Comments received on poems by stephwrites

Forbidden Love
Doggerel Dave said:

Have you just confessed that you are responsible for climate change and all the other troubles that inflict the world?😀

September 12th, 2023 19:20

Forbidden Love
Pop64 said:

Quite a symbolic and most provocative write. Exudes imagery!

September 12th, 2023 08:08

Growing up
poetryismusic said:

Great job, you\'ve made me cry with just a few sentences. That\'s how you know the author is good. :) Keep up the good work.

August 7th, 2023 13:44

The sun will shine again tomorrow
poetryismusic said:

I feel this poem. Thanks for writing it, it helped. :)

August 7th, 2023 13:40

The unhelped helping hand
shruti14 said:

Wow. It\'s just amazing to read and quite relatable to me.

August 4th, 2023 07:20

The unhelped helping hand
L. B. Mek said:

it\'s so hard
in you is a light of empathetic goodness
you feel only natural to share with the world..;
and yet
every time you need a helping hand
the world teaches you just how cruel it can be...
tells you
only the cruel thrive in this world
a few of us, find strength enough to prevail
to be who we are, and not
what the world wants us to be
eventually, we\'re granted a chance
to find others like us
and have our kindness be rewarded
until then, it\'s a tough lonely journey
stay strong! choose your people carefully
thanks for sharing

August 4th, 2023 06:39

LIZ said:

This is so deep. As I read it, I was screaming in my head. Loving the undertone. Bravo!! 👏

August 2nd, 2023 13:06

Growing up
jarcher54 said:

You made this old man cry! Success!! More please!

August 2nd, 2023 12:38

orchidee said:

I never knew I was so uncaring to ya! lol.

August 2nd, 2023 12:31

peto said:

Brilliant writing
Read a few times already
Very raw from a talented pen

August 2nd, 2023 12:26

Growing up
peto said:

Superb write
The grass is always greener on the other side came to mind
Thoroughly enjoyed

August 2nd, 2023 05:40

Growing up
shruti14 said:

Awesome. I can relate to this story, As a little girl we used to be eager to grow up but then as we become womanhood the responsibility and dealing with society becomes difficult for us.

August 1st, 2023 12:07

Growing up
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August 1st, 2023 06:39