. so utterly true .. \'\' its the binding of two souls \'\' certainly it is unless ofcourse no emotion is involved and its just plain sex ..
January 20th, 2018 10:52
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
brilliant! amazing piece of writing .. some very good wording here .. really enjoyed reading this and the last line .. so utterly true .. \'\' its the binding of two souls \'\' certainly it is unless ofcourse no emotion is involved and its just plain sex ..
January 20th, 2018 10:52
Beautiful Eyes IV
LeashaBear56 said:
I love this, this is an amazing contrast between telling and story and poetry. I think you did a wonderful job writing this, it really pulls heart strings for me.
December 7th, 2017 16:29
LeashaBear56 said:
I love this, this is an amazing contrast between telling and story and poetry. I think you did a wonderful job writing this, it really pulls heart strings for me.
December 7th, 2017 16:29
No Clarity In Love
Simple-Man87 said:
This was really well written. Great job man.
September 19th, 2017 15:25
Simple-Man87 said:
This was really well written. Great job man.
September 19th, 2017 15:25
Beauty Described Pt.3
Seek said:
You highlight issues of social currency with a unique style. Enjoyed reading this. Was this composed as a song? Just curious. I\'m a newcomer to poetry compared to some more seasoned writers here. Thanks for sharing.
September 4th, 2017 19:48
Seek said:
You highlight issues of social currency with a unique style. Enjoyed reading this. Was this composed as a song? Just curious. I\'m a newcomer to poetry compared to some more seasoned writers here. Thanks for sharing.
September 4th, 2017 19:48
Beauty Described Pt.3
lanaevans said:
I really like your poetic style. This is a great poem!
September 4th, 2017 14:46
lanaevans said:
I really like your poetic style. This is a great poem!
September 4th, 2017 14:46
Darkness Falls #3
Sara Storkson said:
I absolutely love your style!! Please keep writing.
August 20th, 2017 12:25
Sara Storkson said:
I absolutely love your style!! Please keep writing.
August 20th, 2017 12:25
Defend
Nicholas M. Langford said:
I really enjoyed this write. The \"situation, with another situation\" certainly speaks of how different problems can interact and intensify others. You write with a seasoned insight that is certainly worthy of defending, so the next generation can better handle all life brings. Thank you for sharing this.
August 3rd, 2017 13:05
Nicholas M. Langford said:
I really enjoyed this write. The \"situation, with another situation\" certainly speaks of how different problems can interact and intensify others. You write with a seasoned insight that is certainly worthy of defending, so the next generation can better handle all life brings. Thank you for sharing this.
August 3rd, 2017 13:05
Bye #2
NaomiRayne said:
Sounds like you have a story, this reminds me a lot of how my friend feels. I think he\'ll really like reading this, it\'s a good thing your turning to poetry
July 25th, 2017 20:13
NaomiRayne said:
Sounds like you have a story, this reminds me a lot of how my friend feels. I think he\'ll really like reading this, it\'s a good thing your turning to poetry
July 25th, 2017 20:13
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