Comments received on poems by DREEK0
Chosen
Parisab said:
Keep the ‘torch’ in your ‘core’ burning-if it guides you to ‘service’ please don’t resist and let the haters go-glad you are publishing here again-I just had a musical inspiration from one of the gems, Miss Etta James, you are welcome to visit the poem, if you like her music as well…
September 23rd, 2023 17:12
Parisab said:
Keep the ‘torch’ in your ‘core’ burning-if it guides you to ‘service’ please don’t resist and let the haters go-glad you are publishing here again-I just had a musical inspiration from one of the gems, Miss Etta James, you are welcome to visit the poem, if you like her music as well…
September 23rd, 2023 17:12
Picture perfect
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but there are so many mistakes I don\'t know what it means.I guess I\'m too dumb to understand it
September 8th, 2023 15:55
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but there are so many mistakes I don\'t know what it means.I guess I\'m too dumb to understand it
September 8th, 2023 15:55
Burn me better
Eugene S. said:
Such subtle language and verse that paints a vivid picture. A delicate truth is portrayed in your words. Ashes are so hard to grasp, to hold...
September 4th, 2023 07:25
Eugene S. said:
Such subtle language and verse that paints a vivid picture. A delicate truth is portrayed in your words. Ashes are so hard to grasp, to hold...
September 4th, 2023 07:25
Harmonic exchange
LIZ said:
\"How would you know if you never followed your own voice\"- What a line!!!! More than the poem, I connected with the video. You just slapped me with \"NEED\" as it\'s used. Because you\'re right, it can limit the power of manifestation, as we\'re basically contradicting ourselves. We can only attract what we are! Words are definitely important! My favorite saying is \"you can\'t give what you don\'t have \"! Thank you for the lesson!
September 3rd, 2023 04:44
LIZ said:
\"How would you know if you never followed your own voice\"- What a line!!!! More than the poem, I connected with the video. You just slapped me with \"NEED\" as it\'s used. Because you\'re right, it can limit the power of manifestation, as we\'re basically contradicting ourselves. We can only attract what we are! Words are definitely important! My favorite saying is \"you can\'t give what you don\'t have \"! Thank you for the lesson!
September 3rd, 2023 04:44
BOY
DREEK0 said:
Thankyou, for your thoughts and appreciation, poems such as this and \"IM COOL\" are a part of me, the pain Is raw, and the suffering is elevated, nicely put.
August 26th, 2023 14:41
DREEK0 said:
Thankyou, for your thoughts and appreciation, poems such as this and \"IM COOL\" are a part of me, the pain Is raw, and the suffering is elevated, nicely put.
August 26th, 2023 14:41
BOY
Parisab said:
‘his life is a tragic piece of art’
He is so beautiful, the Boy,
his trauma, only a painful distraction, from his brilliance as the diamond (in the rough.)
This work made my heart skip a beat, not only for its rawness and pain, but for its elevated suffering ….
August 25th, 2023 21:30
Parisab said:
‘his life is a tragic piece of art’
He is so beautiful, the Boy,
his trauma, only a painful distraction, from his brilliance as the diamond (in the rough.)
This work made my heart skip a beat, not only for its rawness and pain, but for its elevated suffering ….
August 25th, 2023 21:30
Stop Complaining
LIZ said:
Right? Here we go again!!! Loved the flow here! Thank you for sharing!
August 25th, 2023 06:39
LIZ said:
Right? Here we go again!!! Loved the flow here! Thank you for sharing!
August 25th, 2023 06:39
I\'m Cool
DREEK0 said:
Cool has calmed more rages than I can count. Thank you I think I wear my badge pretty well😏lol I appreciate your feedback as always
August 19th, 2023 23:47
DREEK0 said:
Cool has calmed more rages than I can count. Thank you I think I wear my badge pretty well😏lol I appreciate your feedback as always
August 19th, 2023 23:47
I\'m Cool
Parisab said:
Cool puts out fires and rage about uncool injustice and non sense-but your brand of cool is your badge of honor, so personal and love the unassuming rhythmic flow, ‘cooler than the howling of the wind’ Props to your dad as well
August 19th, 2023 23:35
Parisab said:
Cool puts out fires and rage about uncool injustice and non sense-but your brand of cool is your badge of honor, so personal and love the unassuming rhythmic flow, ‘cooler than the howling of the wind’ Props to your dad as well
August 19th, 2023 23:35
She is Truth
Parisab said:
How powerful and reflective in the eyes of the beloved…Cool read, yet classic…I listened to the video after and found your take on the lust vs. the connection without ego, refreshing as well…
August 19th, 2023 22:14
Parisab said:
How powerful and reflective in the eyes of the beloved…Cool read, yet classic…I listened to the video after and found your take on the lust vs. the connection without ego, refreshing as well…
August 19th, 2023 22:14
I\'m Cool
2781 said:
I am getting old but I do remember cool. Burns you in the end.
August 9th, 2023 03:14
2781 said:
I am getting old but I do remember cool. Burns you in the end.
August 9th, 2023 03:14
