Comments received on poems by Framed Mirror
Coloured poem
sorenbarrett said:
A very short poem, but conveys a powerful message. Very nicely written.
September 7th, 2024 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
A very short poem, but conveys a powerful message. Very nicely written.
September 7th, 2024 07:34
Late arrival
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful lines great images in what seems a metaphor for age but if literal a great representation of the seasons. Nicely done
August 31st, 2024 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful lines great images in what seems a metaphor for age but if literal a great representation of the seasons. Nicely done
August 31st, 2024 09:39
Withered
sorenbarrett said:
A puzzle in metaphor this poem reads well and is enigmatic
August 24th, 2024 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
A puzzle in metaphor this poem reads well and is enigmatic
August 24th, 2024 09:32
Abraham’s Dream: Our Future
sorenbarrett said:
Reassuring words nicely written from one of faith. Lovely
August 19th, 2024 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
Reassuring words nicely written from one of faith. Lovely
August 19th, 2024 05:49
Fireflies
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded this evokes emotions accompanying past memories from a privative origin. Fire and community go way back and seem archetypal in nature. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely worded this evokes emotions accompanying past memories from a privative origin. Fire and community go way back and seem archetypal in nature. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 06:16
Mulberry Paints
sorenbarrett said:
Classical in nature this poem carries its message to the grave for many. Yet for those that know the story it holds great meaning. Nicely done.
August 3rd, 2024 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
Classical in nature this poem carries its message to the grave for many. Yet for those that know the story it holds great meaning. Nicely done.
August 3rd, 2024 06:11
Dark Arts
sorenbarrett said:
Messages in words to be heard sifted and sorted setting gossip aside. Nicely done.
August 2nd, 2024 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Messages in words to be heard sifted and sorted setting gossip aside. Nicely done.
August 2nd, 2024 05:47
An hour before a vintage midnight!
sorenbarrett said:
The bud of a flower can be beautiful in its youth but needs to bloom to show its full beauty. Loved this short but deep poem. Nicely done
August 1st, 2024 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
The bud of a flower can be beautiful in its youth but needs to bloom to show its full beauty. Loved this short but deep poem. Nicely done
August 1st, 2024 05:25
Lanterns
sorenbarrett said:
A not only beautifully imaged write but metaphorically deep in meaning. This is so well done in its pacing and rhythm drawing one on like the beat of a drum. Could we all be \"the child that forgot the other end\"?
July 26th, 2024 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
A not only beautifully imaged write but metaphorically deep in meaning. This is so well done in its pacing and rhythm drawing one on like the beat of a drum. Could we all be \"the child that forgot the other end\"?
July 26th, 2024 05:39
A Walk with the Hourglass
sorenbarrett said:
Fragments, shards of images scattered, pieced together by the reader into a picture greater than the sum of the parts.
July 23rd, 2024 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
Fragments, shards of images scattered, pieced together by the reader into a picture greater than the sum of the parts.
July 23rd, 2024 06:07
