Comments received on poems by DREEK0
Fault in loyalty
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write nicely expressed around the pain caused and journey to forgiveness, which has to start with ones self, well written
May 27th, 2025 10:27
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write nicely expressed around the pain caused and journey to forgiveness, which has to start with ones self, well written
May 27th, 2025 10:27
Fault in loyalty
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem that speaks of pain and forgiveness. Forgiveness eases the pain of the one who forgives and clears their road. One must first forgive oneself. A lovely poem
May 27th, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem that speaks of pain and forgiveness. Forgiveness eases the pain of the one who forgives and clears their road. One must first forgive oneself. A lovely poem
May 27th, 2025 08:43
Hiding in the light
sorenbarrett said:
A few plays on words with rhyme plant deeper thoughts in the mind of the reader. Nicely done
May 20th, 2025 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
A few plays on words with rhyme plant deeper thoughts in the mind of the reader. Nicely done
May 20th, 2025 12:45
Come Get Some
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of standing in defiance to someone and challenging them to bring it on if they want to, well written write
April 12th, 2025 04:38
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of standing in defiance to someone and challenging them to bring it on if they want to, well written write
April 12th, 2025 04:38
Come Get Some
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of challenge and a feeling of defiance. Nicely worded.
April 12th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of challenge and a feeling of defiance. Nicely worded.
April 12th, 2025 04:35
All Mine
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the puzzle in this poem to identify the narrator. Memory, desire, or another. A fun and lovely write
March 22nd, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the puzzle in this poem to identify the narrator. Memory, desire, or another. A fun and lovely write
March 22nd, 2025 05:40
Creative Expressions
Poetic Licence said:
Creative and clever piece of writing, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 06:44
Poetic Licence said:
Creative and clever piece of writing, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 06:44
Creative Expressions
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme in this poem reinforced the beat of the meter. Nicely done
March 5th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme in this poem reinforced the beat of the meter. Nicely done
March 5th, 2025 05:42
The womb of all
arqios said:
Enmeshed and brooding, mysterious in the shadows.
February 19th, 2025 16:19
arqios said:
Enmeshed and brooding, mysterious in the shadows.
February 19th, 2025 16:19
The womb of all
sorenbarrett said:
Intriguing metaphors here that lead to an untangling of meaning. Nicely done
February 19th, 2025 15:25
sorenbarrett said:
Intriguing metaphors here that lead to an untangling of meaning. Nicely done
February 19th, 2025 15:25
He who is
2781 said:
for when thy judgements are in the earth, the inhabitants of the world will learn righteousness.\"
October 31st, 2024 06:43
2781 said:
for when thy judgements are in the earth, the inhabitants of the world will learn righteousness.\"
October 31st, 2024 06:43
Will of learning faith
sorenbarrett said:
A nice read about faith in oneself. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 20:17
sorenbarrett said:
A nice read about faith in oneself. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 20:17
I Remember
sorenbarrett said:
Questions about questions in a world without answers. Philosophical in nature a fun read
July 30th, 2024 19:28
sorenbarrett said:
Questions about questions in a world without answers. Philosophical in nature a fun read
July 30th, 2024 19:28
Incoming Tones
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, even sexual this poem goes deeper, deeper. Most interesting.
July 27th, 2024 20:47
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, even sexual this poem goes deeper, deeper. Most interesting.
July 27th, 2024 20:47
Chosen
Parisab said:
Keep the ‘torch’ in your ‘core’ burning-if it guides you to ‘service’ please don’t resist and let the haters go-glad you are publishing here again-I just had a musical inspiration from one of the gems, Miss Etta James, you are welcome to visit the poem, if you like her music as well…
September 23rd, 2023 17:12
Parisab said:
Keep the ‘torch’ in your ‘core’ burning-if it guides you to ‘service’ please don’t resist and let the haters go-glad you are publishing here again-I just had a musical inspiration from one of the gems, Miss Etta James, you are welcome to visit the poem, if you like her music as well…
September 23rd, 2023 17:12
Picture perfect
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but there are so many mistakes I don\'t know what it means.I guess I\'m too dumb to understand it
September 8th, 2023 15:55
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but there are so many mistakes I don\'t know what it means.I guess I\'m too dumb to understand it
September 8th, 2023 15:55
Burn me better
Eugene S. said:
Such subtle language and verse that paints a vivid picture. A delicate truth is portrayed in your words. Ashes are so hard to grasp, to hold...
September 4th, 2023 07:25
Eugene S. said:
Such subtle language and verse that paints a vivid picture. A delicate truth is portrayed in your words. Ashes are so hard to grasp, to hold...
September 4th, 2023 07:25
Harmonic exchange
LIZ said:
\"How would you know if you never followed your own voice\"- What a line!!!! More than the poem, I connected with the video. You just slapped me with \"NEED\" as it\'s used. Because you\'re right, it can limit the power of manifestation, as we\'re basically contradicting ourselves. We can only attract what we are! Words are definitely important! My favorite saying is \"you can\'t give what you don\'t have \"! Thank you for the lesson!
September 3rd, 2023 04:44
LIZ said:
\"How would you know if you never followed your own voice\"- What a line!!!! More than the poem, I connected with the video. You just slapped me with \"NEED\" as it\'s used. Because you\'re right, it can limit the power of manifestation, as we\'re basically contradicting ourselves. We can only attract what we are! Words are definitely important! My favorite saying is \"you can\'t give what you don\'t have \"! Thank you for the lesson!
September 3rd, 2023 04:44
BOY
DREEK0 said:
Thankyou, for your thoughts and appreciation, poems such as this and \"IM COOL\" are a part of me, the pain Is raw, and the suffering is elevated, nicely put.
August 26th, 2023 14:41
DREEK0 said:
Thankyou, for your thoughts and appreciation, poems such as this and \"IM COOL\" are a part of me, the pain Is raw, and the suffering is elevated, nicely put.
August 26th, 2023 14:41
BOY
Parisab said:
‘his life is a tragic piece of art’
He is so beautiful, the Boy,
his trauma, only a painful distraction, from his brilliance as the diamond (in the rough.)
This work made my heart skip a beat, not only for its rawness and pain, but for its elevated suffering ….
August 25th, 2023 21:30
Parisab said:
‘his life is a tragic piece of art’
He is so beautiful, the Boy,
his trauma, only a painful distraction, from his brilliance as the diamond (in the rough.)
This work made my heart skip a beat, not only for its rawness and pain, but for its elevated suffering ….
August 25th, 2023 21:30
Stop Complaining
LIZ said:
Right? Here we go again!!! Loved the flow here! Thank you for sharing!
August 25th, 2023 06:39
LIZ said:
Right? Here we go again!!! Loved the flow here! Thank you for sharing!
August 25th, 2023 06:39
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