Comments received on poems by stephwrites
Forbidden Love
Doggerel Dave said:
Have you just confessed that you are responsible for climate change and all the other troubles that inflict the world?😀
September 12th, 2023 19:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Have you just confessed that you are responsible for climate change and all the other troubles that inflict the world?😀
September 12th, 2023 19:20
Forbidden Love
Pop64 said:
Quite a symbolic and most provocative write. Exudes imagery!
September 12th, 2023 08:08
Pop64 said:
Quite a symbolic and most provocative write. Exudes imagery!
September 12th, 2023 08:08
Growing up
poetryismusic said:
Great job, you\'ve made me cry with just a few sentences. That\'s how you know the author is good. :) Keep up the good work.
August 7th, 2023 13:44
poetryismusic said:
Great job, you\'ve made me cry with just a few sentences. That\'s how you know the author is good. :) Keep up the good work.
August 7th, 2023 13:44
The sun will shine again tomorrow
poetryismusic said:
I feel this poem. Thanks for writing it, it helped. :)
August 7th, 2023 13:40
poetryismusic said:
I feel this poem. Thanks for writing it, it helped. :)
August 7th, 2023 13:40
The unhelped helping hand
shruti14 said:
Wow. It\'s just amazing to read and quite relatable to me.
August 4th, 2023 07:20
shruti14 said:
Wow. It\'s just amazing to read and quite relatable to me.
August 4th, 2023 07:20
The unhelped helping hand
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s so hard
in you is a light of empathetic goodness
you feel only natural to share with the world..;
and yet
every time you need a helping hand
the world teaches you just how cruel it can be...
tells you
only the cruel thrive in this world
but
a few of us, find strength enough to prevail
to be who we are, and not
what the world wants us to be
eventually, we\'re granted a chance
to find others like us
and have our kindness be rewarded
until then, it\'s a tough lonely journey
stay strong! choose your people carefully
thanks for sharing
August 4th, 2023 06:39
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s so hard
in you is a light of empathetic goodness
you feel only natural to share with the world..;
and yet
every time you need a helping hand
the world teaches you just how cruel it can be...
tells you
only the cruel thrive in this world
but
a few of us, find strength enough to prevail
to be who we are, and not
what the world wants us to be
eventually, we\'re granted a chance
to find others like us
and have our kindness be rewarded
until then, it\'s a tough lonely journey
stay strong! choose your people carefully
thanks for sharing
August 4th, 2023 06:39
Objectification
LIZ said:
This is so deep. As I read it, I was screaming in my head. Loving the undertone. Bravo!! 👏
August 2nd, 2023 13:06
LIZ said:
This is so deep. As I read it, I was screaming in my head. Loving the undertone. Bravo!! 👏
August 2nd, 2023 13:06
Objectification
peto said:
Brilliant writing
Read a few times already
Very raw from a talented pen
August 2nd, 2023 12:26
peto said:
Brilliant writing
Read a few times already
Very raw from a talented pen
August 2nd, 2023 12:26
Growing up
peto said:
Superb write
The grass is always greener on the other side came to mind
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 2nd, 2023 05:40
peto said:
Superb write
The grass is always greener on the other side came to mind
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 2nd, 2023 05:40
Growing up
shruti14 said:
Awesome. I can relate to this story, As a little girl we used to be eager to grow up but then as we become womanhood the responsibility and dealing with society becomes difficult for us.
August 1st, 2023 12:07
shruti14 said:
Awesome. I can relate to this story, As a little girl we used to be eager to grow up but then as we become womanhood the responsibility and dealing with society becomes difficult for us.
August 1st, 2023 12:07
