Comments received on poems by Kudakwashe Muchechemera



Went on a date with a rich girl I
L. B. Mek said:

you met yourself a girl
\'Rich\' at heart, then...
hope it all works out, wish you both the best

September 1st, 2023 04:56

Love is War I
LIZ said:

You know, I like the fact that you acknowledge you were wrong too, and want to work on yourself. It takes courage to admit that. Unfortunately, we don\'t realize what we have until it\'s too late. But, we can learn and make sure we make better decisions next time! Great read!

August 31st, 2023 03:43

Why Though?
L. B. Mek said:

sad to admit
but most of life\'s strife
comes packaged
in human form, I\'ve found..
\'onwards, don\'t let them waste
any more of your precious Time\'
your best, still awaits

August 28th, 2023 04:57

This is not the End
Pop64 said:

While so much is truly inscribed in stone, we have opportunity, by choice to change the tense. Putting things in the past or yet to be. Very thought provoking write.

August 24th, 2023 12:47

This is not the End
orchidee said:

This is the end I\'ve reached, of your fine poem K!

August 24th, 2023 05:33

I Believe In You
Pop64 said:

Your words speak to the recipient of your write with admiration and inspiration. They serve to let the reader of the subject\'s (possibly their own) importance. Personal belief in one\'s self is important but always so wonderful to know that other\'s believe in you too. Well written and conveyed

August 4th, 2023 09:44